I recently wrote a poem titled "Drain" and although it is short and a bit vague, it is very personal to me. I would like for you to either tell me your own experiences in this area, or to elaborate on mine. I am a doctor and a bit conservative in my views so, please keep swearing to a minimum but do what you have to to get your message across. I really want to see effort in your comments to other applicants. That is VERY important to me. After all, this community is about sharing, and we all need to do that to learn something from this enviornment. Thanks, and best of luck to you all!
Dr. P
Dr. P
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 19, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50
- Final notes: The poem "Drained" was brilliant and was the only one to play off my poem--kudos and you deserved the GOLD--the poem "Faking Smiles..." was hard-core and intense and followed what I wanted for this contest--well DESERVING of the silver--"Drained Emotionally" was intense and overall followed what I wanted for this contest. I congratulate the winners--the TRULY DESERVE IT!!!!!!!!
Contest Winners
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Faking smiles day in and day out
it drains and torture my soul...• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
My heart was drained of love
something that you couldn't give.• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [9]
1 - 9 of 9
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by N.W. Clerk 22 lines, 47 comments, on Jun 22 1:39 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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When we were young and at the start
You were such a sweetheartby FallenEngel 35 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 17 4:37 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Your existence is hard for me to handle
a bunch of dots in ink and memoryby Hungry Joe 17 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 17 4:56 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Never-ceasing days stop
watches in their place;by Jasmine Rayne 41 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 17 12:59 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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