Rules (rather simple)
1. No epic poems. (nothing over 150 lines please)
2. Nothing too whiny (he made me cut myself blah blah)
3. If there's any gore, make it good. no "i stabbed him 50 times" (not impressive)
4. I want true heartbreak. Nothing like, he left me for that skank...the end. Make me feel like my heart is being crushed too.
5. I want imagery and feeling. If i can't visualize what you're writing about, then...yeah not entirely what I'm looking for.
1. No epic poems. (nothing over 150 lines please)
2. Nothing too whiny (he made me cut myself blah blah)
3. If there's any gore, make it good. no "i stabbed him 50 times" (not impressive)
4. I want true heartbreak. Nothing like, he left me for that skank...the end. Make me feel like my heart is being crushed too.
5. I want imagery and feeling. If i can't visualize what you're writing about, then...yeah not entirely what I'm looking for.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 9
- Rewards: Gold: 650, Silver: 500, Bronze: 350, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: I was proud to judge this contest. I saw very many great poems entered in. Congratulations to my finalists, and to all who entered. =]
Contest Winners
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Falling fast
A demons grasp• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [53]
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Ripping feels the chamber Sorrow feels my heart For now I have to kill her I must cut her apart Limps fall useless They hit theby papercutangel86 34 lines, 26 comments, on Jun 24 4:17 PM 2005. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I didn't get the chance
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Dehydrating from the lack of breath;
my worth is an open book of regrets.by Mackie 38 lines, 118 comments, on Nov 27 10:25 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My eyes grow pale from all these feelings of lonliness, and in my chest where my heart be, there's a lingering emptiness.
This burning paiby Deathless Kris 18 lines, 6 comments, on May 14 1:42 PM. In Pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It's only been a couple years
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What do you call insanity? / This sense of unreality? / Or something else entirely?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It’s all come down to this. You’ve bought this all to bear. Sitting there thinking about why you should.
As nothing comes to mind as to whby allawy 11 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 11 3:46 PM. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Sad, Dark, Pain, Suicide, Hate, Emo, Anger, Death• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Softly call, it’s possible she’ll hear, / And she’ll return, to whisper in your ear, / Soon one day.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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your true self
only showing when one's alone• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
death take me from this dark night
make me forget all the bad fightsby bloody moon 6 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 3 2:20 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
shine dark down in abyssby Flotsam Jetsam 28 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 14 12:11 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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How can I have you
When you are with her?by NatureIsBeautuful 18 lines, 16 comments, on Mar 8 6:59 PM. In Hope, Life, Love, Personal, Sad, Lost in thought, My life, Longing, Dedication• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Scars. The roadmap of the Soul• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The edge, shiny and sharp
One swift move,,the blood flowsby soulsearchfor1 27 lines, on Aug 7 9:18 PM• Viewed by judge. -
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I cried when I came home today
I heard that you were goneby bluecollarlove 23 lines, 13 comments, on Apr 13 10:33 AM 2007. In Despair--bluecollarlove• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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A world that stretches beyond
anything considered,by x Gemini x 150 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 9 12:21 PM. In Angst, Contemporary, Dark, Life, Pain, Sad, Society, Thoughts, Depression, Longing• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
i will NOT let bad exs stop me from of dating
i've learned quite a bit• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My hands are sweaty and clammy as we turn in to the street
I am handed the machine gun and told to load and wait• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Too many thorns
to reach one rose,by AshesFromFire 36 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 31 1:10 PM. In Dark, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, My life, Depression• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
and saw,
that all,
were dead.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I saw you withering.• Viewed by judge.
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I look into the grave
To this place I am a slave• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I HAVE WONDERED• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I NEVER NEEDED UNTIL I MET YOUby trekkergirl 46 lines, 7 comments, 1 day ago. In Other, Contest, Love, Thoughts, needs, Hope, Romance, Inspirational• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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DO NOT GRIEVE By trekkergirl• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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THE DECISION
It is cold outside.by trekkergirl 17 lines, 8 comments, on May 17 12:02 PM. In Hope, Angst, Pain, separation, Sad, thoughts, love, unforfilled love, loss• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
DREAMING I dreamed last nightby trekkergirl 37 lines, 16 comments, on Apr 28 6:27 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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TH’Y’LA
Being who and what I am• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Words I wish to utter
but you do not wish to hear,by Steven Beesley 36 lines, on Aug 9 5:43 AM. In Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Life, Pain, My life, Friendship, Depression, Depressed• Viewed by judge.
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cute
Kawaii That looks like GAARA!! From Naruto!... -
Thank you so much for the honour of gold! Congrats to all the winners
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