subject: sex
suggestion: i am gay, so i recommend gay stuff. however, i am open minded - and will appreciate straight-sex or lesbian-sex poems too.
i also recommend that you use poetic devices, and also, don't use any cliches.
lastly, i suggest that if you cannot take an honest comment then you should not enter. i say it like it is from my point of view.
rules:
- free verse [no rhyme; i don't want it!]
- left alignment
- solid background
- no bitching
if you don't like this contest then don't enter.
don't give me any shit, because i am happy.
thank you & good luck to those who enter.
suggestion: i am gay, so i recommend gay stuff. however, i am open minded - and will appreciate straight-sex or lesbian-sex poems too.
i also recommend that you use poetic devices, and also, don't use any cliches.
lastly, i suggest that if you cannot take an honest comment then you should not enter. i say it like it is from my point of view.
rules:
- free verse [no rhyme; i don't want it!]
- left alignment
- solid background
- no bitching
if you don't like this contest then don't enter.
don't give me any shit, because i am happy.
thank you & good luck to those who enter.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 1, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 4 people
- Final notes: The top 3 were the most unique, not only when it came to style but the content as well.
cherry-stems: i didn't think i would give gold to a lesbian-sex poem, but i have to say, if left me breathless by the end.
le petit prince: this one clearly has the most depth and had the most thought put into it. however, cherry-stems gave me a stronger reaction. still, this poem is excellent.
filling him: beautiful. less is certainly more in this poem. it takes talent to speak volumes with little amount of words. good job.
Anyone who put forth the effort to be creative won an HM.
This really was, overall, a fantastic turn out. Thank you so much. :]
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oh. my. goodness.
Tyler...
I don't know whether to laugh or to cry from surprise. xDDD
I'll see if I can write for you.
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lmao ily.
there's a first time for everything.
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And Cassie's 'first time' won't be until she's married.
Shun the girl with morals.
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lol
i guess we should have waited
but whatever
we just go with the flow
and maybe i was thinking with the wrong head.
haha
but he is worthy of my v-card.
he's genuine, etc...
you know?
it's not like i was gonna do it with any guy.
cuz if i did
i woulda lost my v-card like 4 years ago, lol. -
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You know, Tyler, you're so cute when you ramble about him.
And remember (you told me this before), you can't fall in love with someone after two weeks. Much less a couple of days.
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well I am a lesbian does dat count
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of course
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well I am off to write then
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sweet :]
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Gay huh? *grins* Well I guess Nate was right after all... *sees what he can come up with...maybe a bisexual threesome?
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lmao dude you're only like 2 months late.
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I never knew, Tyler.
And if I could, I'd write something, but I suck at this subject (well, when it comes to poems that is )
Good luck with it. I hope you get good entries
sarah ~
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Hmmm... I'll see if I can write for you, though I do suck at that sort of thing... No pun intended I like my goth-erotica, with lotsa sex and lotsa blood, and I have a full-length novel surrounding it... I know I'm a freak
Anyway, I'm straight, so I suck at writing 'gay stuff' as you say... Might have to ask my best friend and his boyfriend for help, though I did write a lesbian erotica on SW that actually turned out okay If I don't enter, good luck to ya! I'll donate points or something, if you need
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Hey there.
Me shall try. Since I myself
fall into this category.
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Ha. I've been waiting for something like this. I'll see if I can manage to squeeze something out that's a bit more artistic than cathartic.
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haha awesome
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Ahaha. Tyler. You do know I'm fannish, right? ^.^''
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what does fannish mean? lol
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Heh. Don't you wanna know ^.~
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I like sex. =]
But I can't write sex poems.
*Sigh* Damn my inadequate writing.
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inadequate, my ass.
you should try.
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I'm cooking. Okay, well thinking, but I'm not so good at that, so I'll cook you up something instead. <3
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http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2413763
i am begging people to enter...
please?
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well you were being a bit odd so I am so not bothering finishing this contest
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i'm odd? at least i dont stab my boyfriend while we're having sex.
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lol I am lesbian I don't do guys
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lol yes, you already told me.
& i don't think any girl would find being stabbed or sliced sexy at all unless they had major mental or suicidal issues.
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actually I lot of very hot sexy lil things do the like me to dominate them
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-shrug-
whatever works for the couple i guess. haha
i'd be scared to death if my boyfriend came after me with a knife.
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lol Well I like a lil pain with my pleasure but each to thier own
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lesbian, m'dear? XD
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lol "cherry-stems"
no, not ambiguous at all.
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oh? I was refering to the whole 'ze who can tie knots in a cherry-stem with their tongue is an amazing *ahem* kisser' thing, as well as continuing the 'entanglement' theme~ is there an american slang I don't know?
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lol yeah
ever heard the phrase "pop the cherry"?
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yup, but that applies in both directions, no?
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hmmm. eeeeenteresting. *strokes chin*
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thanks a bunch, glad you liked it. =]
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