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The Consistency of Change

The Consistency of Change

Change,
it never sleeps,
I can always feel it around me,
as a slight, elusive pressure;
a passive anxiety. It's the cause and effect
of every moment,
the harbinger
of tragedy and triumph,
the fiber
of every nightmare and every dream,
a sentinel
over the evolution of our fate...

and we are merely
reactive servants
tempering innate reflexes
with the conscience of mankind
and morality of faiths.


- JM Kenyon



This is a prompt, draw from it what you will and write a poem. There are a few rules:

1. No vulgar language, violence, or erotica
2. No sticky caps, flashing backgrounds or unreadable text
3. POETRY ONLY
4. No Prewrites

300- Gold
200- Silver
100- Bronze
30- for 2 honorable mentions

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 15, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    Thanks to everyone that entered this contest. It was difficult to choose because there were so many excellent writes. I've chosen those writes that made me think the most and caused me to think more deeply into the causes and effects of change.

    Thanks again and sending out HUGS and best wishes to everyone.

    ~Genie~

Contest Winners

  1. by Danny Beatty 33 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 9 9:08 AM 2008. In Romance, Memories
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. I thought I’d missed my chance
    To take part in your leave-taking.
    by Perfect-Pain 36 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 11 4:45 AM 2008
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4504325, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4498813, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  5. When the doorbell rings
    it can be either day or night,
    by penman 42 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 8 3:14 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [10]

1 - 10 of 10
  • Complex nothings occupy her mind
    Too vast to be understood.
    by CarissaHailea 12 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 8 10:26 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge.
  • This is the first night
    Since last night
    by hannylicious 22 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 8 10:28 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I heard bellowed roars, edgy
    toughness oozed from pores
    by Peteskid 42 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 8 10:58 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The old familiar is gone
    And in it’s place
    by Rachel Kruger 19 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 8 4:09 PM 2008. In Life, Contest
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Changes are inevitable
    They keep on going and never stop
    by DarkTears 22 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 8 6:24 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge.

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Comments

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  • Danny Beatty gold member
    August 8, 2008
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    yer little bouncie dealie guy with the music and notes and my coffee get me goin' every morning when yer on ... so can i write free verse for once? ... I pwomise no ewotika eithuh okay?

    ... not that i ever ever write anything like that



    bookmarked Moqui likes

    • JM Kenyon silver member
      August 8, 2008
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      You can write in any style you like this time

      s ~Genie~


  • Dienush
    August 8, 2008
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    aww I love your poem up here


  • Danny Beatty gold member
    August 15, 2008
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    you honor me with the Gold, and thank you so much, and congrats to the otherwinners

    • JM Kenyon silver member
      August 15, 2008
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      LOL... I about drowned myself to death with coffee when the names appeared on this side!!!

      I figured you'd get an entry in, I just didn't know which was it!

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