Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 29, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 32 people
- Final notes:
Contest Winners
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I do not fear beats
From the realms ofby Quill Bill 61 lines, 15 comments, on Apr 23 5:46 AM 2008. In Dark, Spiritual, Death
Silver trophy winner
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This is a lullaby It's a small song• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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The wind whistles through the trees,
A ghostly reminder that death lies in wait.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4238363, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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You stare me down with your black eyes afireby ScissorhandHugs 25 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 4 3:27 PM 2008. In Sad, Pain, Personal
Honorable mention
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Under the cold, diamond flecked sky
Lay two lovers, you and Iby The.Tango.Emily 21 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 13 3:20 PM 2008. In Love, Lost love, Romance Honorable mention
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i was thinking abut the choices i made in life, and where they would lead me, there are many ways to read a poem, they have many storiesby Danzy007 26 lines, 12 comments, on Feb 3 10:23 PM 2008. In casual, dark, fantasy, nature, personal, spiritual, heart. Honorable mention
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even a man who is pure in heart,
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Smile as you sleep, this is the last time Ill be loving you
Your cold shower can wash away the dirt but not the guilt you carryby Lonely Christina 21 lines, 30 comments, on Jul 24 9:14 AM 2008. In Thoughts, Weird, Dark, Pain, Goodbyes, Lost love, Death Honorable mention
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He used to sing to me...
I laid in bed as his soft voice lulled me to sleepby Lonely Christina 21 lines, 21 comments, on Jul 9 4:49 PM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Weird, Love, Other, Pain, Dark, My own style, Lost in thought Honorable mention
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/ / In darkest corners of the deep / Where fallen angels wail and weep / Beyond the echoes of their screams / This is the birthplace of m• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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When we feel our lives are gone
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I wish I may I wish I might,by juliex-exotic shine 29 lines, 25 comments, on Mar 21 2:37 PM 2007. In Dark, Vampires. Fantasy Honorable mention
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I tried all my life
i believed at one point.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4503837, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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God please come into my life,
I'll tell you all my sins and put away the knife.by upperworld06 32 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 19 8:35 PM 2008. In spiritual, lyrics Honorable mention
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A feeling past depressionby Suicide Hotline 45 lines, 20 comments, on Mar 7 7:23 PM 2008. In Dark, Love, Other Honorable mention
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by Rose Darkest Night 41 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 23 4:16 PM 2008. In Weird, Life, Other Honorable mention
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Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [109]
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Dedicated to all who like to play their cards close to their chest!
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Dedicated to all Trans-humanists!
Behold the renincarnate,by Kazytc 24 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 30 2:42 PM 2008. In Contest, Metaphysical, Philosophical, Dark, Spiritual, Art of Writing, Weird• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
This is a tribute to some on who meant alot to me that i recently lost to cancer (A brain tumor)• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The seat belts are on and the jets start to scream
It’s just the start of your holiday dreamby judmc 31 lines, 29 comments, on May 3 2:45 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
O! for those autumn days of fun
When jack frost came upon the sceneby judmc 16 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 23 7:45 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hold on to me love
Dont let me go! Dont wanna drift off into the sea• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I saw you withering.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by amaranthine lover 29 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 8 2:09 PM 2008. In noguest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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imperfections spread in every defect of my breathing
impurity paralizes every stretch of skin.by Candy Morphine 32 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 14 6:04 AM 2008. In Pain, Angst, Dark, Sad, Lost in thought, Longing, Emo, Loss, Depressed• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
And I'll never have to fall again.
Never have to crumble into the earth again.by youhadme-athello. 23 lines, 35 comments, on Jul 20 7:09 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
At times loving you is so great it is the best thing I have ever experience in my life.
But other times you are so evil, you corrupt all tby Charles Johnson 38 lines, 29 comments, on Apr 11 3:25 PM 2008. In love, strife, romance, pain, spiritual, eternity, heaven, hell, excile, life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When the green mare vanquishes the mist
A goddess of waves shall earn her love.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Born under a black sun and a crimson blood red moon. People on there knees cursing the sky. They shove their fists in the air and scream ouby Dark passenger 7 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 13 7:49 PM 2008. In War, Hate, Emo, Anger, Death, Abuse, Contest, Pain, Dark, Sad, Life, Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My life is nearly gone
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The rain,
Falling lightly,by xox-emma-xox 17 lines, 31 comments, on Mar 21 10:11 AM 2008. In Life, Nature, Spiritual, Thoughts, Happiness, Inspirational, Contemporary• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by xox-emma-xox 13 lines, 41 comments, on Mar 31 7:17 PM 2008. In Nature, Personal, Thoughts, Other, Lost in thought, Inspirational, Escape• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I kneel beside a circus tent
But know I cannot spendby ThinkExXist Tonight 83 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 4 11:27 PM 2008. In Weird, Abstract, Deep, Dark, My own style, Death, Philosophical, Existential• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Deep in thought, I feel despair
i get confused, cant find the trail.by SuicidalGhost 33 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 1 6:20 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i do not know why,
that i feel the need to cry.by SuicidalGhost 13 lines, 9 comments, on Aug 1 8:25 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Judith Chandler 21 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 30 3:11 PM 2008. In Contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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since when was i a mistake
and since when are the pillsby Bloody Wonder 34 lines, 4 comments, on May 28 10:01 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I wake up and I'm not in my bed.
I turn and look straight ahead.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I can't believe I'd ever be able, to hate another human being.by xxRainbowDawnxx 39 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 8 1:43 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by poetic-enigma21 70 lines, 14 comments, on Jun 30 2:50 PM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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For breaking the silence
From the demons of pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Drenched in the pain of guilt mocking oneself all with shame• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I needed you here before I died
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In a dream of Gods and Devils
In a vision of the nightby Rakerman1 46 lines, 13 comments, on Nov 27 10:27 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hand me my shame,
I'll accept all the blame.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
What do you call insanity? / This sense of unreality? / Or something else entirely?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Drinking red wine from a shiny silver goblet
she sat there pondering about yesterday's problemsby TyrannyForestFairy 26 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 3 10:03 PM 2008. In Angst, Dark, Pain, Lost in thought, Lost love, Angry, Vengeance, Murder• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Waiting, watching for you to fall asleep,
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She sat there in loneliness waiting for the clock to strike twelve
Sick and tired of everything going on in her worldby TyrannyForestFairy 26 lines, 19 comments, on Jul 9 9:18 AM 2008. In Contest, Dark, Death, Sad, Abuse, Teen issues, Horror, Cannibalism, Murder• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
DARK DECAY OF ROTTING FLESH
DISMEMBERED THOUGHTS THAT I KNOW BEST• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There are demons flowing through my veins!
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there's that girl in her own little
world.by Coloured Skies 18 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 24 11:20 AM 2008. In Suicide, Teenage thinking, Teen issues, Goodbyes, Depressed, Personal., Emo, Pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Scissors cut and slice and stab
So find a tissue and softly dabby blindingblur 9 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 12 12:44 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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are you into sensual writes?
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sorry,I don't really like sensual writes.
but most other types of writes are fine
soorry it tock me so long to reply.
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Hope you like the poems I just entered...they're reasonably dark lol
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my girlfriend and I had to have a "talk". this was what I wrote before. hope you like it!
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Thank you for the HM! FAH
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You have the right to judge based on your own tastes, and there were A LOT of entries for you to read...but I get the feeling you gave up on really reading some of these pieces after awhile. There are some great pieces towards the end of the list that weren't even commented on. It's fine, I'm just dubious about some of the awards as compared to some of the other great works added towards the end. Oh well.
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your proble right.My computer won't let me add anyone to the finalist list,so I wrote them down then added them when I was one my mums computer,then I lost one of the lists,I had to go though alot of them again and read the new ones and needed to judge the contest soon,so unfoutnitly I may have over looked a few.I appolgize for any one I havent given a fair chance.Thanks for the comment you are quite right.
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