In 23 days, Ok well on August 16th I am leaving the UK to go and live in Australia for a year,
where I hope to meet friends from here but also to take a break away from the 13 years of
education that I have just done. But....I don't think I would be going had it not been for the
fact that I was persuaded that it was a good idea by my mum, and maybe she is right, but
she is thinking on a different wave length. Sometime in August my [use to be] Father is
released from prison and will be free, now me being 18 means I can see him if I wish to
whilst my younger brother and sister do not get the option as they are under 18. To me
it almost seems as if I am being told to run away from the situation, from my family and
the memory's of him. He lives...well will be living about 10 maybe 20 minutes away from my
Grandma. But what if I was staying....what if I did choose to see him....what would I say....
.....what would you say? would your mind run away or in a repeating circle? whats the
first question upon your lips and what bleeds from beneath the permanent bruises....
Rules-
No erotica
I have a right to DQ but I will give warning
I will be honest but not mean, it's your thoughts not mine.
No sticky cap's
No dirty pretty
Nothing longer than 50 lines
Nothing shorter than 5 lines
Swearing acceptable but label correctly.
Just be you and your fault's
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 26, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: closed early due to me closing the account
Contest Winners
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You took away my joy and stole my laughter
My childhood days and what came after• Commented on by judge.
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aww honey i love you, you know that, ima here for you
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Love you too
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I think what would be said depends on the circumstances, if there is pain involved then I would want to know why he did what he did
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I thought you knew what he did...hmm read the authors notes on this poem...http://allpoetry.com/poem/4451061
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I do know my dearest niece was just trying to be a little tender.
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Baby girl ... I just want you to know that no matter your decision ... no matter what ... I am on your side ... I will be back for this ... I hope while you are gone to Australia (which is where I really really wanna go before I die, so you'll have to ell me how it is) that you keep in contact with us. I would die not to hear from you for a whole year. Where will you be staying while you're down there?
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my Grandma's sister lives out there so I am staying with her for a majority of the time and I will still be on here hopefully everyday
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I'd not want to see his face.
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hmm true but he was my father for 12 years and there was a lot of good times in that
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It's never easy put in this position.
I know that I wouldn't want to meet the girl who done a lot to me again, because she scarred me. I know that I still have nightmares about my ex as you know. Sometimes it's best not to be around these people, but others sometimes you just wont confirmation. If you do though, don't be alone with him.
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You'd fucking kill him...
Or you'd fly me there and I'd get to.
I love you
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i cant wait till you move here so i can hug you
i love you so much my twinnty -
Got spit?
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got what now
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Well - wouldn't you need it?
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