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Cutters, Bleeders & Blood covered chocolate

Hey another contest yippeeee
I am going though blades very quickly so!

I want your deepest saddest self harm/ cutting poem you've got

I want you to make me feel your pain, make me cry

I want Emotion

The more points I get the more goes to you

RULEZ!
No WrItInG lIkE tHiS
2 poems per person
Prewrites allowed for now
Have Fun expressing

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 10, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 10 people
  • Final notes:
    Greetings everyone!
    I'd just liketo say this was a very hard to judge contest my best one yet. I really loved everyones entries. Thanks to the winners they were special

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4498907, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. Betrayed
    Betrayed by the picking of the fruit
    In anger I beat my fist
    by Michael H. 22 lines, 26 comments, on Aug 8 5:44 AM 2008. In Dark, Pain
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. nightmare of mine
    I'm in a nightmare giving to me from satan
    And i will suffer for my faults
    by justkeepsguessin 9 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 10 1:25 AM 2008. In Pain, Sad, Nightmare
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Death's Sweet Embrace
    I feel the pale chill of Death as he suffocates the light,through the pieces of panic from losing my life.
    by Deathless Kris 13 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 31 3:18 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. Razor of love
    walking inch by inch down that empty hallway for probably my last time
    I headed towards that bathroom door.
    by redhanded 69 lines, 15 comments, on Aug 6 8:12 PM 2006. In Dark
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. Smilin'
    Wake up in the morning,
    Plaster on that smile.
    by lyrebird 39 lines, 33 comments, on Sep 23 12:56 AM 2007. In angst, dark, emo, pain, other
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. Incest Defects (editted version)
    You judge me by these scars I have
    Do you even know why they are here?
    by crazymomma 17 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 1 7:11 PM 2008. In Abuse, Personal, age 16 +
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. Behind It All
    Behind the shattered mirrors
    and the glass used to strike a vain
    by Jasmine Rayne 36 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 9 4:46 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. [ release me ]
    release me
    i need to breathe
    by Bloody Wonder 24 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 9 4:11 PM 2008. In Contest, Dark, Pain, Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  10. Happiness is a Cold Razor.
    The darkness building up inside,
    My mind and flesh are numb.
    by Fritz O skennick 32 lines, 15 comments, on Oct 8 3:07 PM 2007. In Personal, Dark, Pain, Self harm, schizophrenia
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  11. She Held Him Closely
    by Age of Rain 22 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 22 11:43 PM 2008. In Abuse, Adult, Pain, Sad, Society, Life, Thoughts, Weird, Other
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  12. lifeless
    scares within scares
    deep slits bleeding fast
    by solitarytear 22 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 10 6:17 AM 2008. In Life, Sad, Dark, Pain, Longing, Sadness, Depression, Anger, Emo, Self, Suicide
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    August 9, 2008
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    if you ever need someone to vent to ill always gladly listen


  • autarky
    August 9, 2008
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    you should've asked for happy poems, to help you to stop. <3

  • lyrebird
    August 10, 2008
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    Thank you for the HM && points.

    If you ever need to talk, I'm here for you
    -- been through the cutting over && over.

    ♥ Jojo