Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

What Comes Next?

'The moment she entered the room, everyone fell silent. All eyes were fixed on her. Everyone grimaced and snickered. They all left the room immediately, leaving her in the room all alone again. She walked into another room, and once again the same thing happened. She has been noticing a small black figure out of the corner of her eye each time the crowd left, and this time she turned to look at it.'

Okay, that is part of a story idea I thought of. I want you to think of what will happen next. No chtspk, or aNY oF tHis. It does not have to be a poem, this is a story. Or you could add a poem that will lead to inspiration. I'm kind of going for a darker theme. I'm not sure exactly what direction I want to take with this story, so just give me what you got! In the notes section, add 'Stickers and Ponies and Myspace dot com!!' so I know you have read all of this. You will be deleted immediately if you don't. Try your best at spell checking. And have fun!!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 22, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 200, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    I have really enjoyed all of your entries!! And for the winners, I think I know what I want, and for the honorable mentions, I had a very hard time choosing just three!! So here I go! And thank you all for entering!!

Contest Winners

  1. What she had been praying for
    by Dangerousparable 8 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 21 9:10 PM 2008. In Pain, Abuse, Adult, Contest, Fantasy
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. A true angel.
    and as she turned to look at it she saw a black figure behined here just huvering there. she was shocked,starteled,and frightened all at the same time. she turned around to see if anyone else could see it she was about to ye
    by XxKamariexX 0 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 8 10:47 PM 2008. In Fantasy, Hope, Love, Spiritual, Thoughts, Weird
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. The Meeting
    by Yo-Yo 0 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 7 11:27 AM 2008. In ???
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Flicker of Hope
    'Stickers and Ponies and Myspace dot com!!'
    by stanstan009 13 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 7 11:31 AM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. What Comes Next? Continues
    She thought to herself; what’s going on I don’t understand, do I smell, is my slip showing. What! Forget it and the hell with all of them
    by smonte19124 7 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 7 12:03 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. The Turn Around Often Hurts Just As Much
    "Stickers and Ponies and Myspace dot com!!'
    Gossip destroys so many people and it is so untrue for with each person they hadd on their own
    by storiesuntold 55 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 7 10:55 AM 2008. In Life, Society
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [8]

1 - 8 of 8
  • Romance with the Hangman
    The moment she entered the room, everyone fell silent. All eyes were fixed on her. Everyone grimaced and snickered. They all left the room immediately, leaving her in the room all alone again. She walked into another room, an
    by Periwinkle Blue 12 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 8 12:25 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge.

Add a comment

    : Comment:

Comments


  • Maybe.I.Am.Broken.
    August 8, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    best of luck in the contes hon.
    It seems like you have heapz of potential
    Keep on writing

    Wish I could enter, but cant...
    my muse is horribly used up atm...

    ~Annie