My emotions are raw and confused at the moment.
The guy I was planning to kind of split ties with is speaking to me as normal, romantic and sweet and I can't find the words, plus I'm in love with him.
So anyway, I feel like his whore... I feel like his plaything, but I fear even more than he might grow to love me too and that he actually does care.
If this makes sense to you, that's good.
So this is the kind of dp themed thing, though you can enter any type of dp, can be traditional or not... punctuation or none, as long as the inner beautiful disaster is evident.
Rules
1. Yeah ummm please label entries correctly.
2. Please don't enter a piece that has been in one of my contests already.
3. Fresh writes or prewrites... As many as you like, enter all the prewrites that haven't been in one of my contests if you like.
4. Please just ask if you have any questions, don't presume. Oh, unless you don't know what dp is, then please don't ask... Explained a dozen times in the last week alone.
Anyway, go to it kids...oh and if you can't gain any inspiration, here's some phrases/titles to inspire you... oh points and trophies will be added...no whining yup, that's a good rule. RAW emotion.
1. i'd rather die that dine with you.
2. I don't know you, therefore I cannot hate you. Though if I hate you, you can guarantee I truly know you.
3. Someone elses star's shining up in the sky & my prince charming's off with a princess.
4. Forgotten [Again]
5. It didn't matter when you were making me cry, so why is it any of your business if I see a guy?
6. baby I've tried so hard to put up with your maybe we will's, maybe we wont's, but I'm getting tired of waiting.
7. am I just your whore, someone to call up when you're feeling in the mood?
~My Suggestions~
Too much punctuation will make the write a little odd. Add it where it needs emphasis, if you are going to use it. D.o.n.t d|o t^h^i^s when it's more appropriate to add it where it's really n e e d e d.
Please try and check spellings, it's distracting if the poem is full of spelling mistakes, no matter what style of poetry it is. The odd slip up is understandable, but every other word, I'm afraid it wont stand a chance.
Please use emotive language, metaphors, imagery and expressiveness in your piece, this is the number one thing I want from your writes. It shows depth.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 30
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: Stunning, absolutely adore these writes, so hard to pick winners but finally managed to choose 5! Wonderful everyone, keep writing! xxx
Contest Winners
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A .:♥:skeptical:♥:. s.c.h.e.m.e
T/e/a/r/i/by YoureNoGoodForMe 50 lines, 18 comments, on Jul 6 6:47 PM. In Dirty Pretty, Thoughts, Contest
Gold trophy winner
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by sinnocence 37 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 11 11:45 PM. In Personal, Pain, Contest, Adult, Abuse, Dirty pretty
Silver trophy winner
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by PerfectionIsPoison 32 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 5 7:06 PM
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the swings swung too fast for us.by aanika-xox 38 lines, 15 comments, on Jun 24 2:10 PM
Honorable winner• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [59]
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by PerfectionIsPoison 45 lines, 30 comments, on Aug 24 11:16 PM 2007. In Dirty Pretty• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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my finger‘tips’ are st[rain]ing to re:cover:
the {stained} £ifeby Brit-Girl 22 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 10 12:22 PM. In Dirty Pretty, Love, Personal, Thoughts, Sad, Dark, Pain, Contest, Contemporar• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by PerfectionIsPoison 34 lines, 18 comments, on Jul 10 2:08 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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monogamy for dirty pretty princesses
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by Ms Sexy 50 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 9 11:13 PM. In Contest, Adult, Pain, My own style, Lost in thought, Lost love, Anger• Commented on by judge.
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You are stabbed and you feel almost strangled.
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take a look seeby PerfectionIsPoison 26 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 30 8:47 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Life was good back in the old woods
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by Kyo-N 34 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 6 6:04 AM. In Contest, Society, Contemporary, Humanity, Lost love, Love, Dedication, Message• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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His puppet, tug of stringby CinfullyDelicious 53 lines, 22 comments, on Jul 4 5:02 AM. In DIRTY PRETTY• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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*T*O*E*T*H*£*R we F£Ll,~
Sby Schizo-Angel-Dying 33 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 24 8:06 AM 2007. In Dirty Pretty• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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The disasterous perfection
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its Sunday night.four-o-six AM.
;;by glamour guts 39 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 10 9:17 PM. In best friend?, Personal, Angst, My own style, Friendship• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by PhantomsAngel87 27 lines, 13 comments, on Nov 6 5:12 AM 2007. In 7 Deadly Sins, Dirty Pretty, Adult, Noguest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I sew you up.
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by PerfectionIsPoison 45 lines, 24 comments, on Jul 14 11:38 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by PerfectionIsPoison 35 lines, 14 comments, on Jul 12 9:13 PM. In Sad, Personal, Love, Thoughts, Dirty Pretty• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Tamaska Forsaken 36 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 6 3:45 AM. In [[dirty.pretty]]• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I wish I knew what you were thinking, I wish I knew how you really felt,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I would rather
x.x{die}x.xby Brit-Girl 21 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 10 10:21 PM. In Dirty Pretty, Anorexia, Contest, Teen issues, Hope, Life• Commented on by judge. -
Those are,
Virgin thoughtsby nature mithya 21 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 13 6:03 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
He is my hero...
Big strong arms and• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by PerfectionIsPoison 34 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 11 3:01 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Oh for shame, I thought you were mine to claim.
I had you tightly tangled, your lovely wings were mangled.by VanGoghNights 27 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 14 4:57 AM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Oh Heavenly foe, what intrusion have I made? Kissed the hands of Satan, my innocence slowly fades. Was it not you whom led me here to insanby VanGoghNights 27 lines, 22 comments, on Sep 19 7:40 PM 2007. In Dirty pretty, pain, dark, spiritual• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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do you believe in
faux-blood-stained slippery slopes,by deadpixie020 47 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 8 6:00 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
oh, these night-time horrors;
ain't it funny how he can break you• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
We stand in company of lions Waiting for the teeth to sink into our heelsby HailTheHeartBreaker 20 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 18 10:50 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Now that I'm stuck in this bear trap
Can you take my hands and bury them beneath?by HailTheHeartBreaker 23 lines, 1 comment, on May 16 11:10 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There is someone hanging from the old oak tree
He was swinging on a rope, just like meby HailTheHeartBreaker 22 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 27 4:57 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My hands are shaking, yet not with fear,
Anticipation is building, the climax near,by Razorblade Reasonxx 40 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 11 11:55 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Option 3- My fairy tale.... Was all a dream...by Razorblade Reasonxx 27 lines, 19 comments, on Mar 4 10:30 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Emergency...by Razorblade Reasonxx 44 lines, 25 comments, on Feb 29 2:09 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The truth no one sees is the pain of my dreams, how my emotions set then changes like a scene.by Razorblade Reasonxx 23 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 20 12:16 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I walk alone on this dirty road, Please oh please help im on my own?by Razorblade Reasonxx 16 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 21 8:02 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Option/ Sad poem, tears,by Razorblade Reasonxx 50 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 5 3:18 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Its been almost a year since i fell in your trap,
and oh how close i was to falling in that.by Razorblade Reasonxx 33 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 10 9:04 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Like a butterfly locked within the glass,
forced to look upon her past.by Razorblade Reasonxx 16 lines, 11 comments, on Apr 8 11:46 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Our fingers i.n.t.e.r.t.w.i.n.e.d. / like string on a shirt / and the night has just begun. / Your arm is tighly [wrapped] around me / but• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You're a [pretty] little i m p e r f e c t i o n / with your [shattered] ego / / and those eyes that could leave / any boy in a trancby juliex-exotic shine 56 lines, 28 comments, on Apr 29 1:25 PM 2007. In Contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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i would love to enter a pw but it's not open to pw.
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open for pw now
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im not into tht gushy
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open now
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good luck to everyone, some crazy deep stuff here.
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