Cliche' Ridden, Poetic Device Rhyming Contest

http://www.clichesite.com/

#1 Use as many cliche'd expressions as you can and still make sense.

#2 Rhyme rhyme rhyme

#3 poetic devices like ... alliteration and stuff.
look them up.

I want hackneyed, overused phrases that are sweet and adorable. Like a drunk in love who's holding wilted roses behind his back and doesn't know he' been out all night!

What truths come spilling out of this defenseless fools mouth?

yeah, pre-writes are ok if they fit. 3 per customer

Contest is Over

Contest was judged on August 3, 2008
Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 1 people
Final notes:
Congratulations and thank everyone for entering. I really enjoyed all of the entries and despite what some people say ... I love cliche's!

Contest Winners

Well-Enough Alone

by toomysterious 25 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 28 9:39 AM 2008. In life, love, pain, cliche, contest
Gold trophy winner

• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
The Village Idiot

The spitting image of you and me
he was the apple of my eyes, honestly

by Fourthaxis 35 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 28 10:46 AM 2008. In Thoughts, Contest, Rhyme
Silver trophy winner

• Commented on by judge. [remove]
"A Cache of Cliche's"

by BuriedTreasures 48 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 28 1:59 PM 2008. In Humor
Bronze trophy winner

• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Breaking the Spineless

Unbearable, as your voice is pinging Up and down my vertebrae

by andywontdie 33 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 28 9:31 AM 2008. In Other, Nature, Humor, Personal, Thoughts, Weird
Honorable mention

• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [8]

1 - 8 of 8

There’s Dog Poop On The Chair

You said: ah, Jack, I like your hair, Your great huge biceps swells and swells,

by Emmanuel Cant 49 lines, 2 comments, on May 24 3:36 AM 2008. In Humor

• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
Cliche it up

you are my pain
in the rain

by peridotPixi 23 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 28 9:20 AM 2008. In Contest, Humor

• Commented on by judge.
"Half a bubble off"

“Half a bubble off”
Listen here Jim “you can say that again”

by Bosiarbooger 36 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 28 10:17 AM 2008. In Contest, Humor, Cliche', "Love or leave em"

• Commented on by judge.
One Way Street

ohhhh
I would trade, every star in the sky

by Davidlee 35 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 4 12:25 PM 2008. In Life, Love, Humor

• Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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Griswold
July 28, 2008
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Oh my, this is a good one...bookmarked.
Fourthaxis
August 5, 2008
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Yay, Silver! Thank you! And congrats to the others too!