I had to close this contest.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 20, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 550, Silver: 350, Bronze: 250
- Final notes: It was a tough one I had only been able to keep the contest up for about 4 hrs and i had 10 entries. I couldnt keep the picture up apparently some nitwit got affended by it which I dont understand because it definetly was not the guy in the pic he actually has the pic up where people can view it. so I had to close it and although i loved all of your work these were my favorites ones in order.
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You step out of the steamy shower And wipe the foggy mirror• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Your words are dribble.
Truthless, unoriginal dribble.by Hirestel 36 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 20 2:28 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Have you looked in the mirror? Is that a beach ball or a beer gut?• Commented on by judge.
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can we make it bloody and sick?
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yeah u can lol just be mean lol i dont care as long as it is mean
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ooh ill bookmark then
im good at being sick and mean
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remind me not to upset you then
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i meant in my poems silly
i cant hurt loved ones
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hehe thats ok then.
you
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no i understand lol sorry this is honestly something she needs and he has done a lot worse i thought id cheer her up. so guys dont be afraid to be harsh nobody is perfect.
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he looks like a bit of a wanker, to be honest.
as long as you slag off my ex, he's the same verbally, mentally, emotionally, physically and sexually abusive. Nice man. -
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he is a bit of a wanker as u say. i mean he calls her names all the time and the girl is definetly not bad looking and yes he has been violent and so i guess this can be about him and all the others out there who r just like him.
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too bad my meanest poem is a pre-write.. plus it already won a trophy.. it was a furious poem written for someone also .. so genuine angry furious feelings..
anyways, good luck to all and i hope you cheer your friend up coz that guy sure is not worth the attention of a pig! (not meaning to offend.. i'm just saying he's not worth anything)
Nooni
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Well I would love to see it.
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i know ur contest is over but if u have time please check out the angry poem i was telling you about.. here is the link:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4119477
Nooni
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hey ... can we curse? hehe
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Yes you may curse and say whatever you feel as long as its not nice lol
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well... you are in for a treat!
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Great cant wait. let me know which one u wrote so i can of course comment on other work of yours as well.
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