Your prompt is the picture above.
and its quote.
(just in case you cant read it): " Do You Know what sin is?
its not eating the fruit of wisdom.
Do you know what sin is?
Its not listening to snake's honey-laced words.
Do You still not know what sin is?
That would be your sin.
-Fredica bernkastal"
I love metaphors, and details.
so really describe or make it meaningful and make me think
I HIGHLY, HIGHLY suggest you read the Manga
http://www.onemanga.com/Higurashi_no_Naku_Koro_ni_-_Onikakushi/
its physiological horror and mystery
its freaking awesome
as it is a part of a set of individual stories.
i personally think that the stories are masterpieces
i am looking for something physiological and something indepth
tho it can be in any style or form and you can enter as much as you want.
so go for it!
~rules~
Make Common sense common
I reserve rights to my rights
label what needs to be labeled
and its quote.
(just in case you cant read it): " Do You Know what sin is?
its not eating the fruit of wisdom.
Do you know what sin is?
Its not listening to snake's honey-laced words.
Do You still not know what sin is?
That would be your sin.
-Fredica bernkastal"
I love metaphors, and details.
so really describe or make it meaningful and make me think
I HIGHLY, HIGHLY suggest you read the Manga
http://www.onemanga.com/Higurashi_no_Naku_Koro_ni_-_Onikakushi/
its physiological horror and mystery
its freaking awesome
as it is a part of a set of individual stories.
i personally think that the stories are masterpieces
i am looking for something physiological and something indepth
tho it can be in any style or form and you can enter as much as you want.
so go for it!
~rules~
Make Common sense common
I reserve rights to my rights
label what needs to be labeled
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 2, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: thank you for trying out my contest hope you got some thing out of it
-kas
Contest Winners
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sugar-spooned falsity
fortifies nothingby raye-xotic 23 lines, 9 comments, on Aug 20 12:33 AM 2008. In Contest, Thoughts
Silver trophy winner
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Thought provoking contest.by Black Narcissus 17 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 20 4:04 AM 2008. In Spiritual, Angst
Bronze trophy winner
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Under a surge of destruction and defeat,
Watching my limbs fall apart from me,by there-goes-my-heart 26 lines, on Sep 19 8:50 PM 2008. In Pain, Spiritual, Thoughts, Sad, Life, Niftylicious• Viewed by judge. [remove] -
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And this, the smell of sin,
open to interpretation,by madgirlslovesong 6 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 19 5:58 PM 2008. In Personal• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
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by SirThug 10 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 1 9:02 PM 2008. In drugs. adult• Viewed by judge.
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Blinded Eyes
Why can't you see?by HystericalHeart 23 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 19 1:19 PM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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again i highly suggest reading the manga/comic
and i would love to see a piece inspired by it -
Sin Is
A matter of misery,
A choice of words,
Who is not a sinner?
We have all made mistakes
And what is sin really?
How is the word defined,
It is only what's in our hearts,
How we feel, what we have done
Who can define such a powerful statement?
Who has the right or power?
It is only within our hearts,
There it will stay until our death
I know that I have sinned,
I don't need a preacher to tell me that,
I've hurt others beyond reproach,
I wish that I could take every remark,
every hurtful thing I have done back
So I am a sinner in my own heart
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