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Writes for My AP Daughter...

20 entries

20 lines or less...

My Ap Daughter is down at the moment, due to the distance between her and her love...actually her heart for it is an ocean away...

"when oceans crash against distant shores, two heart cry out,
longing to be as one" ~mysticstorm (just a moments thought) lol

write what ever you think would make her feel better
or would make her feel loved...

It can even be the pain of distance...

P.S. she will be judging this contest...:

thank you,
mystic

please just stay on the subject, someway...metaphor and creativity are welcome...

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 1, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you all for your beautiful and heartfelt entries...the top three hit home to her the most, for that I am grateful...but HM were added for all she loved...
    Blessings,
    mystic

Contest Winners

  1. Too Many Nights
    by Xianaria 24 lines, 15 comments, on May 21 8:35 PM 2008. In Contest, Longing, Love, Personal.
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Tyranny of Love
    by Sweet Sorrow 28 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 23 5:17 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Love
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Rolling Waves Of Love
    Each day that you are away I'll send my love to you
    by Katie Lazette 26 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 24 5:30 PM 2008. In Contest, Life, Love, Thoughts
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Ocean Slumber
    It’s midnight and the world is silent ,there’s not a sound for miles around
    We snuggle together here on the beach and listen to the tide a
    by Jeremy0826 53 lines, 22 comments, on Apr 29 1:44 PM 2006. In Love
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. United By The Miles
    Sweet desires
    Peak on the tip of my tongue
    by Blooming Poet 15 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 5 7:08 PM 2008. In Love, contest, personal, pain, posey
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. Sailing
    by penman 22 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 24 6:10 PM 2008. In Other
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    July 24, 2008
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    "when oceans crash against distant shores, two heart cry out,longing to be as on" ---- Beautiful phrase or quote, but I think an 'e' is missing from the last word.


  • stavykm gold member
    July 24, 2008
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    I'm sending my thoughts and prayers of encouragement to your daughter and her love. Wishing you many blessings with embracing arms of loving comfort.
    Much Love With Many Blessings
    Kelle Marie


  • Xianaria gold member
    August 1, 2008
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    thank you for the gold & congrats to the other winners!