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HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO MY BEAUTIFUL MOTHER

Hey Everyone

This is a picture of me and my mother Tanya in june/08 on the day of my graduation.
Today is my mothers birthday!!!!!!
She is 32 yrs old today.
You see--God sent this woman to me when I was a very young girl, hence then she became my stepmother when she married my father.
She is not only my mother--she is my best friend , and the best mother a child could be blessed with!!!!!
I would like to give her a small gift of beautiful poems for her Birthday.
Please write in any length some beautiful words to a beautiful woman.
HALEIGH

Reversed Words

Whom was I
but the child of the man
whom would become your husband
I was just a little girl
not even old enough
to even understand the word promise
so in every sense
I promised you nothing
but that was way back then
almost 13 years to be exact
so I now reverse those words
for you are gods gift to me
when he was giving out stepmoms
he gave me the best
you have rendered my life
shown me the love of a true mother
to me the best
there is no other
for you my stepmother, my mentor, my best friend
I cherish every moment
I have and will ever spend with you
I promised you nothing back then
while today
I now promise you everything you deserve
for you my beautiful mother
deserve nothing but the best



Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 21, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    Thankyou all for your beautiful entries--each one touched my heart in a different way
    HALEIGH

Contest Winners

  1. Mother
    Silhouetted against blue skies;
    so radiant she reflects the sun,
    by Jasmine Rayne 19 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 14 10:52 AM 2008
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. God's Poetic Birthday Party
    A little girl needs a mom
    Just like a man needs a wife
    by SEA angel 50 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 14 8:59 AM 2008
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. True Success
    Our memories are not in wood or in stone
    Etched in our hearts as ours alone
    by Carly Pop 38 lines, 31 comments, on May 13 12:01 PM 2006. In Sad
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4207201, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  5. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4512823, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  6. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4512745, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

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  • Nicada silver member
    August 14, 2008
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    I know you are not accepting prewrites but I have one that you may enjoy as it was written for my mother figure who has touched my life in such a positive way. I am so happy you have such a wonderful mother in your life. Beautiful! Blessings, Patty

    http://allpoetry.com/poem/4211357


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    August 14, 2008
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    What a lovely contest!
    I hope you get the best entries


  • daviscth
    August 14, 2008
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    Congratulations to you and your beautiful mom!!! The way you feel about her sounds like my relationship with my step daughter. She just graduated and is off to basic training for the Army National Guard soon.

    I've bookmarked this.


  • SEA angel gold member
    August 14, 2008
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    WOW! A wonderful tribute to your mom.

    Is that a limousine! You and your mom look dressed to the nines. That's a compliment. Beautiful. Y'all are simply beautiful. What a shining example and perfect heavenly reflection of God's love. May your loving lights always shine and others be blessed to see.


  • SEA angel gold member
    August 22, 2008
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    WOW!

    What an honor to win silver in a contest for such a lovely mom from her precious daughter, HaleighGrace.
    THANK YOU

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