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Wanted: Free Verse rich in metaphor

Choose one of the following prompts/themes:

mother's hands

on the wind

prayer

metamorphosis


Rules:

Free verse only!

Use metaphor!

20 lines or fewer of succinct, powerful imagery

Left align and plain backgrounds only.

No prewrites.

If you don't follow the above rules, I will warn so you may correct, but if you don't...sorry. DQ!

I may add points depending on quality of entries.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 1, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 150, Honorable mention: 4 people
  • Final notes:
    I was very pleased with the quality of the entries in this contest. I truly enjoyed reading and rereading each poem. So tough to judge with so many fine pieces. Thanks everyone and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

    P.S. HM's are in no particular order.

Contest Winners

  1. by MJ Donnelly 15 lines, 15 comments, on Jul 15 9:03 AM 2008. In Personal, Memories, Life
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Each day
    I feel for the wind
    by cricketjeff 21 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 15 10:09 AM 2008. In Love, Free verse
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4427323, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  4. Of silent, frozen wintry nights
    by penman 22 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 15 6:24 PM 2008. In Other
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. When the earth was not known,
    No Sun was there in the sky,
    by Freelance writer 23 lines, 15 comments, on Jul 16 6:30 AM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. I placed myself in
    a cocoon to protect me
    by Metaphorist 23 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 20 8:19 PM 2008. In Hope
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. by amaranthine lover 8 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 18 3:13 PM 2008. In Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Abstract, noguest
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    July 15, 2008
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    mother's hands was the one that jumped out at me, too. I'm bookmarking and will try to come up with something from one of these prompts. Good luck with your contest.


    whisper


    • BellaD
      July 15, 2008
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      Great! Looking forward to reading your entry.
      BellaD


  • Shiori-The-Creator
    July 15, 2008
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    AURGH!

    Sorry for the sudden outburst in text, but every time I edit my poem, it still says "21 lines" on this page, and it says "19 lines" on the inside! If this doesn't change, please don't DQ me.


  • adsaige
    July 15, 2008
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    mother's hands is a very inspirational
    one. i wanted to try for a different one
    than the majority, but alas, i fell
    victim!


    • BellaD
      July 15, 2008
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      Hey, the more the merrier, right? Besides, everyone will put his or her personal spin on the prompt.
      BellaD


  • aeolia
    July 15, 2008
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    going to reserve; i'll start on it after i finish my homework


  • lively banter
    July 17, 2008
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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    July 18, 2008
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    Hi, I really want to enter your contest, but I am busy entering so many others right now. I am going away for the week coming up and won’t be back till the 27th. Is it alright that I reserve and am able to come back that Sunday with the contest not judged yet? Or that’s not possible? I can write the piece no problem, it’ll be written very quickly, I just need the time when I get back and settled. Is that ok?


    • BellaD
      July 18, 2008
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      Yes, go ahead and reserve and submit your poem when you return. Looking forward to reading your work!
      BellaD


  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 28, 2008
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    hmmm intresting. yes.


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    August 1, 2008
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    Thank you so very much, and this contest was a bit of a family affair in that you awarded my niece "adsaige" bronze, again thanks!


    sincerely,
    mj.

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