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I Will Try To Fix You

Cold Play - Fix You! How do you feel when listening to this song. As with all my contests, you don't have to really know this song, I just want to know how you felt when listening to it. I think it is a brilliant song with excellent words and I would like something deep from you. I am not really fussed about what you write about as long as it relates totally to the song. Basically you would like to fix someone who has been through something really soul destroying, or even if you are someone that deep down really wants to be fixed by someone., even though you may not show it. Like I said, not really fussed, but make it deep. I dont really care how much imagery or metaphors, etc you use, just make it from the heart!

Only rules are no swearing or profanity, and no erotica.

Just have fun!!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TBO6_u6Mb6s

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 18
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you so much for entering such wonderful, heartfelt entries. They were all such lovely entries. Thanks again. Hope you all enjoyed.

Contest Winners

  1. My Promise
    I care too much to let you hurt like this; I cannot idly watch you in such pain.
    by after-silence 23 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 2 11:11 PM
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. The Words
    The tears that stream down your beautiful face
    Are wiped away by gentle hands of care
    by Sekhmet Kitty 26 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 17 5:01 AM. In Love
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. tell the object of your dedicated DESIRE (show him how FAITHFUL your LOVE can be)
    ignore tears flowing from others eyes.
    this is YOUR moment,
    not theirs.
    by emotionXxXoverload 63 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 18 4:41 AM. In Dark, Love, Hope, Pain, Sad, Friendship, Longing, Emo, Freewrite, Dedication, Loss
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Sail Strong
    harbor lights send ships safely away from the shore,
    by Cannonsfire 29 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 4 5:42 AM
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. I'll keep believing
    It's a fad Of saturated teens
    by thearmsofsorrow 29 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 4 8:57 AM
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. Let Me Fix The Pain.
    She was cruel in many ways, with all the mind games she played.
    by Midnight-x-Rose 57 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 4 6:28 AM
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 4
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    Never heard the song but will definitely go listen!

  • ea silver member
    July 4
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    ♥ LOVE this song...

  • Luna Tique Fringe gold member
    July 4
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    LOve the song...you should check out this version:

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n-3IT4TeSxY

    This was supposed to be a duet, but duet partner passed away just before the the performance.

    This man adds a whole other dimension to this song.

    You should hear the group do Lou Reed...

  • paradoxical wish
    July 6
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    Excellent Choice of song

    Best of Luck with the contest.

    Heba
  • twinseym
    July 17
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    somethings wrong with me

    My twin sister sang this song to me when I was at my breaking point. Through love and hate of the twin sister bond, she is my backbone.
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