hello all-
thank you to--
wolf for donating 100 points
XXVampireeyesXX for donating 100 points
shortyonwhelz for donating 200 points
SweetXDestiny for donating 1000 points
--to this contest
Month One-
Mommy, I am only 8 inches long, but I have all my organs. I love the sound of
your voice. Every time I hear it, I wave my arms and legs. The sound of your
heart beat is my favorite lullaby.
Month Two-
Mommy, today I learned how to suck my thumb. If you could see me, you could
definitely tell that I am a baby. I'm not big enough to survive outside my home
though. It is so nice and warm in here.
Month Three-
You know what Mommy, I'm a girl!! I hope that makes you happy. I always want
you to be happy. I don't like it when you cry. You sound so sad. It makes me sad
too, and I cry with you even though you can't hear me.
Month Four-
Mommy, my hair is starting to grow. It is very short and fine, but I will have a
lot of it. I spend a lot of my time exercising. I can turn my head and curl my
fingers and toes, and stretch my arms and legs. I am becoming quite good at it
too.
Month Five-
You went to the doctor today. Mommy, he lied to you. He said that I'm not a
baby. I am a baby Mommy, your baby. I think and feel. Mommy, what's abortion?
Month Six-
I can hear that doctor again. I don't like him. He seems cold and heartless.
Something is intruding my home. The doctor called it a needle. Mommy what is it?
It burns! Please make him stop! I can't get away from it! Mommy!! HELP me!! No .
. .
Month Seven-
Mommy, I am okay. I am in Jesus's arms. he is holding me. He told me about abortion. Why didn't you want me Mommy?
in to days age women have choices, a friend that i though i lost i just found. she is pregnet and due in just a few weeks. i would like poems about pragnacy, babys, children... even a poem giving them your blessings.
i believe she is an amazing woman to do this as she is not even 18 yet.
she needs all our love and suport.
rules-
NoNe oF tHiS cRap... I hAtE iT
no cussing
no cutting
no emo
no blood or gore
no bashing
!just plain be nice!
all other aop standerad rules apply
i reserve the right to dq for any reason
HAVE FUN
*i reserve the right to add rules
** points may be added
@#&< ok i decide that since ive already got suce a great turn out im doing big points for gold silver and brons the 3 HM and every one else will be sent 10 points as a ty for entering and all the kindness your showing me and my friend>&#@
thank you to--
wolf for donating 100 points
XXVampireeyesXX for donating 100 points
shortyonwhelz for donating 200 points
SweetXDestiny for donating 1000 points
--to this contest
Month One-
Mommy, I am only 8 inches long, but I have all my organs. I love the sound of
your voice. Every time I hear it, I wave my arms and legs. The sound of your
heart beat is my favorite lullaby.
Month Two-
Mommy, today I learned how to suck my thumb. If you could see me, you could
definitely tell that I am a baby. I'm not big enough to survive outside my home
though. It is so nice and warm in here.
Month Three-
You know what Mommy, I'm a girl!! I hope that makes you happy. I always want
you to be happy. I don't like it when you cry. You sound so sad. It makes me sad
too, and I cry with you even though you can't hear me.
Month Four-
Mommy, my hair is starting to grow. It is very short and fine, but I will have a
lot of it. I spend a lot of my time exercising. I can turn my head and curl my
fingers and toes, and stretch my arms and legs. I am becoming quite good at it
too.
Month Five-
You went to the doctor today. Mommy, he lied to you. He said that I'm not a
baby. I am a baby Mommy, your baby. I think and feel. Mommy, what's abortion?
Month Six-
I can hear that doctor again. I don't like him. He seems cold and heartless.
Something is intruding my home. The doctor called it a needle. Mommy what is it?
It burns! Please make him stop! I can't get away from it! Mommy!! HELP me!! No .
. .
Month Seven-
Mommy, I am okay. I am in Jesus's arms. he is holding me. He told me about abortion. Why didn't you want me Mommy?
in to days age women have choices, a friend that i though i lost i just found. she is pregnet and due in just a few weeks. i would like poems about pragnacy, babys, children... even a poem giving them your blessings.
i believe she is an amazing woman to do this as she is not even 18 yet.
she needs all our love and suport.
rules-
NoNe oF tHiS cRap... I hAtE iT
no cussing
no cutting
no emo
no blood or gore
no bashing
!just plain be nice!
all other aop standerad rules apply
i reserve the right to dq for any reason
HAVE FUN
*i reserve the right to add rules
** points may be added
@#&< ok i decide that since ive already got suce a great turn out im doing big points for gold silver and brons the 3 HM and every one else will be sent 10 points as a ty for entering and all the kindness your showing me and my friend>&#@
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 21, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 800, Silver: 450, Bronze: 240, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: hello all, thank you every one for entering. all of your poems were beautiful. i wish i could give all of you a tropy but i cant, so each the didnt make the top 6 will be sent 10 points.
i am closeing the contest early one because i am not on top of the weather and two because i start my sr years soon and i antisapate i will be reciving lots of home work.
any one that would like to send word to the mother to be feel free to email me and they will be sent along with your poems.
Contest Winners
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My sweet child
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There’s nought so welcome as a summer breeze
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Chosen by an Angel.
There’s a nursery in heaven up in the skyby Lady Ireland 44 lines, 13 comments, on Jul 2 7:52 PM 2005. In Spiritual, Love
Bronze trophy winner
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Who said my belly could have a mind of its own?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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When i heard the news i jumped up and down,
I could'nt keep my feet of the ground,• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
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I have my own personal angel. I call this angel my little man.by alwaysapartofme 30 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 19 11:30 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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internal bond
there are words that are hard to tellby eternalsol 12 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 8 1:49 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Please allow prewritten poems...I have one I think would be perfect. I have a 5 month old son, myself...so, in case you don't allow prewrites, give her my best wishes & tell her to DEFINITELY TAKE THE EPIDURAL!!!!! Those contractions are the WORST!
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its a great contest idea, But.. I can not enter I am in a deep depression, details about it.. i dont even wanna talk about it, but i will be watching and donating a few points for the cause.
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i thought abortion was illegal after the 4th month or so.... and if it isn't it should be
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do not say rude things
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what was akil?
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Akil.?.
I'm working on trying to write a story type thing. Its fantsy wolves and things like that... Akil is just one of the main charries in it... Im posting it as I get it typed out on here, I know I half to go over it again though and fix up old mistakes here and there... I'v kinda grown fond of Akil I guess you could say... -
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thats cool, what i meant was what was sad.
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I thought you ment was was Akil by the way you put the question... I read the poem thing about the baby and it was sad. T_T -
Thank you so muchfor selecting my poem for the bronze trophy,
i really do appreciate it very much.
much hugs and prayers to the mum to be.
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sorry i couldnt enter ur contest. i didnt find out about it intill today. tell the mother to be that i wish her luck.
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