So the title kind of summarizes what I want but let me tell a little bit about my situation. I am leaving for college in a couple days and my boyfriend and I are breaking up instead of doing the long distance thing. I love him with all my heart and am slowly falling apart knowing that I can't be with him anymore. So I am in the mood for poems having to deal with a broken heart, lost love, etc...
Rules:
1. Prewrites allowed if they relate
2. I don't want to be bitched at if you can't take criticism. I try to comment on everything because I appreciate your entry.
3. Write what you know, not something you havent personally experienced.
4. Enter something that hasn't already won a trophy. People did not listen to this rule in my last contest. YOU WILL NOT WIN WITH A POEM THAT HAS ALREADY WON SOMETHING, no matter how good it is.
5. Length doesnt matter but if its long and doesnt interest me, I might not be able to finish it, I have a low attention span. Sorry.
Enjoy it.
Make it real.
Points might change.
Rules:
1. Prewrites allowed if they relate
2. I don't want to be bitched at if you can't take criticism. I try to comment on everything because I appreciate your entry.
3. Write what you know, not something you havent personally experienced.
4. Enter something that hasn't already won a trophy. People did not listen to this rule in my last contest. YOU WILL NOT WIN WITH A POEM THAT HAS ALREADY WON SOMETHING, no matter how good it is.
5. Length doesnt matter but if its long and doesnt interest me, I might not be able to finish it, I have a low attention span. Sorry.
Enjoy it.
Make it real.
Points might change.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 22, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: thank you everyone for entering. there was great variety and i appreciated every poem. congrats to the winners. yours really hit me at home.
Contest Winners
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I need you like summer depends on winter.
Like sweet requires savoury.by Candy Morphine 70 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 16 6:24 AM 2008. In Sad, loss, tears, needing you, missing you, Personal, Love, Depression, Loss
Gold trophy winner
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4516347, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 4354409, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Entries [32]
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love
isn't worth itby XxemohatexX 4 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 8 3:44 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i struck a match
it's time for some closure, i told myself• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The only reason I thought living with pain was worth it
Take him away and what do I really have?by Poetic-Goddess 34 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 8 8:46 AM 2005. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Wipe the tears away, you say It is not that hard I swearby EmoAngel 16 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 14 9:58 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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you made up your mind,
i don't think its best,by Philleebee8 22 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 26 9:33 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I reach towards you,
And hit an invisible wall.by EbilyCuteKitte 70 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 15 3:08 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
On this cold night in December
Living free is a dying ember• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
honey, darling, baby?
your words, not mineby Fallen-Phases 24 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 24 10:38 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It's just so hard to leave...
once again in the wind,
blown away from what had gave My Heart a beat.....by CrazyC87 57 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 11 11:04 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The last daisy of the pack,
Mocks me of your beauty.by B.m.w 26 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 10 12:26 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by edit my world. 45 lines, 22 comments, on Jul 14 11:38 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by wonderbandalice 25 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 15 9:53 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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her heart shatters
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by rustynite 60 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 28 10:00 PM 2006• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The more I’m awake my dreams come true.
But with out sleep I can’t invision you.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I stand here numbed by the least expected;
ignorant of your presence• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Its been so long,
since i felt this way.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I am no longer feeling you
this relationship is emptyby Divalicious1 52 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 17 12:11 PM 2008. In Goodbyes• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Don't leave me
Please don't set me loose• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I know all I ever seemed to do was work, and I always seemed so tired.
And that you were stuck home with the kids all day and by the timeby Charles Johnson 52 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 7 1:54 PM 2008. In love, pain, sad, personal, thoughts, life, hurt, marriage, cheater, cheating• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You say we are both in love and stupid,
would that be the fault of Cupid?by Nermin Nazim 22 lines, 11 comments, on Aug 8 12:18 AM 2008. In Life, Love, Angst, Personal, Thoughts, Freewrite, My own style• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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