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Deep Poetry For Lonely Person

OK, I'm looking for poetry that is about a person being lonely and depressed, sad, suicidal. But, I want there to be hope, directing that person towards life not death. Doesn't have to be spiritual but that would be a nice touch.

May summit two poems.

Please comment on at least three other entries.

Have fun.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 7, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 25, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    Great job. Good luck to you in future contests. This was a really hard contest to judge, and all of your entries were good. Keep writing!

Contest Winners

  1. Someone’s Crying, Lord / Hear the desperation of this man / Holding out his hands / Can you feel his fears? / Hear his anguished tears / So
    by esroddo 35 lines, 24 comments, on Jul 2 8:50 PM 2007. In Spiritual, Hope, Faith, Life, Thoughts
    Gold trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Running, the sound of feet pounding rustling through the grassy meadow.
    by Chocoholic156 18 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 25 8:54 AM 2008. In Sad, Personal, Pain, Love, Life, Hope
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. by Chocoholic156 28 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 3 10:42 AM 2008. In Hope, Life, Love, Other, Pain, Personal, Sad, Society, Thoughts, Weird
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Like a tree in a dense forest
    She struggles to grow upwards,
    by Nicada 39 lines, 129 comments, on Mar 17 7:09 AM 2008. In Nature, Hope, Life, Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. Gave you my shattered heart
    You've glued some pieces together
    by Lil-Bit Crazy 18 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 1 11:12 PM 2008. In Contest, Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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