This contest is dedicated to my now es-boyfriend. I want all your emotions that are bottled up that you've been wanting to pour out to your ex in one poem. Im new at this break up thing because I've been with the same person for about 7 or 8 years and I'm only 19. So I need some help coping with this loss if you dont mind. I need to learn how to stop crying and just move on. Can you guys help me???
*****Rules*****
-Have Fun!
-Give me every emotion possible that you're feeling.
-No sticky caps or dirty pretty or chat lingo
-no cursing
-no bashing other peoples religion
-give me the best you've got
Give me raw emotion people. If I cant feel what you're saying and I DQ you dont be offended because Im just going to pick the one the best suits me. If you cannot take criticism then I suggest you do not enter. Though I am not a mean person I will tell you if your poem is Excellent, good, mediocre, ok, or just plain bad.
*****Rules*****
-Have Fun!
-Give me every emotion possible that you're feeling.
-No sticky caps or dirty pretty or chat lingo
-no cursing
-no bashing other peoples religion
-give me the best you've got
Give me raw emotion people. If I cant feel what you're saying and I DQ you dont be offended because Im just going to pick the one the best suits me. If you cannot take criticism then I suggest you do not enter. Though I am not a mean person I will tell you if your poem is Excellent, good, mediocre, ok, or just plain bad.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 20
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 250, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: Thanks for the help everyone. I love you all.
Contest Winners
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Even after all of this time my heart still beats for you
No matter where I go or what I do I always seem to reminisce of the times when Iby Jeremy0826 79 lines, 40 comments, on May 11 1:06 AM 2006. In Love, Contest, Hope, Life, Thoughts
Silver trophy winner
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Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
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Just a random poem that came to me when I did something that I shouldn't have.by B.m.w 17 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 6 10:34 PM• Commented on by judge.
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I wanted everything for you I wanted the bestby blutig 25 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 6 10:25 PM• Commented on by judge.
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And all I can seem to think is,
"How can I still love you after you've done this to me?..."• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
you say goodbye; I cannot hear you.
The buzzing in my ears is too strong.by thunder.xx.paradise 49 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 3 10:31 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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by PerfectionIsPoison 35 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 6 12:53 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Whats the point of living if your only drowning in a pool of self hate,by A.Broken.Lullaby 27 lines, 17 comments, on Jul 3 8:14 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My heart lies beating on the sheets
It has been tore out of my chest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Oh honey.... I hope you will be ok, I am not sure if I am the best one to write for this contest, but will try...
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