I am sad and lonely
may be from my page
you will think there are so many
but i really want to get
someone who will care
someone who wish to share
i wanna get real affection
for whom i will be a passion
is it you?
will you care me??
write a poem no more than 20 sentence and no less than 08 sentence
no pre write allowed..the A.N should mention that the poem is for me
i wish you good luck...
no no i actually wish myself the luck
Remember i dont need so called 'Love', i need care and attention
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 24, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 333, Silver: 111, Bronze: 55, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: Thank you everybody for joining the contest
i wish you all enjoyed as i have enjoyed all the entries
and whatever the result is..everybody has entered with a great poem
take care
wish to be friends for life
Contest Winners
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 4426813, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Through the pain of centuries, A soul must wander alone• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Somedays I swear no one is there,
and I've searched for someone to care.• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [15]
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by MorganTea 29 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 14 8:59 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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You say you're alone but im right here, call me and and ill calm your fear,by SaviDropKick.Oi. 17 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 14 2:07 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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I hope you can feel how sincere I am to walk into your life . I want to show you how much I care just read what I write .I help so many eby storiesuntold 19 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 14 10:59 AM 2008. In Care• Commented on by judge.
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I don't understand why women these days Don't see someone with their heart• Commented on by judge.
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the first time that i met you i knew i couldn't go• Commented on by judge.
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They talk about you
like your not thereby Killian Nightwind 12 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 21 3:45 AM 2008. In Constest, Personal, Life, Other• Commented on by judge.
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awww dude!
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Sorry to hear you're feeling lonely.
I'm not sure I'm qualified to enter since I know you but I wish you luck finding people.
Your contest title needs an "about" or "for" (care about/for me).
the drawing is pretty, did you make it? -
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thanks a lot
and anybody can enter -
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you're welcome
Hope it cheers you up.
I'll see if I can come up with anything.
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aww
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i dnt understand so we write a poem o u about wot ur lonely ness an pain or like some thing to try to cheer u up
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if you wanna win my heart with your care then write a poem
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yh ok i wil try my best to win your heart
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I'll see what I can do.
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Oh, just a heads-up, you say you don't allow pre-writes but you'll have to edit your contest not to allow them. As it is it's allowing them and some people won't care what you say in the contest description, I know from experience.
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I might enter
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Learning to care about yourself comes first and then about others...then others shall care for you also, unconditionally.
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A sister's love is what I give
nothing asked for to be return
just let me be here if you need
a shoulder to cry on...
or one to talk to..
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Smile :)
Ok I am writing one for you now. I 'm not sure this is what you had in mind But win or loose your still my favorite person on AP and I hope it at least makes you smile. -
While reading always remember what they alwayss say
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perhaps, i shall enter this...
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I finally posted it I hope it is what you had in mind.
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