Cutters, Bleeders & Blood covered chocolate

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on August 10, 2008
• Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 10 people
• Final notes:
  Greetings everyone!
  I'd just liketo say this was a very hard to judge contest my best one yet. I really loved everyones entries. Thanks to the winners they were special

Contest Winners

1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4498907, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
2. Betrayed

   Betrayed by the picking of the fruit
   In anger I beat my fist

   by Michael H. 22 lines, 26 comments, on Aug 8 5:44 AM 2008. In Dark, Pain
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
3. nightmare of mine

   I'm in a nightmare giving to me from satan
   And i will suffer for my faults

   by justkeepsguessin 9 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 10 1:25 AM 2008. In Pain, Sad, Nightmare
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
4. Death's Sweet Embrace

   I feel the pale chill of Death as he suffocates the light,through the pieces of panic from losing my life.

   by Deathless Kris 13 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 31 3:18 PM 2008
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
5. Razor of love

   walking inch by inch down that empty hallway for probably my last time
   I headed towards that bathroom door.

   by redhanded 69 lines, 15 comments, on Aug 6 8:12 PM 2006. In Dark
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
6. Smilin'

   Wake up in the morning,
   Plaster on that smile.

   by lyrebird 39 lines, 33 comments, on Sep 23 12:56 AM 2007. In angst, dark, emo, pain, other
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
7. Incest Defects (editted version)

   You judge me by these scars I have
   Do you even know why they are here?

   by crazymomma 17 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 1 7:11 PM 2008. In Abuse, Personal, age 16 +
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
8. Behind It All

   Behind the shattered mirrors
   and the glass used to strike a vain

   by Jasmine Rayne 36 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 9 4:46 PM 2008
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
9. [ release me ]

   release me
   i need to breathe

   by Bloody Wonder 24 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 9 4:11 PM 2008. In Contest, Dark, Pain, Personal
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
10. Happiness is a Cold Razor.

    The darkness building up inside,
    My mind and flesh are numb.

    by Fritz O skennick 32 lines, 15 comments, on Oct 8 3:07 PM 2007. In Personal, Dark, Pain, Self harm, schizophrenia
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
11. She Held Him Closely

    by Age of Rain 22 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 22 11:43 PM 2008. In Abuse, Adult, Pain, Sad, Society, Life, Thoughts, Weird, Other
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
12. lifeless

    scares within scares
    deep slits bleeding fast

    by solitarytear 22 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 10 6:17 AM 2008. In Life, Sad, Dark, Pain, Longing, Sadness, Depression, Anger, Emo, Self, Suicide
    Honorable mention

    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [17]

• Piece of Mind

  Straight as an arrow is My Vision, but yet My Balance seems blurry.
  I strive and fight to do whats right, but sometimes Hope seems to scur

  by CrazyC87 97 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 18 3:13 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• The End.

  The End.
  I took from life what life gave to me.
  All to the darkness, nothing to the sun...

  by BrokenSanity 17 lines, 8 comments, on May 19 8:44 AM 2008. In Suicide, Depression

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• Don't Save Me

  I just couldn't take it anymore, I grabbed the midnight handle of the sharp knife,

  by kiki-bunny23 15 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 21 3:49 AM 2008. In death, pain, blood

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• when breathing was God's way of punishing

  "It"
  had hapenned again...

  by Fourthaxis 78 lines, 12 comments, on Apr 7 9:19 AM 2008. In Dark, Contest, Personal

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Dying To Be Thin

  by myheartbait 50 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 17 5:16 AM 2008. In Thoughts, Personal, Cutting, Weird

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Wilted roses bleed my mistakes

  Laying within the softness of the night
  The cool steel against me

  by Lady Australis 33 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 9 8:23 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge.

Comments

• By me, right now

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  x-Black-Butterfly-x
  August 9, 2008
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  if you ever need someone to vent to ill always gladly listen
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  autarky
  August 9, 2008
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  you should've asked for happy poems, to help you to stop. <3
  
  
• lyrebird
  August 10, 2008
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  Thank you for the HM && points.
  
  If you ever need to talk, I'm here for you
  -- been through the cutting over && over.
  
  ♥ Jojo

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