shallow
left align
free verse
no limit
let the word take you inside your skin, see what can ooze out.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 21, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 500, Bronze: 250, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: To each and everyone of you thank you, this contest threw up some brilliant pieces and if you don't go and read the Gold winner you are missing out as well as silver and bronze, there was a bee's dick between all of them and the rest deserved something as well but there can only be what I can afford. See you next time.
Contest Winners
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He stands tall in the sea
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by iverbthenoun 45 lines, 13 comments, on Aug 17 8:06 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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I met a gal named...
"Shallow Sal"by ears2hearyou 36 lines, 9 comments, on Aug 7 10:01 PM 2008. In Contest, Society, Contemporary, Dark, Anger, Friendship, Thoughts, Abstract• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
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He said how much he liked my poem
not knowingby quantumsurveyor 21 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 7 6:29 AM 2008. In Contemporary, Contest, Life, Personal, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. -
Water cools my ankles
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You vanish into the wind
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Just because they don't cry doesn't mean they aren't hurting
Even if they don't smile doesn't mean they aren't happyby Writing0Freedom 20 lines, on Aug 20 11:30 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
the letter no one will ever read
is written on the pages of my soulby DaughterxXxofxXxNyx 24 lines, on Aug 20 8:51 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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hmmmm.lol
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mmmm lol what?
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to enter or to not
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stretch yourself
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stratch myself?
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to write a metaphorical, modern piece without adjectives, just with visuals and emotion...you could I know you could
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without adjectives?
meaning?......lol
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just write as if you are the object lol the article so to speak, lol i hate grammar lessons lol...try a piece where you personnify yourself, how you feel without all the similies and the word 'like'
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I am soft
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well seeing how it isnt an actual rule, ill try what you want, and you can see if i do it right XD
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ill try, but no promises.
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amazing prompt....
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i think this is exactly what i need to snap me out of my funk
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Congratulations to the winners and thanks so muich for hosting
Gaylene
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Thank you very much for the honorable mention. Congratulations to the winners!
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you are so awesome, thank you. congrats to all the winners, especially that gold piece...a bit of me fell in love
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oh wow I won =-O thanks chez, i really appreciate it, and congrats to all the other winners, it was a pleasure to go up against such talent =O
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