A three day contest for fifty of the best RHYMING poems.
So it's simple. Give me your best rhyming poem and I'll decide who wins (but may I remind you that everyone has different opinions, so if you don't win it doesn't mean that it's not good)
I want the poem that you think is worth gold, the one that you absolutely love and you think has no flaws and has beautiful meaning.
I WANT THE BEST!!!! I love descriptive but not too descriptive. I don't want a ramble or when you use "big" words for the sake of it
to me, that just symbolizes arrogance.
BUT, I do have some rules.....
1. Poem must rhyme! If it doesn't I'll remove it
No forced rhyme, I just want it to melt upon seeing it, if you get what I'm saying.
2. Make sure it's your best!
3. No erotica or adult; I'm 13. I'd rather you not swear too much; it can really wreck a poem. And if it's under one of the "above 15" categories, I won't be able to read it, therefore it won't win so don't enter it.
4. Normal writing please
5. I really couldn't care who you are (Anonymous contest
) so please don't tell me. Being too nice to the judge will not get you anywhere here. But if you have chocolate I'm all ears 
6. I'm not really a fan of cutting but if you can do it with taste, go ahead.
Good luck and have fun people! Oh yeah, and I'll try and comment on everyone's but it depends on how lazy I'm feelin'
If I don't like it I might not comment. I'm just not all that good at saying that I don't like it
Toodle Pipski!
So it's simple. Give me your best rhyming poem and I'll decide who wins (but may I remind you that everyone has different opinions, so if you don't win it doesn't mean that it's not good)
I want the poem that you think is worth gold, the one that you absolutely love and you think has no flaws and has beautiful meaning. I WANT THE BEST!!!! I love descriptive but not too descriptive. I don't want a ramble or when you use "big" words for the sake of it
to me, that just symbolizes arrogance.BUT, I do have some rules.....
1. Poem must rhyme! If it doesn't I'll remove it
No forced rhyme, I just want it to melt upon seeing it, if you get what I'm saying.2. Make sure it's your best!
3. No erotica or adult; I'm 13. I'd rather you not swear too much; it can really wreck a poem. And if it's under one of the "above 15" categories, I won't be able to read it, therefore it won't win so don't enter it.

4. Normal writing please
5. I really couldn't care who you are (Anonymous contest
) so please don't tell me. Being too nice to the judge will not get you anywhere here. But if you have chocolate I'm all ears 
6. I'm not really a fan of cutting but if you can do it with taste, go ahead.
Good luck and have fun people! Oh yeah, and I'll try and comment on everyone's but it depends on how lazy I'm feelin'

If I don't like it I might not comment. I'm just not all that good at saying that I don't like it

Toodle Pipski!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 6
- Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 500, Bronze: 300, Honorable mention: 10 people
- Final notes: Thanks to every one for entering.
I really wasn't expecting that many entries that soon, so sorry if yours didn't get a comment.
Gold
The Engagement
Amazing flow and a beautiful story behind the words. Flawless.
Silver
The moon pours white wine
Creative and sweet. Cleverly done with rhyme and rhythm.
Bronze
all yours.
Needs some capitalization and a proofread but the idea is excellent! Great rhyming.
Honourable Mentions
Naive
Great word use.
Bleak
Inspiring story behind the flow.
Scavenger of men
Interesting message and story.
One Last Song
Said magnificently.
My Final Stroll
Simply beautiful.
Evening In the Mountains
Great imagery.
Born To These Mountains
Nature couldn't have done better herself.
Trapped.
A very real, sad and yet hopeful poem.
Thank you everyone for entering. Just remember; it's just in one persons' opinion who won, so it doesn't necessarily mean that your poem wasn't good if you didn't win.
Thanks Again!
Toodle Pipski!
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Contest Winners
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The Engagement
The gate swings on its hinges in the cooling Autumn breeze• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
At a table in a garden on a soft sweet summer's night
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In your hand, you hold a jewel
Rich and red, it’s warm and smoothby aanika-xox 40 lines, 25 comments, on Jan 31 11:08 AM. In Life, Love, Personal
Bronze trophy winner
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by PatheticKt 22 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 29 7:27 AM. In Love, Teen issues, Teenage thinking, Hope, noguest
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In the stillness of the night
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It’s a starry summer’s night in August
Moon shinning brightly in a cloudless skyby Sandra R Reynolds 18 lines, 11 comments, on Sep 5 8:42 AM 2007. In Thoughts, Nature
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Writing down the words we say while riding down The road in turns to be okay when we hit the ground.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I watch a robin perching in the shade fluttering its wings but not sitting stillby Swan song 27 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 5 12:14 AM• Commented on by judge.
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just a song• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Then rose petals fall
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immersed unwillingly in a pitch black mind
shrouded in darkness and eater to findby daftanddreary 16 lines, 1 comment, on May 10 5:43 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I am so thankful he is in my life• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A nature walk is such fun
but I didn't expect to have to run• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The seat belts are on and the jets start to scream
It’s just the start of your holiday dreamby judmc 31 lines, 30 comments, on May 3 2:45 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
It was in the dusky attic of my mind, where I took out the jigsaw puzzle that had been forgotten with time
I remembered why I had hidden iby nansie 29 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 6 10:49 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Run faster and faster, loving the pain For my legs and stomach are aching againby BloodFader 7 lines, 3 comments, on May 27 12:35 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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"a book called perfection" Heres a story about a girlby AdamAdkins 35 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 25 1:35 AM. In Love, Friendship, Romance, Dedication, Happiness• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Floating down on icicles
they hardly make a sound• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Shall we dance, across heaven, unseen
Chatting, idly about the places we've been?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Oh dear, what can the matter be? / Of all people he / Who loved her dearly / And braved the wrath of his parents / Depended solely on his friends / To get married / But now in a manner so hurried• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Fourthaxis 40 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 15 1:49 PM. In Contest, Pain, Personal, Sad, Teenage thinking, Lost love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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crazy they call him but crazy he's not,
he's simply loocked in a time the rest have forgot• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
i'm scribed in scottish folklore
like finfolk and mermaids• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
From childhood to adulthood we often wear the face given for the time the day the hour we wear the faces of the seven signs before we areby storiesuntold 21 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 3 2:46 PM. In Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Without you,I am no-one
Without You,I am nothingby crazyash007 34 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 3 4:20 PM. In Pure Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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