I want you to be inspired by this song...it is one of my favorites and i want to see what you can come up with!!! if you have a prewritten poem that fits, go ahead and put it in.
Im stuck with writing songs
just to forget, what they really were about
and these words
are bringing me,so deeply in debt
that I don't think I can dig my way out.
i couldn't breathe you in
like i need to
and the words don't mean a thing.
so i'll sing this song to you,
for the last time.
and my heart is torn in two,
thinkin' of days spent without you.
and there is nothing left to prove
im counting all the things i coulda done,
to make you see that i wanted us to be
what i go to sleep and dream of
i want you to know that i'd die for you.
i'd die for you.
i couldn't breathe you in like i need to
and the words don't mean a thing
so i'll sing this song to you for the last time.
and my heart is torn in two
thinkin' of days spent without you.
and there's nothing else to prove
and if you are alone make sure you're not lonely.
cuz if you are i blame myself.
for never being home.
i know im not the only one
who will treat you like they should.
like you deserve.
im stuck with writing songs just to forget.
so i'll sing this song to you
for the last time.
and my heart is torn in two.
thinkin' of days spent without you.
and there's nothing left to prove.
there's nothing
there's nothing
there's nothing left to prove
~Last Time by Secondhand Serenade
Just write what you feel
Im stuck with writing songs
just to forget, what they really were about
and these words
are bringing me,so deeply in debt
that I don't think I can dig my way out.
i couldn't breathe you in
like i need to
and the words don't mean a thing.
so i'll sing this song to you,
for the last time.
and my heart is torn in two,
thinkin' of days spent without you.
and there is nothing left to prove
im counting all the things i coulda done,
to make you see that i wanted us to be
what i go to sleep and dream of
i want you to know that i'd die for you.
i'd die for you.
i couldn't breathe you in like i need to
and the words don't mean a thing
so i'll sing this song to you for the last time.
and my heart is torn in two
thinkin' of days spent without you.
and there's nothing else to prove
and if you are alone make sure you're not lonely.
cuz if you are i blame myself.
for never being home.
i know im not the only one
who will treat you like they should.
like you deserve.
im stuck with writing songs just to forget.
so i'll sing this song to you
for the last time.
and my heart is torn in two.
thinkin' of days spent without you.
and there's nothing left to prove.
there's nothing
there's nothing
there's nothing left to prove
~Last Time by Secondhand Serenade
Just write what you feel
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 26, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 250, Bronze: 150, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: i thought all five poems were very good... but i chose Given because i felt it meant the most to me! congratulations to all!!
- To judge this contest, you need to have at least as many finalists as you have rewards. You have 4 awards but only 3 finalists.
Contest Winners
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by endofgame123 24 lines, 5 comments, on May 10 5:58 PM 2008. In Love, Personal, Regret
Bronze trophy winner
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
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Just a random poem that came to me when I did something that I shouldn't have.by B.m.w 17 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 6 10:34 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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