enter any prewrite you'd like -- your favourite, the poem you think needs the most work, something you just wrote for a contest yesterday... as long as it's a prewrite.
there is a catch, though: i will be completely honest when commenting on your piece. do not enter if you cannot take criticism. i may add more points/trophies if i get great entries.
-hiraeth
ps: i am allergic to bad rhyme and whiny "poems" about love, jesus, heartbreak, suicide, or how ~~he duznt luv mi so ill slash mi vi/rg/in wRiStS~~.
there is a catch, though: i will be completely honest when commenting on your piece. do not enter if you cannot take criticism. i may add more points/trophies if i get great entries.
-hiraeth
ps: i am allergic to bad rhyme and whiny "poems" about love, jesus, heartbreak, suicide, or how ~~he duznt luv mi so ill slash mi vi/rg/in wRiStS~~.
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- Closed for judging on August 31
- Rewards: Gold: 300
Preliminary Finalists
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by the atlantic 60 lines, 27 comments, on Jul 14 9:56 PM. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I spent two weeks in Hawaii.
Stayed in a hotel right on the beach.by hopeles-romantic 60 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 14 4:03 PM
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Your definition of friendship
Is skewed beyond beliefby poeticdestiny 15 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 31 10:58 PM 2007. In Personal. Reward• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by whos my humblepie 27 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 24 12:27 PM. In Personal, Thoughts, Dedication, My own style• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Falling for you once again
I dream, but it hurts even moreby thunder.xx.paradise 52 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 3 3:24 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
licking lilies, droplets of serenities tiny foot steps, dancing the evergreen• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It has no legs but it always dances.
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Those multitudes of sin are
variations on a theme -by jjbreunig3 32 lines, 57 comments, on Jan 13 12:36 PM 2007. In Spiritual. Reward• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Worshipped by all, she has
Servants of fire and warmthby limechic 22 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 17 12:59 PM. In Selfishness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When you’ve slept enough, your mind lets you go to a place
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Helium filled assurances
charge twopence&nbsby Sailor Ptolema 12 lines, 18 comments, on Jun 29 3:15 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Your heartache is not my fault;
Place the blame on someone else.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
WARby nilav 64 lines, 24 comments, on Aug 20 5:15 AM 2006. In Contemporary• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The sea kicks up strange
Fossils of timeby mightyafrowhitey 167 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 15 2:53 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Songs are never, as beautiful...
...Through my broken lips, and• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I first saw you at a table, shaded by a white umbrella, and fearless of what you might think, I walked up to you and smiled.by ticket2write 38 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 19 9:50 PM• Commented on by judge.
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You and me, have no relationship.by omgwtfkmart 35 lines, 17 comments, on Jul 15 4:59 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The Angels fall embers burning,
the wings go ashen ever turning.by Frankenchrist 29 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 14 10:54 PM. Reward• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Lost in m'blood desire
watching the enemy at large• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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by Perfect Fox-Goddess 19 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 15 4:13 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A rocker-type feel..
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Needing to delve
deep into your soulby crazymomma 11 lines, 55 comments, on Sep 10 1:04 PM 2005. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
*~*~*~*by ShadowsMidnightRose 24 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 17 11:57 PM. In Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Life, Nature, Death, My own style• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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all you hear• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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strangers roaming
hollow soil,by Salt Therapy 38 lines, 14 comments, on Jul 4 5:15 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
At first sight you see a perfect girl.
One who has done nothing wrong, ever.by B.m.w 10 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 18 6:17 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
As if living out a fantasy I walk around with my head in a fogby Kim 30 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 8 10:23 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I heard you're sorry for how bad things got before
But if I start to believe you again, I'd be right. back. when;;• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
child of the night
don't you cryby Darkwell 33 lines, 17 comments, on Jul 7 2:57 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
O! Wretched be The man who whistles loud and longby JamesLinde 13 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 16 10:18 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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This is my apology note A poem that must be shownby Midgetbridgey 11 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 30 11:17 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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(Let me chisel talk you)by nature mithya 211 lines, 11 comments, on Jun 28 2:31 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The sun cannot always stay.by Shya 11 lines, 8 comments, on May 3 4:10 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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With Nature, one, are all things here: sky, sea and land in silence stand. Such timelessness. The seconds near, float fanlike, linked by me• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The rain fell in heavy drops,
Descending from the moonlit sky.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
plastic breaths push in and out,
& fragile ribs ripple beneath flawless new skin.by aanika-xox 64 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 15 9:03 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Come on a little flutter frist
A flutter walk with me• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Ink spills across the paper / From the frenzy in my pen. / A silly-happy poem / Of the world of Other's ken.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I am loyally independant, and so subliminaly scarred,
theres no way to type me up and send it, cuz i am unknown.. i am from Mars..by CrazyC87 37 lines, on Jul 20 6:53 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by Edna Sweetlove 31 lines, 122 comments, on Feb 8 12:38 PM 2005. In Adult humour, Lavatorial Happenings, Parody• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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There, in the glen, the hunter hides
by Maldronah 38 lines, 11 comments, on Sep 9 11:01 PM 2006• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I never thought that she'd be taken from me The tiny life I held so close to my heartby XKeeperOfTheStarsX 31 lines, 14 comments, on Jul 4 12:19 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Peter loved writing poetry
Even when he was at schoollby judmc 98 lines, 45 comments, on Mar 12 4:00 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
55 lines without spacing..
by marciakay81 81 lines, 20 comments, on Jan 29 9:01 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Remember me when I am dead...by sunflowers21573 14 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 9 2:27 PM. In Sadness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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why?by TheUglySceneGirl... 37 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 20 10:02 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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this is my heartfelt note to my suicide
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Sitting here in the dark
The day time pillar of strengthby poetic freedom 17 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 18 7:00 PM 2006. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i swolled my pride and
took the dive under the ocean• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The inescapable actions of timeby SamishiiUnabara 100 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 21 9:47 PM. In Dark, Wierd, Science, Nature, Philosophy, Time, Decay, Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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~*~by Never Fall in Love 48 lines, 19 comments, on Jul 8 12:56 AM. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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“The cup is half full (of sulfuric acid) “ The sky is filled with a billion billion stars, only a small fraction of which we can seeby AdamAdkins 35 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 5 2:53 PM. In Thoughts, Dark, Hope, Depression, Humanity, Loss, Lost in thought• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Suicide-and-Cocaine 16 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 18 1:52 AM. In Personal, Sad, Melancholy, Contest-Entery• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Cooooooooooooooooooool.
I can't write for
nowadays, even though I'd never have a chance anyway 
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you should enter
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Still haven't figured out an ending! BAHH
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gee! g'luck with judgin!!! you have so many entries!
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