ok, so i am a big fan of those stories with love, but a not so happy ending, kind of like romeo and juliet or wurthering heights. so, that is what i am looking for!
options:
1) write one based off a story that you have read with star crossed lovers... tell me what the story is too. i love to read, i would like to see if i can get my hands on the book
2) make one up on your own... see what your mind can come up with!
3) base it off of a real life expierence... i guess that would go with option 2, but i really wanted to put an option three.
Rules:
NO STICKY CAPS... i cant read it. it hurts my eyes after a while
have fun
if you have any other ideas, just message me and let me know. i am open to lots of other options!
also... enter as many times as you want, the more the merrier!
oh, and points will increase! a lot!
ok, so before some of you look back here and see that i have not commented on your poems, and that i have viewed it, do not worry... my computer is currently facing some technical difficulties, and when its fixed, or when i get onto another computer, i will see to it that i comment on them... and i still have a lot to look at. im getting more entries then i thought i would. lol.
i know that i am taking a long time to do all this, but my computer is still malfunctioning, and i would really like to comment on all the poems... so if you bare with me, i would really appreciate it.
ok, so i have decided that for the last 8 and half hours of this contest, i am no longer going to except pre writes. sorry, i just want a couple more fresh writes. i am still allowing more than one entry per person tho!
i am reopening my contest, because i want a couple more poems. and i know that i still havent gotten to judging a few, but i estimated it, and i want to add more honorable mentions cuz i have a LOT of good poems. so i need more poems to comment so as to get more points to add. (Another thing that would help... rate my comments)
options:
1) write one based off a story that you have read with star crossed lovers... tell me what the story is too. i love to read, i would like to see if i can get my hands on the book
2) make one up on your own... see what your mind can come up with!
3) base it off of a real life expierence... i guess that would go with option 2, but i really wanted to put an option three.
Rules:
NO STICKY CAPS... i cant read it. it hurts my eyes after a while
have fun
if you have any other ideas, just message me and let me know. i am open to lots of other options!
also... enter as many times as you want, the more the merrier!
oh, and points will increase! a lot!
ok, so before some of you look back here and see that i have not commented on your poems, and that i have viewed it, do not worry... my computer is currently facing some technical difficulties, and when its fixed, or when i get onto another computer, i will see to it that i comment on them... and i still have a lot to look at. im getting more entries then i thought i would. lol.
i know that i am taking a long time to do all this, but my computer is still malfunctioning, and i would really like to comment on all the poems... so if you bare with me, i would really appreciate it.
ok, so i have decided that for the last 8 and half hours of this contest, i am no longer going to except pre writes. sorry, i just want a couple more fresh writes.
i am still allowing more than one entry per person tho!i am reopening my contest, because i want a couple more poems. and i know that i still havent gotten to judging a few, but i estimated it, and i want to add more honorable mentions cuz i have a LOT of good poems. so i need more poems to comment so as to get more points to add. (Another thing that would help... rate my comments)
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 31
- Rewards: Gold: 750, Silver: 325, Bronze: 250, Honorable mention: 49 people
- Final notes: I had a -LOT- of amazingly awesome poems in this contest. that is why i have so many freaking finalsts. very good job to all of you. and i wish that i had enough points to give to everyone, i really do. good job to the winners. your poems, or story were amazing! good job to all! best wishes,
cerbie
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"Romeo, Romeo" She screams, But he's not there or so it seems,by shadowskill 20 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 3 3:31 PM
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Living the life of a fairy tale
Standing outside winds blow my hair to the westby a dozenglassroses 101 lines, 33 comments, on Mar 4 4:37 PM
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you'll fall me in love with you
if only in my mind
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It was a hard fall into Autumn;
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a girl lies down alone tonight,
a boy finished quietly saying goodnight.by aanika-xox 61 lines, 16 comments, on Jan 18 4:37 PM
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Thisbe and Pyramus were lovers true
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I've known her for so long, that our friendship is almost perfect.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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A girl and a boy Their hearts filled with joy Their feelings were the sameby BuriedTreasures 52 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 30 10:35 AM. In Dedications, War, Lyrics
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They always end the same.by LilLegend08 38 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 26 8:15 AM
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Three purple painted cows crazed under the moonlit field,
The darling milk-maid so fair, her heart barely healed,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by wizardwarior3 12 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 27 3:58 AM
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Young and in love,
we walk through the streets holding hands;• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Your laugh,
Oh, it rings in my earsby Odyssey-of-Rosaline 60 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 10 7:24 PM
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by Odyssey-of-Rosaline 76 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 23 2:33 PM
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Somewhere out there in the dark
That special one shines for me• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Last night I met the most amazing girl
In such short time, she became my worldby XxOpenScarsxX 35 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 16 6:51 PM
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My Prince has come
to rescue me.by Missa 26 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 31 2:53 PM. In Love, fairytales, happily never afters
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I have flown with you on dragon wings
Hpoeing to one day weare your wedding ringby dreamdragon6484 24 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 1 4:09 PM 2005. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Sweeping arc of ethereal moons.
"Stay in touch," the last thing he said ...by waydownuponjoy 61 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 14 8:22 AM. In Contest, Wondering, Wandering, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Striking out at fantasies, reaching for her star• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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At times loving you is so great it is the best thing I have ever experience in my life.
But other times you are so evil, you corrupt all tby hopeles-romantic 38 lines, 27 comments, on Apr 11 3:25 PM. In love, strife, romance, pain, spiritual, eternity, heaven, hell, excile, life
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I love you
Look inside yourselfby bluecollarlove 20 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 23 2:20 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Twas’ a loving young man called John (so it seems)
Married Rosie the beautiful girl of his dreamsby judmc 49 lines, 54 comments, on Mar 8 10:15 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You Always loved me
I never loved you• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I can observe it in your eyes The way you look at herby LullabyxxDreamer 47 lines, 13 comments, on May 7 9:52 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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We shall meet once again
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of all the people in the world....we both met
of all the worst to happen....we both seperated• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She knows this must be a dream
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You once said to me
"Look through my eyes"• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Nel cielo`la Ve, ci siamo incontrati
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I made a loving wish on a falling star,
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by after-silence 16 lines, 13 comments, on Jul 9 7:05 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by after-silence 24 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 8 9:52 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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This is a poem inspired by a friend and their words.by MessOfADreamer 39 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 13 11:09 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by wizardwarior3 10 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 31 4:32 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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head hung low
he sat there stillby iiwuvyouxoxo 79 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 31 10:48 PM. In Sad, Friendship, Loss, Suicide, Goodbyes, Depressed, Message• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Twisted love in twisted ways
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The first time they met / it was a rainbow of hearts / her red smeareed lips / ached for days from his kisses / and her mind danced atop /by Vampstress 59 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 1 10:44 AM 2007. In Life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I didn’t know these days would pass us by
when all we longed for was to be togetherby Intravenous Jesus 19 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 10 10:20 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I have trod a path, quite a swath and burned the candle both ends, Times there are, I’ve gone too far, by thinking a few of them friends.by Bazza 45 lines, 20 comments, on Mar 13 6:25 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I do so enjoy giving contests fresh writes, but this contest directly applies to something I just wrote. Such a coincidence I dared not pass up.
Even more so because I do not believe in coincidence.
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Just so you know my poem (Her Life is a Blurr) is a mixture between option two and three, real emotions but different ending for me.
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ok well, I can't write a poem about this. My head is kind of blank at the moment but I do have some books for you to try and read if you haven't already. They are all Ellen Hopkins books. Crank, Glass, Impulse, and Burned. All of these books have people in them with problems but somehow they find love and it's taken away from them, I enjoyed them and if you haven't already, you should definitely read them. Don't be discouraged at how big the books are because they are books that are written in poetry, but they tell a story.
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Thanks for the HM, I enjoyed your contest. Take care and Have fun. Steve
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