OK, I'm looking for poetry that is about a person being lonely and depressed, sad, suicidal. But, I want there to be hope, directing that person towards life not death. Doesn't have to be spiritual but that would be a nice touch.
May summit two poems.
Please comment on at least three other entries.
Have fun.
May summit two poems.
Please comment on at least three other entries.
Have fun.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 7, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 25, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: Great job. Good luck to you in future contests. This was a really hard contest to judge, and all of your entries were good. Keep writing!
Contest Winners
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Gave you my shattered heart
You've glued some pieces togetherby Lil-Bit Crazy 18 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 1 11:12 PM 2008. In Contest, Personal
Honorable mention
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Entries [13]
1 - 13 of 13
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by Lil-Bit Crazy 7 lines, 9 comments, on Aug 1 11:47 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Walked through my life, on a quest,
to fill my dreams and make the best.• Commented on by judge. -
A Poem Of Friendshipby robert davidson 38 lines, 12 comments, on Jan 19 4:42 AM 2006. In Life, Hope, Contemporary, Friendship• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I spent two weeks in Hawaii.
Stayed in a hotel right on the beach.by Charles Johnson 60 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 14 4:03 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Alone in this world I travel from dawn till setting sun.
Never knowing where my work will take me, or when my journey's done.by Charles Johnson 11 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 14 3:04 PM 2008. In dark, life, fantasy, sad, pain, love, death, grim reaper, destiny• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Discouraged by dis-ease & failings
Enveloped with sadness, this world so off track
by Kathleen a Nazarene 43 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 3 2:49 PM 2008. In Life, Depression, Sad, Dark, Spiritual, Hope, Inspirational, Message• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I want this to end:
all the pain, the wars,by Kathleen a Nazarene 30 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 1 4:02 PM 2008. In Contest, Spiritual, Life, Love, Hope, Inspirational, Message• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
