So I have been recently noticing that no matter what I do to change my current situation...I always end up back to the point that I started from....no matter who I try to help....it backfires...
so I would like some poetry talking about those things.....something interesting....different...if you take a look at my poetry you will find that I have no real style and that I value anyone who can convey something in a small amount of words....
the shorter the poem the better...
the more profound the overall message...the better
GOOD LUCK@!
so I would like some poetry talking about those things.....something interesting....different...if you take a look at my poetry you will find that I have no real style and that I value anyone who can convey something in a small amount of words....
the shorter the poem the better...
the more profound the overall message...the better
GOOD LUCK@!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 27, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: thanks to everyone for their entries!!!!!
Contest Winners
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by Peripatetic 3 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 13 4:04 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Senryu
Silver trophy winner
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by luvdrkchocolate 26 lines, 17 comments, on Jun 28 8:46 PM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Life
Bronze trophy winner
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Apparently my dreams want you back
way more than my concious self could ever realize.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Vision speaks in straight line thingking,
as mountain stands in pencil,• Commented on by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4395905, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [19]
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A smiling girl, pretty face
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by edit my world. 63 lines, 24 comments, on Jul 4 12:57 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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This chaos of emotion has sprung forth, in a world to cruel to cradle,by White Rabbit 14 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 5 11:23 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I would like to tell you
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The enemy I worked so hard to help them allude. Now stands at our door step begging for food. Four lives in ruin, three of which in slow reby Dark passenger 9 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 11 3:57 PM 2008. In War, Angry, Family, Hate, Emo, Death, Pain, Dark, Sad, Life, Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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of all the pains you have given me
WHY DO I STILL LOVE YOU• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
O God I feel like my thoughtsby Kalamina 33 lines, 15 comments, on Jun 16 7:04 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Im starting over / [Wont be easy] / No more cutting / [You'll never stop] / No more crying all night because you didnt get his call / [He mby Ur Baby Gurl 25 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 18 8:11 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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All the seasons of madness
have folded in on meby aidenspektor 16 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 11 12:54 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Wow! Thanks for the gold trophy. I just got back from several days out of town...what a great surprise. Congratulations to all!
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