yep...i want what you're willing to offer me babes
i dont want happy love i want depressing bring me to
tears love.
Rules...
proper spelling
no bashing
No stupid typing
Dirty Pretty Is Allowed [it makes me smile]
AP name in Authors Notes
A Maximum of 120 Lines Please!!!!
**imagery, metaphors...literary stuff makes your poems better remember that**
Any questions message me...
if you are into happy love heres what i mean by the opposite
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4398487
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4392617
they are new...but they get the job done
♥Toxic
i dont want happy love i want depressing bring me to
tears love.
Rules...
proper spelling
no bashing
No stupid typing
Dirty Pretty Is Allowed [it makes me smile]
AP name in Authors Notes
A Maximum of 120 Lines Please!!!!
**imagery, metaphors...literary stuff makes your poems better remember that**
Any questions message me...
if you are into happy love heres what i mean by the opposite
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4398487
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4392617
they are new...but they get the job done
♥Toxic
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 22
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: oh em gee you guys...this was FREAKING AWESOME i LOVED judging this contest so so so so so so so so so xinfinity much lol
you are all some great writers. i tried to comment on all i kinda got lazy and forgot to comment some but i did read them...thanks so much for making me feel less alone in my darkest hour.
enter into more of my contests they need your entries lol
thankies and love you babes!
♣Dani
Contest Winners
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In your sands id lay forever to watch your beauty set the sky Id withstand ungracious weather to taste your breeze and feel your tide• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Alone galaxies swayed• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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You say the words that seem so foul, The twist of tongue and simplicities.by desiredpain 277 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 15 11:39 AM
Honorable winner• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
secrets i only kept [so they wouldent hurt you]
are falling out of my skin and b.o.n.e arms,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [39]
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Whiney trills kill me, shoved down my throat
choking and sputtering on the bitter notes;• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
What happened here?
[I would call it a travesty]• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Just a random write I suppose you could say. ^^""by B.m.w 16 lines, 15 comments, on Jul 6 2:23 AM• Commented on by judge.
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Life plays a mock role on the living.
Up turning their existence like pebbles.by nature mithya 7 lines, on Jun 14 4:45 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
behind a veil shields a secretby solitarytear 15 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 1 7:07 AM. In Love, Sad, Pain, Contest, Lost in thought, Longing, Sadness, Message, Loss• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Your smile
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i have recovered even if i dont have my man
i know i have a life and i am living it AGAIN• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The crimson gates of my beating heart opened,
After many artic winters of loneliness, of fear,by Mila7 39 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 7 11:51 AM 2007. In The end of of somethings that resembles love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Like a whisper at night
in the dark, out of sight• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
There’s b e a u t y in the b.r.e.a.k.d.o.w.n., every {{Miss.America}} has a meltdown, p.a.i.n is b e a u t y ;; now shut up and [lie] dowby HeartbreakHeroine-x 51 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 16 12:16 AM. In Dirty pretty, personal, innocence lost• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Philip was a quiet boy who didn’t have much to say
He was told he was adopted on his twenty first birthdayby judmc 24 lines, 20 comments, on Apr 20 5:17 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I miss you most when it rains. Theres just somethiing about the way everything melts together, becoming one.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Do you have any feelings / Why don't you understand / The pain you're inflicting on me / Is worse than the striking of your hand / Every tiby DenyMyLove 23 lines, 16 comments, on May 22 1:19 AM 2007. In Angst, Love, Pain, Sad, Personal, Depression, Sadness, Emo• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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In the midst of broken hearts,
torn dreams,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I loved him,
I really did.by Blood.Stained.Tears 21 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 6 4:55 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Love at first sight Not knowing I existedby Crowded Desert 31 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 16 4:02 PM• Viewed by judge.
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Staring at this blank page
Trying to get it out• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You took my heart and
s r d eby TheSilverQuill 88 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 17 1:32 AM. In Contest, Life, Sad, Heartbreak, Dirty Pretty• Commented on by judge. -
Tears run wild, down her face so stained
Her vulnerable heart, is forever painedby Davidlee 41 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 17 5:06 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The man knelt and picked up a trampled rose He blew into the soiled rose to reveal its true colourby reservedforgreatness 31 lines, on Jul 19 3:10 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Tears flow down
Not mine• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My breathing stops,
My tears are not pure,
But blackened - like ash• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Hey .... I got a note saying this was open to multiple entries, but the contest will only let me put one in ....?
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its been fixed
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