Ok, like the title says I realy need some help pretty please with mellos on top. 
Please write me something that will give me my spark back. (ryming will give you major brownie points! hint hint)
Rules! yes, they are always there
1. Everyone play nice
2. No religion
3. Keep it under 40 lines
ANY RULEBREAKING AND YOU WILL BE DQ! NO EXCEPTIONS!
Hope everyone has fun
Please write me something that will give me my spark back. (ryming will give you major brownie points! hint hint)Rules! yes, they are always there
1. Everyone play nice
2. No religion
3. Keep it under 40 lines
ANY RULEBREAKING AND YOU WILL BE DQ! NO EXCEPTIONS!
Hope everyone has fun
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 25, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Congads to the winners, I had fun with this and hope you did too.
Contest Winners
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Mirror, mirror on the wall
you are the cruelest of them all.by crazymomma 20 lines, 13 comments, on Aug 1 7:03 PM 2008. In Contest, Thoughts
Silver trophy winner
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by toomysterious 29 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 19 10:52 PM 2008. In life, thoughts
Bronze trophy winner
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Gold trophy winner
Entries [28]
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Between bad dreams and the rondevue,
lack of sleep has gotten the best of you.by Charles Johnson 17 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 30 1:54 PM 2008. In Love, children, grandchild, joy, hope, life, thoughts, inspirational• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Dressed in pink and feeling gorgeous,
the tiny girl felt everything but nervous.by misshugglebugglez 24 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 15 11:47 PM 2008. In Dance• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Bereft of faith
And lacking purity• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The rain,
Falling lightly,by xox-emma-xox 17 lines, 31 comments, on Mar 21 10:11 AM 2008. In Life, Nature, Spiritual, Thoughts, Happiness, Inspirational, Contemporary• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Drifting over the frosty throng
Dangles a chilling, icy songby owlish 28 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 17 7:39 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Trip though the pages of my mind
rest my thoughts in an old toy box.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Finally finished. ^^by B.m.w 16 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 23 8:56 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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When inspiration leaves
And darkness takes its placeby kelbornro 36 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 17 9:28 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
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Find youthful thoughts to ponder
within the days of dispairby nevadapoet 21 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 18 12:52 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
In my silent room I write
The passion within me ignites.
Looking at the stars so bright• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
words buried in you
in time just forgotten• Commented on by judge. -
Dim lit stars and saddened smiles,
Sun burnt hearts and heavy times,by Ebbing.X.Discreetly 18 lines, 17 comments, on Aug 16 7:04 PM 2008. In Dark, Thoughts, Sad, Pain, Angst, Life, Solitude, Loneliness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The beauty of the night
Creeps into my skin• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Rushing forward bodily
in factoried steel cageby obsidianrose843 14 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 24 1:16 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Listen closely
To the silenceby AlyshiaRenee.x 15 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 5 7:34 PM 2008. In Suicide, death, sad, emo. dark, . depressing, pain, thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I am blessed
Truly blessed• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Now the seasons always come late
because an hourglass broke its leg.by Raazi 19 lines, 11 comments, on Jan 27 5:49 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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i think i am gonna enter your contest, but i have to check if my pw is under 40 lines... cool contest! just wanna letcha know you spelled inspiration wrong. should be spelled like how i just spelled it. lolz! =D
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thanks, my spelling's pretty bad
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spelled "inspiration"
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thanks, I was already told and changed it
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Can I insult religion??
I always translate "No religion" as nothing that compliments God.
Let me know...
But honestly, even when I have nothing to write...
I actually do have something to write.
It usually happens when a phrase somebody else says or something that just pops in my brain becomes something...my last poem, "Expensive Shit"...I thought my poem initially would be about stuff I couldn't afford, but it morphed into something else entirely... -
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I'm sorry but I wont be allowing that. The reason I post this is many people like you, myself, and others have different view points on religions or personal beliefs, and I hate that every time it gets brought up with ones' who have different backrounds, conflict enters. I hope you understand.
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LoL I was partially kidding.
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