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The Eyes Have It

What is she thinking?

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Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 10, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 400, Bronze: 300, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you all for some great entries. I really enjoyed reading them. I hope that my comments conveyed what I intended. Too often, judges seem to just say "Gosh, great poem" or something else inane; I just wanted to offer some constructive criticism. All the poems are good, each in their own unique way. The winners:

    Gold:Secretive Smile...great message, wonderful rhyme, great opening and closing.

    Silver:Behind the Veil....wonderful rhyme and rhythm, great structure, a joy to read.

    Bronze:Trust Issues:Uh......what can I say? This was hilarious. I loved reading this poem. (but you do sound as vindictive as my ex-wife).

    HM:Eyes,Set Her Free: You put some deep thought into this poem, and I loved the sentiments.

    HM:Under The Radar: Pithy and original.

Contest Winners

  1. Secretive Smile
    Stare at my eyes and you’ll see not one clue
    of the feelings that make me a whole,
    by Sue Cardwell 26 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 3 4:17 PM 2008. In Sad, Thoughts, Life, Longing
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Behind The Veil
    by Ceridwens Soul 13 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 2 6:08 AM 2008. In Contest, Thoughts, Life
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Trust Issues
    Green eyes scan the room
    and come to a halt.
    by KayJay 30 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 2 10:41 AM 2008. In Humor, Love, Life
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Eyes, Set Her Free
    Her ears have heard harsh sayings Her mouth taste the salt of her tears
    by puravida 13 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 1 11:19 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4385897, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

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  • Quill
    July 2, 2008
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    does my bomb look big in this?