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Angels Among Us by Alabama
Written by becky hobbs
I was walking home from school on a cold winter day.
Took a shortcut through the woods, and I lost my way.
It was getting late, and I was scared and alone.
But then a kind old man took my hand and led me home.
Mama couldnt see him, but he was standing there.
And I knew in my heart, he was the answer to my prayers.
Chorus
Oh I believe there are angels among us.
Sent down to us from somewhere up above.
They come to you and me in our darkest hours.
To show us how to live, to teach us how to give.
To guide us with a light of love.
When life held troubled times, and had me down on my knees.
Theres always been someone there to come along and comfort me.
A kind word from a stranger, to lend a helping hand.
A phone call from a friend, just to say I understand.
And aint it kind of funny that at the dark end of the road.
Someone lights the way with just a single ray of hope.
Chorus
They wear so many faces, show up in the strangest places.
To guide us with their mercy, in our time of need.
Chorus
To guide us with a light of love.
No more than 20 lines
tell me about your angel
and how he/she has helped you.
Riftkin
There should be no need for
Adult theme with this contest.
It will get you DQ and banned
from all my contests.
Here is the Video
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XHfleTZWAsI
Angels Among Us by Alabama
Written by becky hobbs
I was walking home from school on a cold winter day.
Took a shortcut through the woods, and I lost my way.
It was getting late, and I was scared and alone.
But then a kind old man took my hand and led me home.
Mama couldnt see him, but he was standing there.
And I knew in my heart, he was the answer to my prayers.
Chorus
Oh I believe there are angels among us.
Sent down to us from somewhere up above.
They come to you and me in our darkest hours.
To show us how to live, to teach us how to give.
To guide us with a light of love.
When life held troubled times, and had me down on my knees.
Theres always been someone there to come along and comfort me.
A kind word from a stranger, to lend a helping hand.
A phone call from a friend, just to say I understand.
And aint it kind of funny that at the dark end of the road.
Someone lights the way with just a single ray of hope.
Chorus
They wear so many faces, show up in the strangest places.
To guide us with their mercy, in our time of need.
Chorus
To guide us with a light of love.
No more than 20 lines
tell me about your angel
and how he/she has helped you.
Riftkin
There should be no need for
Adult theme with this contest.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 29, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: Thank you all for making this, one of my hardest contests to judge. And also for sharing with me tales of your Angels...
since they all were so good, I will be holding three more contests for those that did not win here in this contest.
You will be sent an invitation to the contest
for your poem..
Thank you once again.
Riftkin
Contest Winners
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Laying there all broken and riddled with fear
Suddenly a second man all dress in black with a knife appeared
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Watching from on high Mor Aingeal...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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In flight they'll come one day to take you away My darkest Angel,by BrutallyViciousFemme 19 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 13 12:46 PM 2008. In Pain, death
Honorable mention
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There once was a rich man,in days of old
Whatever he touched turned into gold• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
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I may be a fallen angel that has lost my wings but Ill still be your guardian
The keeper of your tender heart, protector of your greatestby Lonely Christina 14 lines, 18 comments, on Jul 19 5:46 PM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Love, Hope, Personal., Romance, Inspirational, Message• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Upon the pages of life
brittle and forgotten a finger liftsby Angelflower 15 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 15 5:30 PM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Weird, Dedication• Commented on by judge. -
Angels On High
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by Bazza 27 lines, 14 comments, on Jul 3 10:32 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My sweet Angel is the extension of heaven,and the foundation of earth,the depths of the seas,and the light of the sun,the beauty of the moo• Commented on by judge.
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It was snowing really hard / the night I was forced to leave home. / I walked to the main road, and started walking towards town / To overcby Cup-a-Joe 21 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 10 1:56 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I saw her smiling
In the quiet morningsby Wall Door Salad 22 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 28 9:59 AM 2008. In Contest, Thoughts, Hope, Friendship• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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please allow prewritten! i have a really good one for this!
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wish granted
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thank yaZ!
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Beloved
In flight they'll come one day to take you away
My darkest Angel,
My precious Ice Queen
They'll hold you up high
For all to see
You're my proud shining moment
Held dear in my heart
All I do wish
As it is a valuable deed
Is the time you might spend
Gracing me with this treasure
One day will be too late
As it already slips away
Sometimes I'll feel anger,
And we know lots of pain
As your cinder slowly fades
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place this as a poem in the contest.. for I love it..
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Thanks, great, I just figured out how to enter. First time so wasn't sure how to!
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Thank you for entering it
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Oh no I have entered the wrong poem, please forgive me and delete Broken!
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wish granted
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Funny enough I have another Angel poem, in fact one of my favourite poems I have written, you should go look on my page.
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beautiful ma...
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