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Brake up/Teen-age Heart-Break

Girls ONLY!!!!!
straight ppl please!!


I wanna here you spill you guts and say
how much you miss him
how much it hurts
how much you cried
how much you died
how much you no longer care
ECT.
Your own style
Impress me
It Must have rhythm
I like rhyme
But it is not needed
I don't mind cussing,
just don't over do it.
Tell me about your Heart-Brake
other than that Free Verse!

Please, don't Drag it on!!
If it is short,
Its short!
other than that have fun Spilling out your heart
sometimes it helps with the pain...

and i wanna know how much there was that's lost...
make me cry...
and feel bad that you've lost him.

o and if u miss-spell n-e thing I don't care
cause I can't spell either

nO WrItInG lIke ThIs
I can't stand it!

and use these (,.) they help

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 8
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 4 people
  • Final notes:
    wasted
    Wasted time is what you turned out to be. I gave you my heart and you lost the key.

    -This won gold!

    You left me..with one last kiss
    & if you ripped my heart open you'll find your name, cause your my world this land you claimed.

    -sliver

    I hate that I'm in love with you
    I've been stuck on you
    Lost and confused

    -bronze

    Silent Serenade
    leapt from a leaf into the mist
    landed lightly atop my wrist

    -frist HM

    My Valentine Has Hollow Eyes
    With the moon I rise and with the sun i fall
    And for his kiss i would risk it all

    -secind HM

    Broken Hearted
    Words get tied on my tonuge.
    I'm just try to figure it out.

    -thrid HM

    My True story
    he broke my heart
    while we were in school

    -forth HM


    (and if i had more points it would go 2 these 3
    in this order!)

    Why Do I Still Love You?
    Another song.

    i wish
    I wish we had talked If so

    For you...
    For you... I gave my heart


    Thanx 4 all who par-tis-a-pated
    (there goes my spelling again)
    i had fun reading theses
    -u ppl can deff. spill some guts!!!

Contest Winners

  1. wasted
    Wasted time is what you turned out to be. I gave you my heart and you lost the key.
    by falling1isfatal2 23 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 2 12:49 AM
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. You left me..with one last kiss
    & if you ripped my heart open you'll find your name, cause your my world this land you claimed.
    by X-ForsakenAngel-X 68 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 3 10:27 PM. In Love, Pain, Sad, Thoughts
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. I hate that I'm in love with you
    I've been stuck on you
    Lost and confused
    by A Living Corpse 60 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 24 4:22 PM
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Silent Serenade
    leapt from a leaf into the mist
    landed lightly atop my wrist
    by detrohutt 25 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 29 12:12 PM
    Honorable winner
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. My Valentine Has Hollow Eyes
    With the moon I rise and with the sun i fall
    And for his kiss i would risk it all
    by Lady Nightshade 53 lines, 12 comments, on May 13 4:44 PM. In Lyrics, Love, Dark, Spiritual, Contemporary
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. Broken Hearted
    Words get tied on my tonuge.
    I'm just try to figure it out.
    by x meerz 31 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 2 2:25 PM. In Sad, broken
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. My True story
    he broke my heart
    while we were in school
    by TheUglySceneGirl... 80 lines, 40 comments, on Jul 2 6:23 PM. In pain, sad, life, love
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. Why Do I Still Love You?
    Another song.
    by the evil angel 48 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 12 12:27 AM
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. i wish
    I wish we had talked If so
    by XxemohatexX 22 lines, 1 comment, on May 29 6:19 PM. In Love, Lost love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  10. For you...
    For you... I gave my heart
    by XKeeperOfTheStarsX 20 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 4 12:28 AM
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • hiraeth
    July 1
    Edit | Reply
    don't you mean heartBREAK?

  • alandriel1138
    July 1
    Edit | Reply

    What beautiful writes can come from gays?

    What if the person's entry if towards the same sex but the reader can not tell. Would that bother you? What if the entry is of heartbreak due to the fact that they like the same sex but it isnt obviously put. Would that bother you? Would you DQ someone's entry b/c it the writer is not straight? Even though the entry does not clearly say or imply that the writer is not straight? Careful, you may have a gay/ bisexual in your contest...

    • Black-Cloud
      July 1
      Edit | Reply
      if i can't tell then how am i ganna know
      what i'm saying is i don't relly wanna here about 2 girls kissing
      no it would not bother me if i could not tell
      idon't relly understand ur second question.
      no i would not gr8 potery comes from the heart...
      it does not bother me unlesss i can tell...
      Thanx 4 ur concern

  • LaVieEnRose
    July 2
    Edit | Reply
    are you saying you DON'T want freeverse?
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