Sex. Or lack thereof.
Give it to me like it really is.
None of this "quivering manhood / gentle caress / he unbottons my blouse" kinda crap.
Ten lines or less, because...let's face it... sex rarely lasts long enough to warrant more lines.
Create a story between real people in an honest-to-God moment.
Free verse only.
No slap-stick comedy. I just can't appreciate it.
Don't describe the sexual act. I get it. I've done it. I don't need to read it. Go further than the obvious. The act itself is easy enough to write about. It's the nuances I want.
Cinemax, Late Night
We watched soft porn and were sure to sit
at least four inches apart. When we go to bed
tonight and knot ourselves up in angry red
sheets, I'll wonder if you are dreaming of sex
or me or any combination of us, because I
have missed your penis, the whole sha-bang.
Give it to me like it really is.
None of this "quivering manhood / gentle caress / he unbottons my blouse" kinda crap.
Ten lines or less, because...let's face it... sex rarely lasts long enough to warrant more lines.
Create a story between real people in an honest-to-God moment.
Free verse only.
No slap-stick comedy. I just can't appreciate it.
Don't describe the sexual act. I get it. I've done it. I don't need to read it. Go further than the obvious. The act itself is easy enough to write about. It's the nuances I want.
Cinemax, Late Night
We watched soft porn and were sure to sit
at least four inches apart. When we go to bed
tonight and knot ourselves up in angry red
sheets, I'll wonder if you are dreaming of sex
or me or any combination of us, because I
have missed your penis, the whole sha-bang.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 1, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Thank you everyone! As I said in the closing notes of my other contest, I apologize for the lack of comments. House-hunting and bidding wars have gotten the better of me these past two weeks. I appreciate your time, effort and... best of all... honesty. Be sure to read the winners. They're a hoot!
Contest Winners
Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
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I arrive to the house, entering a room lacking anyone else.
He wraps his arms around my waist, eager already.by LittleMissFaith 10 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 15 7:31 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Igniting that fire How erotic and free.by nature mithya 14 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 17 1:56 AM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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by christopherbailey 9 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 17 4:03 PM 2008. In Thoughts• Viewed by judge.
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You write your challenge from surrender position With two limbs held in the air in defeatby obsidianrose843 13 lines, on Jul 27 2:08 AM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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ahhh i fuckin love you for this contest!
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Now write something for it!
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excellent!
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You know you want to.
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throbbing manhood! throbbing manhood!
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Seriously now. I'd be skerred if manhoods literally throbbed! Eeck!
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ewww, i know! my friend and i have been scarred by the bad erotica we read to each other in russian accents.
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And reading it in Russian accents makes it.... better? LOL
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the voices are soothing and distract from the horror lurking within such... er, fine literature? lol
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Yeah, I suppose a french accent would make it worse, eh?
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huh huh, voulez-vous coucher avec moi en mon lit d'ardeur? mon pénis n'a pas des maladies!
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Did you just say you had a malady of the penis? LOL
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lol no, i said my penis doesn't have any. but i'm a liar, as i don't have a penis
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lol. Good to know.
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Thank you.
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