I won Pania's PIF
of Favorite things
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2412893
If you enter this contest and win please consider continuing the favorite things theme.
favorite things: You may use all or only one of the prompts.
pottery
garden
brick
left align
no end line rhyme
plain background
no pictures
45 words or fewer
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Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 28, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100
- Final notes: Thanks so much for making my first PIF experience a good one!
Sorry to Kathleen for
giving her the win and making her carry the tradition on.
Some wonderful poetry in this contest- it was much more difficult than I imagined
1. rowan
2. evil tempest
3. dog fish
Mary
Contest Winners
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Bronze trophy winner
Entries [12]
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You harden clay the garden way To fashion lots of potsby cricketjeff 9 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 21 6:38 AM 2008. In Thoughts• Commented on by judge.
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by SoldierOfTheCross 8 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 21 7:25 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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In this garden of redemption, where bird's songs wipe out
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Red brick walkway
led me though a gate,• Commented on by judge.
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lol you never like making it easy do you
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what? are those hard images?... gosh.. i erased my difficult ones...
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lmao...I tried pottery once I got lumps! Gardening all the flowers shrivelled and disappeared and bricks well lets just say I head butt them often lol
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so bricks it is!
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Lol guess it is then!
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I have prewrites or old no longer posted writes that would work for each of those...
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well good.. so then you know how to write for this...
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Damn you no end-line rhyme
You know if I win one of these I'm gonna force you all to rhyme every word
But you didn't say no head rhyme, or mid-line rhyme, or internal rhyme how many rhymes can I get in a poem but not at the end of a line I wonder
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i am actually a huge fan of internal rhyme and subtle end line rhyme
rhyme away
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Was it so thick to make of brick the tools
You see I built on garden silt my kiln
A lottery if pottery was fired
To harden clay the garden way I'll try
A dreadful crime if there's no rhyming lines
But as a tease I'll try to please without
And learn to write without a fight in free
I'll never curse each unrhymed verse for you
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gold!
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I'll do my best to replicate that in an entry, I may re-use the harden clay the garden way line!!! -
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lol.. as long as the rhyme is internal
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if it's TRUE then i can get back to it after i am done watching the movie...
*mumbles* mary is doing fip fip fip
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I can in no way compete in this quickie, but I do like the choices, and I wish everyone the best of luck!
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i would love to
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that is impossible- i've read enough of you
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lol. perhaps, i'll enter for you then!
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damn right you will- chop chop- times a-wasting!
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alright, alright, you got me to enter.
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damn right
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you just sent me into a fit of giggles, really. very, very odd.
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me? or the giggles?
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i suppose a bit of both, but let's mostly place the blame on you.
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LOL.. you may as well remove your entry now...
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dang.
oh, the highness of the bricks, gardens, pottery, and apples. forgive my ignorance.
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i GOT no apples NO more
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i feel gypped.
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but did you see the replacement image?
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yes, and i found it highly entertaining!
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oh... closed
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serves her right for being awesome
weeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.... thanks you.
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Thanks for hosting M congratulations to the winners
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Thanks for the contest and your comments.
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Thanks, I think... lol. And congrats to everyone.
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