Welcome
Ok so as the title says, enter new poetry, old poetry, all poetry, i will leave my honest comment and not any sugar coated "great" when i don't think so, but i will be nice, please try to refrain from entering poems with bad grammar and spelling because i will point it out. its one of my pet peeves of mine.Enter as many times as you like. 1 or 40 I don't mind.
Rules:
if erotic or adult content label as seen fit
No glorifying rape,cutting, abuse ect
if you want me to critique tell me in your AN
Have fun!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 13, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 400, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 10 people
- Final notes: Thanks for entering and congrats to all
Contest Winners
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I faded like an umbrella;
your misty downpour devouring• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Sonnet LXX
Longevity My Mistress Pt i• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Well I skip from eve to eve as I wend my way,
Going from home to work or just off for the day.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4423803, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [341]
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"you shouldn't have said it."
"i couldn't help it."by xXmiranda-maeXx 25 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 24 10:01 PM 2008. In Angst, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Lost in thought, My life, Anger• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by edit my world. 8 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 25 9:04 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by edit my world. 36 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 24 8:25 PM 2008. In Weird• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by edit my world. 26 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 24 7:11 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by edit my world. 30 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 24 9:25 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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If I get to hear your voice again,
I’ll smile from ear to ear• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I’m wrapped in guilt while you’re putting on your innocent disguise
Though you know I can see through you so clearly• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There are moments where I feel like I’m falling apart
...all over again• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I glance ,
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by Nothing But No 45 lines, 15 comments, on Jul 28 10:35 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The words seep in like acid rain, Boring holes straight through my brain.by Sticks-And-Stones 7 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 21 11:18 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You found the crash in the fuselage -
metal twisted under extreme pressure.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A total Solar Eclipse to start the month of August.
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I want to give you all the sunsets I have seen,
I want to take you every place I have been.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
When I was a child
I thought that beyond the highway barriersby writetheway 37 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 11 6:17 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Blank foolscap laughs at writers who Are struggling at half past twoby Gratitude 44 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 30 4:29 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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We lay here together,
Holding hands,by Ebbing.X.Discreetly 15 lines, 11 comments, on Aug 17 5:38 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Black streaks of color whirl to and fro,
White ivory boldly streams through the dance,by Caitlin 8 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 23 2:57 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Why do you torture me by talking of him, And right after you left me with pain so grim,by Philleebee8 24 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 21 9:53 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Let the rain fall down, and mix with my tears
Let it show all of your fearsby HazardousHeroine 13 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 18 12:54 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
Walk: verb; to move from one place to another by moving your feetby candela696 13 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 19 5:01 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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look at the dove
the pure perfectionby Fallen-Phases 40 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 22 9:34 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Crying like I never have before,by HiddenByTheDark 26 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 24 6:18 PM 2008. In Lost in thought, Lost love, Sad, Pain, Freewrite• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by foreverxnow 17 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 22 9:57 AM 2008. In Sad, Personal, Pain, Depressed, Anger, Teenage thinking, Message, My life• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by aanika 53 lines, 25 comments, on Jul 12 11:58 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Dedicated to the lovers of spooky stories!
Mrs & Mrs Twee got invited to stay,by Kazytc 136 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 19 3:45 PM 2008
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Dedicated to Nancy (Mattelois) for inspiring this escapade!
Mr & Mrs Twee decided they would go to church,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Just letting my mind wander!
Art for artistic sake,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Dedicated to all with a soul!
The winds of time pass,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Dedicated to all who like to be spooked!
There was an eerie cold presence, on the stairs,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Dedicated to all secret lovers!
Thanks to a pep talk by my daughter,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Dedicated to all Sunset Sea Surfers!
Under the orange sunset sky,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Dedicated to those who are into escapism!
There must be a way out of this asset trap,by Kazytc 39 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 24 7:25 AM 2008. In Contest/Life/Humour/Love/Divorce/Society/Thoughts
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Dedicated to all keepers of the night and sea!
Standing proud against the cobalt blue night sky,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It doesn't matter
what road we decide to travel on.by AudreyEvans 6 lines, 12 comments, on Apr 11 3:12 AM 2008. In Sexual Sensum, Contemporary, Life, Personal, Thoughts, Wisdom, Truth• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Scratching off lottery tickets loose every time,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by edit my world. 61 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 24 3:58 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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If it was possible to forget
what the meaning of l-o-v-eby edit my world. 45 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 22 5:43 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by edit my world. 91 lines, 16 comments, on Jul 21 6:50 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by edit my world. 31 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 7 2:21 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I walked up to the bed
looking sadly at these pillowsby Tempa Lee 36 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 3 8:26 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Lost in thought, My own style• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It's open mic night
Every poet prepare to fightby Tempa Lee 63 lines, 51 comments, on Mar 11 5:26 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Life, My own style, Lost in thought, Freewrite, Personal.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by edit my world. 32 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 5 7:06 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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What if I was to fall in love with you? Honsetly, tell me what would you do?by Tempa Lee 31 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 3 6:58 PM 2008. In Personal, Teenage thinking, Life, Thoughts, Lost in thought, My life, Romance• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Written last year when I had a manby Tempa Lee 238 lines, 13 comments, on Oct 21 5:02 PM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Love, My life, Lost in thought, My own style, Family• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Life is like a Rollercoaster, running all around.
Strap up your faith just like you would your holster, or else you'll hit the ground.by CrazyC87 25 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 14 2:30 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Straight as an arrow is My Vision, but yet My Balance seems blurry.
I strive and fight to do whats right, but sometimes Hope seems to scurby CrazyC87 97 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 18 3:13 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Always and Forever, you will stay in My Heart.by CrazyC87 38 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 11 10:57 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Sorrow so potent I feel I’m on fire
Shes the one person my heart will always desireby WolvenCryOfDespair 139 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 23 9:06 PM 2008. In Epic Tail of Sorrow, Love, Sad, Pain, Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There are bars on the window that I’m looking through.
I put them there.by Still Anonymous 53 lines, 15 comments, on May 29 10:56 AM 2008. In Angst, Life, Personal, Shyness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
So, kids, appreciate the teachers
for Appreciation Week.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
What do you call insanity? / This sense of unreality? / Or something else entirely?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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you on my mind, tears down my faceby xXmiranda-maeXx 23 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 25 11:02 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Life, Pain, Personal, Lost in thought, Longing, Sadness, Depression• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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you think i don't know? think i can't hear?by xXmiranda-maeXx 14 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 27 11:41 AM 2008. In Sad, Thoughts, Life, Love, Lyrics, Pain, Depression, Anger, Teen issues• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It was providence that Valentine's,
when I took the wrong route homeby BlueNote27 67 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 14 10:40 PM 2008. In love, thoughts, memory, valentine, valentine's day• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
And I'll never have to fall again.
Never have to crumble into the earth again.by youhadme-athello. 23 lines, 35 comments, on Jul 20 7:09 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Why do you push me away? I'm not trying to do what you think.by youhadme-athello. 11 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 25 3:57 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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god still rules shame i will enter this i dont have to use my mind
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yay ^^ hehe we always need rules
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You said i could enter 40 times and i probley wont follow the rules so just DQ me fast and quick :]
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its ok, just dont say things like "i love to rape" in your poems, and label your stuff properly lol but i dont think you have any erotica so your safe
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well dont be to sure
I do have one erotica poem :] or two but its not like yeah. its only a tad bit erotica. :] "i love rape" Omg. Not yeah been raped didnt like it. :] so i think i am good :]
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hahaha yayyy =) i'm fo sho entering. woot.
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LOL 172 entries? You're gonna have a busy weekend.
Entering an old one if you don't mind, just cos it didn't get many reads when i first did it. 
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lol oh yeah, but i need to get over 33 comments anyway so why not
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funfunufun
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Fault in listing
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are you just looking on the first page on the contest entries, theres more then one page
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Lost Vampyre
Thank you for putting me straight.How are you able to read and comment on so many poems you should be awarded a gold trophy at least.Best Wishes and my deepest sympathy George -
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thanks hun, ill get round it, 50 poems or so a day should do it, and then ill be set, and if it comes round to it, ill get one of my friends to help me judge
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well holy shit....295+ entries!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOO
lol i think i should just go enter everything i've got and make this contest have 400+entries
oh yeah lol
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Well just so you know, I was only able to enter once. It didn't let me enter anymore. Just FYI.
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hmm thats weird other people have entered lots of times,
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Woah.
You have a lot of entries,
so I'll just add one, haha. :]
Good luck judging and if you need help with it,
I'd be glad to help :]
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thanks huni
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No problem :]
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I thought I had a hard time with 50 entries!
You're gonna have fun judging this
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lol all my contests[ i have 4 going] apart from one have over 50 entries lol
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Oh no!!
Far out
That'd be so hard to judge!
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this will be so hard to judge! I'm glad that yur doin it. I do want you to critique, but I've got a pre-written poem: I'll Always Remember.
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wow...500+ entries..'m gonna feel bad if i enter just 1 poem lol
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Oh my lordy!
Girl do you have your work cut out for you here! My goodness...well you should get commentator of the day at least hey...lol. Phew, not gonna be an easy task...good luck, think you'll need it
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Whoa O.O Thanks for the 3 HM's
Congrats to the winners, all in all
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Thank you for Hosting Bri
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Thank you so much for the honor of Gold...congrat's to all.
Love,
mystic
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