I've been feeling down for a couple days. So basically I just want you to write me something dark, emo, or love/heartbreak. Make me feel whats going in the poem.
Rules:
No Sticky Caps
No Bashing or Religion
Nothing too long.
Limit of 3 writes
Prewrites accepted
Gold - gets 300 points
Silver - Undecided
Bronze - Undecided
Honorable Mentions - Maybe =]
Now......Write =]
<3
Rules:
No Sticky Caps
No Bashing or Religion
Nothing too long.
Limit of 3 writes
Prewrites accepted
Gold - gets 300 points
Silver - Undecided
Bronze - Undecided
Honorable Mentions - Maybe =]
Now......Write =]
<3
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 21, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Congrats to all
Contest Winners
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Twas’ a loving young man called John (so it seems)
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Slowly treading through the night, Into the forest,by No More Lies 24 lines, 12 comments, on Apr 17 8:09 AM 2008. In Dark, Personal., My own style, My life, Fear
Bronze trophy winner
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Desperately, I want to scream myself awake
knowing this simple act is not possibleby Darker-star 19 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 10 11:07 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
Alone in this world I travel from dawn till setting sun.
Never knowing where my work will take me, or when my journey's done.by Charles Johnson 11 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 14 3:04 PM 2008. In dark, life, fantasy, sad, pain, love, death, grim reaper, destiny• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
The clock ticks
as black thorns wrap aby Silent Emotions 13 lines, 23 comments, on Apr 19 1:58 AM 2008. In Dark, Pain, Death, Depressed, Depression, Sadness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
You dance childish rings around my bemused, aching head,
You take advantage of your muscular, powerful self• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Entries [66]
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My toes in the sand
my guitar in hand• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Warming is the dead horse that rides in the pale light
For it shall come for me with my death tonightby Michael H. 19 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 6 12:59 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The day's ride
And the night's flightby expresso 11 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 8 3:18 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Beauty worn by antiquated time
enfeebled by bone-weary cold• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I saw you there motionless
Your eyes awake with a glorious blueby curlydevil 17 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 8 5:18 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
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I once knew a man
who put bitches in ditches.by FatBSlamDance 12 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 8 6:17 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Now I'm lost without you
Daddy please come back• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Under a pine tree way out in the woods
sits a woman with something in her hand• Viewed by judge. -
Who is that girl in the mirror?
Black hair• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Walking down this path I fear, hands frozen in fists, blood dried to crisps,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Death’s cold caress
numbs my senses.by Fritz O skennick 35 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 24 6:53 AM 2008. In Dark, Thoughts, Spiritual, Weird, Lost love, Old English.
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What do you call insanity? / This sense of unreality? / Or something else entirely?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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its been hours, weeks, no months
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Craving reality
slips away from granite handles-• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
To walk along a lake of blood, beneath the skies lit ablaze. By the fire found in those who let hate guide their way. They go to sleep withby Dark passenger 11 lines, 16 comments, on Jun 10 6:55 PM 2008. In APOCALYPSE, Dark, Pain, Spiritual, Death, Emo, Hate, War• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You make me feel
But never the good or the loveby justkeepsguessin 14 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 10 3:57 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'm in a nightmare giving to me from satan
And i will suffer for my faults• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
miss dainty darkness
let me hold your laced hand• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Shadows form like water f.r.e.e.z.i.n.g
...everything stops....by Nostalgic Moon 32 lines, 13 comments, on Aug 10 7:45 PM 2008. In zombies!!!• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Becoming my own worst enemy
Sleeping pill induced dreams, trying to lose myselfby Lonely Christina 15 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 11 9:30 AM 2008. In Thoughts, Dark, Angst, Life, Pain, Depression, Sadness, My own style• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
darkness falls and i long to taste the darkness again
i'm focused and nothing can hurt meby ChickenPie 22 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 12 10:43 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
At midnight angels guard; lovers sleep
beyond time underneath their souls to keepby z etoile 10 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 3 1:33 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Broken hearts and hipbones,
Shattered like minute fragments of opaque glass,by Pinkjodz 34 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 13 7:47 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The rubber room of blankets.
The body, disappeared.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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cut them into pieces, let them fall to bits in my own demonis way the killing really fits• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Empty bottles singe the air
like ammonia in tight spaces,by Jasmine Rayne 40 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 21 8:24 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by MaddHattress 50 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 21 2:21 PM 2008. In Adult• Viewed by judge.
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All her memories will be lost in time,
like tears in the rain.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Revelations seen
Demons in my dreamsby crazymomma 12 lines, 11 comments, on Jun 8 9:42 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
so you talk.
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I am the ghost that you refuse see
I haunt your every memoryby hollowfayt 25 lines, on Aug 21 9:41 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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