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Dalaney Contest 7 "Old"

Dalaney , one of the very best poets on site and a brilliant free verser (and rhymer!!!), gave Jeff a large number of points to promote rhyme amongst beginners and ardent Free Versers.

Winners of this contest will be invited into the main contest where they will automatically be finalists.

PLEASE do not enter this contest if you consider yourself a practised rhymer, or if you have won a major prize or two or more HMs in our previous rhyming challenge. (However if you have got awards from us and still think this is the right place for you, please message us and we will decide.)

You may enter two poems, but only one pre-write.

The theme this time is "Old" and you can interpret that any way you like.

Just remember these contests are about encouraging non-rhymers or beginners to find the joy of playing with rhyme. We are looking for organised and flowing poetry, and any help asked for will be given.

This contest is all about encouraging people to rhyme. We will take experience into account when marking, and we may ask some competitors to move their poems to the main contest.
If you want to ask the judges for help or comments before the end of the contest, or afterwards, please do, this part of our series is about learning and improving, the gold cups are an added extra!

Rhyming poetry matters to us both and to our sponsor so keep it up and get better!!!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 10, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 6 people
  • Final notes:
    We would like to say thank you to all the poets who have entered this contest. As usual a wonderful mixture both of poetry and poets.

    Our gold winner rbruce has written an exceptional poem about old age that we feel is well worth a read, as is our silver winner The painting Poet’s Ballad Of Stone. Our bronze winner is arafura with Drinkwater’s Wife, a tale of life in Australia and another poem worthy of a read.

    We are always looking for new talent and we may have found it in a young lady called Dapigster, she is just 11 years old and a name to be reckoned with in future.

    There are six HM’s not in any particular order, but we felt were all worthy of recognition and a small prize.

    We look forward to seeing you again in the next round of the contests.

    Sue and Jeff


Contest Winners

  1. by rbruce 42 lines, 13 comments, on May 25 5:07 AM 2008
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. by Ceridwens Soul 51 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 2 5:07 PM 2008. In Contest, Spiritual, Pagan
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. This tale is as old as the sun that goes down / In a haze of old rumors, by an old mining town / Where still they speak of the poetic justi
    by arafura 73 lines, 14 comments, on May 29 2:34 AM 2007. In Love, Lyrics, Other, Personal, Sad, Society, Thoughts
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. You are the tale that never was Not once upon a time
    by Antonio Valentino 51 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 26 8:29 AM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4459619, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  6. Old age brings old minds, Old limbs and old ears,
    by owlish 54 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 19 10:46 AM 2008. In Life, Thoughts, Contest
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. The say I'm getting older as my actions become bolder
    by Jenny84 34 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 26 11:10 AM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. One summer night, we took a dare.
    Having some fun and a good scare.
    by Lady Altheia 33 lines, 31 comments, on Jul 26 10:02 AM 2008. In Horror
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. As you walk down the creepy street,
    You hear the thud of heavy feet.
    by Karlie67 45 lines, 13 comments, on Aug 4 5:13 AM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  10. by Charles Johnson 17 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 26 8:47 AM 2008. In adult, age, nature, life, humor
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 26, 2008
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    Good on you both! I may ponder on this...


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    July 26, 2008
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    Way cool, fan-freakin-tastic! What compassion, what heart! Love you guys and I'll be checking on this one.


  • S D McDaniel
    July 26, 2008
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    what would you consider me?

    Well, I always love a challenge... and I am definately known for my free verse.... but I write poems that rhyme as well. I definately think I am much better at free verse than I am at rhyming...but I think I need an objective opinion.

    I'd like to name 6 poems I have written over the past few years... 3 rhyming, 3 freeverse. Would you look over them, and tell me whether you think I am 'qualified' to enter this contest? No comments needed... The poems are:

    Rhyming - Confusion in Mauve, My Last Breath, Winter Returns

    Free verse - The Line Between, Ice Sculptures, Finding the Unseen

    like I said, no comment necessary on these poems... I just don't want to enter if I'm considered 'over qualified'.

  • Bad Bill
    July 26, 2008
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    Great idea to promote decent rhyming poetry. I won't be entering myself, as I consider myself a seasoned rhymer, but I wish you all the very best with this admirable contest.

    Cheers,
    Bill


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 26, 2008
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    Oh drat! I thought the theme was "the wall"?


    • cricketjeff gold member
      July 26, 2008
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      That was the last one

      • kiwigirljacks gold member
        July 26, 2008
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        Oh ok.. was the text copied and pasted in here and then changed? I must have seen it before it was changed lol.. I was writing based on that. Not sure "old" works for me.. but will keep my eyes open for if you guys do another


  • Antonio Valentino
    August 11, 2008
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    Thank you Sue and Jeff for the HM it is very much appreciated.

    And congratulations to the winners.

    Antonio

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