"you are too bare
to my touch;
why is that, love?"
introducing Sailor Ptolema
my co-host; constructive
critism. if you're not able to
take it, then pull up your pants,
and get the hell out.
we want quality poetry.
you know the rules.
tease us.
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- Contest was judged on August 14, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: A to those who entering.
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Entries [9]
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by LaurenLightning--x 26 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 24 6:59 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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Touch not my skin you shall burn Desire be aflame that is no loveby nature mithya 7 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 25 2:08 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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this is a cool contest
....but you don't want me to enter lol
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oh, poo, you best enter!
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I'll see..... 'bare' is not something I've written yet
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yay for sister co-judging
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I happen to agree immensely.
ah, i'm tooooooo
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oh no no no. Intelligent people are not crazy
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lucky fer ya!
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Did you not see Einstein's hair?!
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yes; he had some cringing hair style; could have used conditioner... but was he crazy? hell to the frucking no LOL
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watch yer language, missy! or i'll soon have
yer beloved coffee roasted in my coffee maker while i make you watch me drink it all!
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oh no! no,
don't take my coffee away! anything but that!
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yes, a bit too cruel of a punishment?
sorry, sis! i'll remember that next time, maybe i'll just steal your writing haiku talents! -
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ahahahhaahaha
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Let's go to the time machine & find out
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I would love too; but I left mine while I was visiting Atlantis... it sunk with the city
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What!!!!!!!!!
LMAO...well, I could split my time machine & give you half and see if we land in the future instead of the past. -
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nope, i think we would be stuck in the present...maybe a few minutes in the past.
or maybe you would freeze time! -
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Groovy.
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sounds like a plan! I'll go get my wand!
...opps wrong world
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sure, sure.
and i'll grab my
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Let's see if the Dark Lord approves..
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silly; we have to fight ol' Voldy.... I could use a good challenge
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Don't forget the Death Eaters
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naw; piece of cake. My Roo patronum will kick the death right out of death eater
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Why can't we just poor water on them like the wizard of OZ? it worked for dorothy...
ah, but she's a silly, silly girl!
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a superb thought!
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How could I have not seen this comment? That's fucking hilarious!
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Glad you think so. Not everyone finds me humor some hilarious...that's the price for stayin' with de muggles fer so long, it dun messed up mi witchly head!
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I was talking about Meghan saying her Roo patronus would kick the DEs' asses.
I replied to the wrong one?
But you are funny. -
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Oh, now my pride has deflated so...like Mrs. Dudley's breasts.
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*eyerolls*
Dudley was...odd. -
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Yeah, so? What's wrong with odd?
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oh yes! and I'll grab my firebolt just in case the time machine malfunctions
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LMAO!!!
I'm only riding a Comet Two Sixty.
But, those are flashy.
Okay, that's enough from me about damn broomsticks. I sound like Tonks & Ron -
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oh no...Tonks!! ....
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*teary*
you just had to bring her up! it's okay sis, just think about all the hot men in the world...sitting in starbucks...offering you tiffany's nailpolish and unlimited winnie pooh accessories! -
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ahahahhahaahahahhahahaahahahhahaaahahhahahaah
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And I'll get BuckBeak.
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aww precious beast! How could i have forgotten him!
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And bring Hedwig back to life!!!
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nooooooooooo you're ripping my heart to shreds with these bad memories
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When Hedwig died, I had to take a 2 minute break from reading.
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I stopped breathing for a bit. I was paralyzed with grief
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"stopped breathing for a bit."
GAH, cute snowy owl--it doesn't help that she's cute in the movies.
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but yes! we shall go back and save her! and tonks !!
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& Sirius. & Lupin.
&..Voldy, so we can have more books
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yes!
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I want that damn encyclopedia out NOW
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you know the last book is going to be 2 movies, and J.K.Rowling is going to make a "prequel" to harry potter...
i heard this through the grape vine.
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i hope so!
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I knew...I think that's pretty effed up.
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well, that's what they said...!
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i dont know about you...but werewolves supposedly turn women into nymphos...
poor Tonk.
I stopped breathing too!
Oh, and Dumbledore...
and Snape...
the greasy-headed man! -
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I know
There's an irreparable void because of their deaths and since the books ended
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yes, i agree. look, if they bring moldy back, at least make him hot like. so i drool over at least another hot guy.
i've only counted two...course, i was yawning around that time.
p.s. why didn't they ever call the weasley's firecrotches?
you would think it would happen eventually!
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ahahahhahahahah
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*sigh*
ah, well. how did we even get here?
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Ohh.. awesome quote.. me bookmarking to come back
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hope to see something from you.
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LMAO I know what constructive criticism means from Roo
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yes, constructive; a writing is not "up-to-par" and i need to let it out. or, rather, an butt cover-er! i've already been blocked even when i stated i may be harsh! people, man.
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oh oh me too! high-five! and i made a middle aged man throw a tantrum. Fun times
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i heard. really, i think there are more children on this site than adults.
i am one of them.
which one you ask?
.....oh, i don't know.
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i agree. but you are one of those old-classy children; like me We don't throw tantrums like two-yr olds
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Unless someone steals the coffee. Then we're hunting them down.
>>Oh,my God Becky. Her butt is SO big!<< -
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oh holy coffee grounds!! Death to those thieves who dare steal our coffee!
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oh, yes. i'll go all WANTED on them!
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yes! vigilantes let loose
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oh, but that is the danger!
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i know
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i think i should be worried.
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it means dissection
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oh Sumatra coffee! I LOVE your new rules
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mine? yes, i do to. it seemed appropriate! sorry, about that time machine...you see what had happened was...ooops, forgot you didn't know it was my fault.
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what! it was you!
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...i don't know what you're talking about
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Damn!
that's a lot of messages. You're having way too much fun here! -
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I guess. It's a nice change of pace.
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introducing Sailor Ptolema
my co-host; constructive
critism. if you're not able to
take it, then pull up your pants,
and get the hell out.
we want quality poetry.
In which case, why not pray to Jesus our dear Lord and perhaps he will help you to improve your spelling and English?
you know the rules.
tease us.
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I would really hope that is not meant as an insult towards myself and my co-host. I would hate for such a comment be made in a childish manner.
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*whispers*
Should that be criticism
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I would think so. Not an insult. I don't like insults. I'm usually inclined to say something back.
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Yes...I saw that.
How've you been?
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Skin? Oh what a lot of fuss
About the stuff which circles us
Or should that be encircles? Right
Make sure that it enwraps one tight.
Especially when out at night.
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