So, I'm separated from my boyfriend for awhile since he's a marine and in iraq. So, I want you to win my heart(hypothetically and poetically). love, war, military, whatever is accepted.
Rules, if it's an erotic poem please mark it as so.
No bashing military poetry.
OH and no sticky caps.
Other than that, anything goes.
The rules are subject to change. have fun.
OKAY SINCE I'M GETTING RUDE COMMENTS, NO THIS IS NOT A "REAL LIFE" CONTEST MEANING NO I'M NOT CHEATING ON MY MAN NOR DO I PLAN TO. IT'S A CONTEST FOR FUN. I LOVE MY MARINE VERY MUCH. THANKS.
**please pray for my marine.. he did get hurt the other day...**
Rules, if it's an erotic poem please mark it as so.
No bashing military poetry.
OH and no sticky caps.
Other than that, anything goes.
The rules are subject to change. have fun.
OKAY SINCE I'M GETTING RUDE COMMENTS, NO THIS IS NOT A "REAL LIFE" CONTEST MEANING NO I'M NOT CHEATING ON MY MAN NOR DO I PLAN TO. IT'S A CONTEST FOR FUN. I LOVE MY MARINE VERY MUCH. THANKS.
**please pray for my marine.. he did get hurt the other day...**
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 23, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 10, Bronze: 5
- Final notes: Phenomenal work to all of you! Thanks for entering my contest. Kept my mind off of him being away.
Contest Winners
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There's an ache that never fades,
There's a pain that never dies,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
From head to toes, looking my best I’m with my Marine tonight• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
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While he's away from home,
His girlfriend is all home alone,by fgurcegk 17 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 4 9:07 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
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Love, love, love it is beautiful butby Mr.Cat 19 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 12 11:05 PM 2008. In personal and sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It is cold outside. The sky is overcast and gray. Off in the distance I can see lightning as it strikes and hear the thunder of a fast apby trekkergirl 13 lines, 9 comments, on May 17 12:02 PM 2008. In Hope, Angst, Pain, separation, Sad, thoughts, love, unforfilled love, loss• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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wow
That's pretty screwed up he's over there putting his life on the line and your asking guys to hit on you and write you poems to sweep u off your feet I wish I knew his email address I'm sure he'd love to know how your staying true to him while he's going considering your one of the things keeping him going your a ***** this makes me sick... -
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that's not the point of this. you actually think i'd cheat? if that were the case i would have already done so. please keep your obnoxious rude comments to yourself. thanks.
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oh and btw i'm sure he'd love to kick ur ass for talking to his girl like that.
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i allowed prewrites if you'd like to enter.
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we can only enter one???
ok fine then!!
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awww haha. I only did that cuz i can't see names and it wouldn't be fair to have someone get two trophies.
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we can only enter one??? ok fine then!!
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That's good, how do you manage?
I don't think she'd ever cheat, unless she knew for sure, he was lost. Nobody should cheat, unless the circumstances are bad enough. But maybe she could, if she wanted to. -
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if i lost him it'd take me awhile to move on even then..
It's not as much as managing as it is holding on to something you love and believe. Anything worth loving is worth waiting for.
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