I would like to see all those poems soaked in rhyme. The more lines that rhyme with the same sound, the better.
You may add poems which have more than one rhyme sound.
The subject is up to you, can be anything.
Mark erotica as Adult.
I prefer good grammar, punctuation and spelling, so please revise your entries before posting.
You may add a new poem or a pre-write.
Most of all... have fun with the english language!
Below is an example of one of my own mega-rhyming poems to give you an idea of what I'd like to see.
Shredded Dress of Red Velour
Behind a darkened hidden door,
From blood which swelled upon the floor,
Leaching from her inner core,
She filled the ink well’s empty store;
Her emotions running raw,
And penned her florid mind’s explore.
Romantic prose, stained soft velour,
On which her heart she did out-pour,
The castle knights and maiden’s lore,
And the flame charged matador;
Where lovers love for evermore,
Kept hidden well in secret’s drawer.
In time she grew within more sure,
‘Twas a craftsman’s pen she bore;
She opened up the jemmied door,
Flung far her nagging craw,
To excite her prose galore.
Then she came upon a shore,
A master artist couldn’t draw,
He drew forth the longest straw,
His eager heart moved to adore.
With fine words to reassure,
They found new heights in love to soar.
But then in guilty’s haze he tore,
This union’s bond of evermore,
Although his passion, all a-roar,
The lusty primate carnivore,
His intention to ignore,
Showed the depth of his deplore.
Now left alone upon the moor,
Where she roamed the knolls before,
In shredded dress of red velour,
Did this spirit at her gnaw.
She fell helpless to the floor,
Below the galing sycamore.
And there she lay, a broken whore,
A ravaged beauty to abhor,
For the words she did out-pour,
Charmed temptation through her door.
Behind the door she did explore,
Now love won’t touch her evermore.
By alby
This is my first contest so I hope it will be successful!
Looking forward to all your entries...alby
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 17, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 800, Silver: 500, Bronze: 300, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: I thank you all for entering such wonderful poems in my contest. They were all a pleasure to read. The contest has now been judged.
Contest Winners
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Now the uniform that won fair maid is worn, drawn fringes frayed, as if chip by chip the paint had torn from weather-worn façade.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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deep in mother's womb
fertile seed, turned to bloomby sassylilpoet 7 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 21 3:17 AM 2007. In Life, Mother Nature
Honorable mention
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [15]
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I dreamed that I met the Devil
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Upon the Earth there use to be, A heart to love, an eye to see.by gigglesgdl 21 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 13 1:33 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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Dancing within a liquid mirror, Radiating brilliance as the facets quiverby Avatar of Innocence 17 lines, 2 comments, on May 9 9:16 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I know he is here, but I sure can't tell you where,by Shirley Shaw 45 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 13 1:55 AM 2008. In Life, Love, Dark, Hope, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Dreams Of Non-Reality..• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Don't be afraid of twilight
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Deep within the underworld, a spirit waits for me
He holds the book of wisdom and creativity• Commented on by judge.
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woot! alby... I can't wait to join... I hope you post it in our group.
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*Grin* great! I can't wait to see your entry!
I will put it in our group if you like.
alby
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Dear Alby
Man oh man! This contest has drawn out some of the big guns on the site! Glad they are not aiming at me!
Young man in college writes home for some financial assistance...
Dear Dad,
No mon
no fun
Your son.
To which the father replies...
Dear Son,
So sad
Too bad
Your Dad
Have a good contest!
John
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Lol, good one!...you've got the idea my friend...keep rhyming! Have a great day...alby
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Alby
Is the contest over and judged? I would like to know the results if so! -
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When all the spaces were full it automatically closed for judging early. I still have nine more to comment on before I judge. I hope to finish as soon as possible, but probably won't be able to complete the task for another two days. I'll see how I go with time today...alby
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Dang, I missed it... I JUST FINISHED WRITING it ...
I'm SORRY!!!!!
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