no rhyme!
left align!!
expect critiques, if you don't like them do NOT enter. you do not have to agree with what i say, just respect the fact i have an opinion.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 4, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 800, Silver: 550, Bronze: 300, Honorable mention: 4 people
- Final notes:
Thank you and sorry for the judging delay.
Contest Winners
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by delayedscreening 92 lines, 9 comments, on Aug 22 11:10 AM 2008. In Adult, Personal, Thoughts
Silver trophy winner
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Gold trophy winner
Honorable mention
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by SmileFromGlasgow 17 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 16 10:04 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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There were fractures beneath the quaint seatown’s tidy surface
rhythms of conversation swirling in questions, accusations
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by Age of Rain 41 lines, 9 comments, on Aug 16 10:46 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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Like the bravado beauty
He stalks the canopiesby Anthony- 28 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 16 11:24 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
by Idle Mind Wondering 52 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 17 12:12 AM 2008
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Them eyes of yours
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She came
when the man’s spirit felt emptyby Peteskid 69 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 17 1:36 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
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I'm losing Lisa
and there's nothing I can doby TheSideNote 45 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 19 9:00 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
e dietro le venìa sì lunga tratta
di gente, ch'i' non averei credutoby Hadji Murad 72 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 20 5:12 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
by subliminalj 64 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 24 12:36 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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by the sepia vitamin 62 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 24 10:58 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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I'd love to enter your contest Melissa, but I don't write good poetry that doesn't rhyme. Maybe my rhyme is good either. Good luck with your contest...Katie
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no Bling Bling
no rhyme...damn Mel
and I had this Cracker tribute thing in my head
Eminem or M&M...thingy..with a Cool J ending -
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Eminem is a talented white rapper...against all odds.
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damn my ass.
do hope to see you here stranger.
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I respect your opinions, as long as they don't suck.
I'm sure they don't.
Nice disclaimer...a vague one is nobody's friend
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i like m&m candy
... they took the red dye out a long time ago and then put it back in ,,, against all odds 
.but it just isn't the same 
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i love critiques like i love you
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I really like this idea for a contest! A contest for people who want to have their work critiqued.
Brillaint! I am so going to do one of these someday.
Shalom,
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lots of reading to do
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amazing, i am so honored considering that finalists list. astounding work. congrats to everyone....and just WOW. loves my baby mel
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Thanks! I'm in a writing funk, so it's good to know I don't completely suck when that happens. LOL. Congrats to the other winners. Excellent pieces.
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