enter any prewrite you'd like -- your favourite, the poem you think needs the most work, something you just wrote for a contest yesterday... as long as it's a prewrite.
there is a catch, though: i will be completely honest when commenting on your piece. do not enter if you cannot take criticism. i may add more points/trophies if i get great entries.
-hiraeth
ps: i am allergic to bad rhyme and whiny "poems" about love, jesus, heartbreak, suicide, or how ~~he duznt luv mi so ill slash mi vi/rg/in wRiStS~~.
there is a catch, though: i will be completely honest when commenting on your piece. do not enter if you cannot take criticism. i may add more points/trophies if i get great entries.
-hiraeth
ps: i am allergic to bad rhyme and whiny "poems" about love, jesus, heartbreak, suicide, or how ~~he duznt luv mi so ill slash mi vi/rg/in wRiStS~~.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 26, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 400
- Final notes: Congrats to all
Contest Winners
-
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 4449929, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Entries [130]
-
I spent two weeks in Hawaii.
Stayed in a hotel right on the beach.by Charles Johnson 60 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 14 4:03 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
Your definition of friendship
Is skewed beyond beliefby poeticdestiny 15 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 31 10:58 PM 2007. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by whos my humblepie 27 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 24 12:27 PM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Dedication, My own style• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
licking lilies, droplets of serenities tiny foot steps, dancing the evergreen• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
It has no legs but it always dances.
It has no lungs but it depends on air.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Those multitudes of sin are
variations on a theme -by jjbreunig3 32 lines, 59 comments, on Jan 13 12:36 PM 2007. In Spiritual• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Worshipped by all, she has
Servants of fire and warmthby limechic 22 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 17 12:59 PM 2008. In Selfishness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When you’ve slept enough, your mind lets you go to a place
new and fresh, lets you select your beat on the threshold• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Your heartache is not my fault;
Place the blame on someone else.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by nilav 64 lines, 24 comments, on Aug 20 5:15 AM 2006. In Contemporary• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
I first saw you at a table, shaded by a white umbrella, and fearless of what you might think, I walked up to you and smiled.by Suzianne 38 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 19 9:50 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
-
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
You and me, have no relationship.by AdulteratingDeploy 35 lines, 18 comments, on Jul 15 4:59 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
The Angels fall embers burning,
the wings go ashen ever turning.by Frankenchrist 29 lines, 23 comments, on Apr 14 10:54 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Lost in m'blood desire
watching the enemy at large• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
A rocker-type feel..
..I guess• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Needing to delve
deep into your soulby crazymomma 11 lines, 52 comments, on Sep 10 1:04 PM 2005. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by ShadowsMidnightRose 24 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 17 11:57 PM 2008. In Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Life, Nature, Death, My own style• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
strangers roaming
hollow soil,by Salt Therapy 38 lines, 14 comments, on Jul 4 5:15 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
At first sight you see a perfect girl.
One who has done nothing wrong, ever.by B.m.w 10 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 18 6:17 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
As if living out a fantasy I walk around with my head in a fogby Kim 30 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 8 10:23 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
child of the night
don't you cryby Darkwell 33 lines, 25 comments, on Jul 7 2:57 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
O! Wretched be The man who whistles loud and longby JamesLinde 13 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 16 10:18 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
This is my apology note A poem that must be shownby Midgetbridgey 11 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 30 11:17 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
(Let me chisel talk you)by nature mithya 211 lines, 13 comments, on Jun 28 2:31 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
I remember my apples full of sunlight
and staring at churches at duskby Hadji Murad 49 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 16 5:28 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The sun cannot always stay.by Shya 11 lines, 9 comments, on May 3 4:10 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
The rain fell in heavy drops,
Descending from the moonlit sky.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I am loyally independant, and so subliminaly scarred,
theres no way to type me up and send it, cuz i am unknown.. i am from Mars..by CrazyC87 37 lines, on Jul 20 6:53 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
There, in the glen, the hunter hides
by Maldronah 40 lines, 12 comments, on Sep 9 11:01 PM 2006• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I never thought that she'd be taken from me The tiny life I held so close to my heartby Yesterdays Memory 31 lines, 19 comments, on Jul 4 12:19 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
Peter loved writing poetry
Even when he was at schoollby judmc 98 lines, 50 comments, on Mar 12 4:00 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
55 lines without spacing..
by marciakay81 81 lines, 19 comments, on Jan 29 9:01 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Remember me when I am dead...by sunflowers21573 14 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 21 8:35 PM 2008. In Sadness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
this is my heartfelt note to my suicide
i love a girl who cannot and will not love me back• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
-
Sitting here in the dark
The day time pillar of strengthby poetic freedom 17 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 18 7:00 PM 2006. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The inescapable actions of timeby SamishiiUnabara 100 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 21 9:47 PM 2008. In Dark, Wierd, Science, Nature, Philosophy, Time, Decay, Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
“The cup is half full (of sulfuric acid) “ The sky is filled with a billion billion stars, only a small fraction of which we can seeby AdamAdkins 35 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 5 2:53 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Dark, Hope, Depression, Humanity, Loss, Lost in thought• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
Been drinkin' all night at the corner bar
and singin' for my supper, no money so far.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Please read while in the darkness of your own nightmares so as to do the poem justice• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
There is a shadow upon me, as if my eyes are tightly closed.My heart grows weak as it acquiesces to the cold. In this world of dreams, I haven't felt in so long, and my lungs are beginning to burn as if I'm drowning• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
They don't understand me
I just want to be freeby Metalchica 11 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 27 6:28 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
The street changes the direction of the universe,
The moon follows the steeple;• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Dedicated to all who like to be spooked!
There was an eerie cold presence, on the stairs,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm a reject among rejects, I'm a fool among fools,by Sticks-And-Stones 16 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 21 11:16 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
Roger Ebert's made his decision Writing in Chicago Sun-Times• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
My eyes... Two soulless windows to the abyss..• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
While I was younger and losing my teeth When I still believed in fairy tales and make believe• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
A simple gust of air inhales; Someone gingerly grasps your hand,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
by fullfathomfive 55 lines, 5 comments, on May 25 6:46 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
I've got nothing more to say to you, no more words to speak I have no more tears to cry for you and no more thoughts to thinkby dreamweaver08 19 lines, on Jul 13 1:01 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
by UrbaN PlaguE 16 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 28 7:01 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
Lets you and me put on a party for the living,
while the dead watch in envy.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Though angels claim they are exempt / I saw it in their eyes—contempt / And dancing in that summer rain / they bled their song—a sweet refrby Intravenous Jesus 59 lines, 20 comments, on Jul 7 7:17 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
-
once i felt love,
i lived the extreamby SuicidalGhost 14 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 1 6:21 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Step aside dearest.
I don't want to be your shadow.by JustGoWithIt 18 lines, 7 comments, on May 22 5:47 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
Add a comment
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
-
Cooooooooooooooooooool.
I can't write for
nowadays, even though I'd never have a chance anyway 
-
-
you should enter
did you ever post the poem you sent me? it needs to be on allpoetry! -
-
Still haven't figured out an ending! BAHH
-
-
-
gee! g'luck with judgin!!! you have so many entries!
-
Floored...and delighted. Thank you darling for the marvelous nod and congrats to everyone else!
Adding your comment:
1 - 5 of 5
