I want you to write me a poem inspired by Emilie Autumn's "4 'o Clock"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tORbGjyrUlQ&feature=related
I want it to be beautiful and, as usual, anything goes.
Just no sticky caps or horrendous spelling. That makes it really hard for me to read it.
Render me sleepless with your verses, poets!
*I've extended the judging date. There were so many really good poems! However, I'm now disallowing prewrites, just to make it interesting.*
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tORbGjyrUlQ&feature=related
I want it to be beautiful and, as usual, anything goes.
Just no sticky caps or horrendous spelling. That makes it really hard for me to read it.
Render me sleepless with your verses, poets!
*I've extended the judging date. There were so many really good poems! However, I'm now disallowing prewrites, just to make it interesting.*
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 3, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 400, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: This was very difficult for me to judge, it took a long time for me to decide. I was so surprised at how many beautifully written poems were entered!
I must applaud each and every contestant, you all are very talented.
Much love,
LaylaLace A.K.A Dezz
Contest Winners
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My pocket-watch tells me it's ten to three,
The moon peers though a silver tinted shroud.by cricketjeff 14 lines, 26 comments, on May 10 8:19 AM 2008. In Thoughts, Personal, sonnet
Honorable mention
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I can't get no sleep,
Body is a wrecked heap,
Twitching chaos,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Lying between sheets in thought all night For I havent a decision, there is no lightby BloodFader 12 lines, 5 comments, on May 29 3:24 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I am waiting for the morning
so that I can sleep• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Entries [15]
1 - 15 of 15
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Always at Two in the Morning,
when crossroads meet• Commented on by judge. -
Tossing and turning...• Commented on by judge.
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Tick- tock, tick- tock, The day duth fade.
Click lock, take stock, Thy soul decayed.by Fritz O skennick 20 lines, 14 comments, on Oct 8 1:52 PM 2007. In Insomnia, Schizophrenia, Drained.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Thoughts and feelings drowning in the / Non-ending bottomless terrifying dark blue sea. / Would they upsurge rising high invading the blueby Nermin Nazim 18 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 27 9:56 AM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Weird, Freewrite, my own style• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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4 O'clock shadows, burning the midnight oil,memories of the past arise, standing so loyal.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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four o'clock
four o'clock• Commented on by judge.
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From one Dez to the next... Thank you.
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lol You're more than welcome, Dez.
- Dezz
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