broken hearts!

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on July 15, 2008
• Rewards: Gold: 300
• Final notes:
  this was the best contest entrys ive ever got good job every one

Contest Winners

1. *~~Beautiful~~*

   Oh Heavenly foe, what intrusion have I made? Kissed the hands of Satan, my innocence slowly fades. Was it not you whom led me here to insan

   by VanGoghNights 27 lines, 26 comments, on Sep 19 7:40 PM 2007. In Dirty pretty, pain, dark, spiritual
   Gold trophy winner

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2. Harsh Awakenings

   He stands as a man,
   but inside a cowardice child.

   by sins and sorrow 37 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 16 6:51 PM 2008. In Abuse, Rape, Dark, Pain, Personal, Fear
   Silver trophy winner

   • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
3. Nothing But The Rain

   In the dark wings of this storm
   Time moves too slow,

   by Redrusty66 64 lines, 13 comments, on Jun 10 4:20 AM 2008. In Lyrics, Dark, Lost love, Anger, Suicide, Sadness, Depression, Longing, Pain, Sad
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
4. [ It was innocent at first. ]

   This is dedicated to someone I know who didn't deserve what she got. God Rest Her Soul

   by Restless Emotions 44 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 30 9:49 PM 2008. In Dark, Sad, Love, Pain, Abuse

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
5. This Is What Happens When You Leave Me

   (Its just a poem, please don't think I would actually do this!) I see tears run down your pretty face

   by SoulUnknown 37 lines, 4 comments, on May 18 12:55 AM 2008. In Dark, Love, Pain, Sad

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
6. my pain

   by blackfang4318 6 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 10 6:46 PM 2007. In Abuse, Adult, Dark, Sad, Personal, Pain, Beat, My life, Death, Sadness

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Entries [33]

• No Time

  by myriad-dark 31 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 12 5:41 PM 2007. In Lyrics, Love, Pain, Life, Personal, Thoughts

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• Knowing it's over

  Standing invisibly, a specter unwitnessed, as witness to she who was my heart, in so many guises of splendid feminine beauty, as she falls

  by Rovingone 9 lines, 5 comments, on May 17 11:58 AM 2008. In Pain, Sad

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• Loss of Friendship=Broken Heart

  A true story that happened only a short time ago.

  by shannon.green 39 lines, 1 comment, on May 1 7:48 PM 2008. In Sadness, Loss, Angry, Hurt. Betrayal.

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• I Can See it in Your Eyes

  I can observe it in your eyes The way you look at her

  by LullabyxxDreamer 47 lines, 13 comments, on May 7 9:52 PM 2008

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• Good Bye

  I LOVED YOU
  YOU LEFT ME

  by Shining for You 23 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 17 1:30 PM 2006. In Personal, mad, Life

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• Underlying Truth

  by Clinging-to-Life 46 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 12 10:14 PM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Love, Life, Anger, Lost love, Sadness, Sad, Pain, Self, Goodbyes

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• Take Your Pain

  On this cross I will hold your heart forever
  Bleeding and seething nothing will stop me ever

  by Lady Nightshade 39 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 17 5:07 PM 2008. In Lyrics, Love, Dark, Contest, Pain

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• Love #3

  by Darkwell 33 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 3 8:19 PM 2008. In Love, Lyrics, Pain, Personal

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• " All I've Got "

  You asked why
  Why I cried

  by LoveDeprived 68 lines, 7 comments, on May 10 9:51 AM 2008

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• his words came quick and SHARP (CUTTING more then RAZORS ever would)

  still not noticing how the flames of fury lick his eyes
  ignorant to the intensity in his voice

  by Candy Morphine 65 lines, 3 comments, on May 16 8:00 PM 2008. In Angst, Dark, Pain, Emo, Death, Lost love, Angry

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• A Shattered Heart of No More

  A heart is a fragile thing When one holds it a mere touch could shatter it

  by Falling in Loveless 39 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 1 12:18 PM 2008. In abuse, heart, contest, love, personal, sad, thoughts

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• Moving On (2)

  by wohadreambig 53 lines, on Feb 16 12:35 AM 2008. In Personal, Sad, Thoughts

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• Why?

  Sitting on the edge of my bed, I wipe fresh tears from my eyes.
  Elbows on knees, I look down at my hand,

  by limechic 44 lines, 16 comments, on Jun 3 4:06 PM 2008. In Abuse, Love, Pain

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• "I Am An Abuse Survivor"

  I no longer wear dark shades,
  or long sleeves to cover my arms.

  by sassylilpoet 124 lines, 40 comments, on Nov 19 7:42 AM 2007. In Life, Love, Pain, Sad

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• [ I think it's a matter of time, ]

  I think it's a matter of time, before you realize,

  by Lyns xOx 26 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 20 9:57 AM 2008. In Sad, Dark, Pain, Sadness, Depression, Anger, Hate, Angry, heartbreak, Revenge

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• heartfelt suicide

  this is my heartfelt note to my suicide
  i love a girl who cannot and will not love me back

  by RebelJester 25 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 24 8:53 PM 2007. In Sad, Personal, Dark

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• On Hacking Your Way Out (Nocturne #5)

  The man I loved
  evaporated-

  by GlassSlippers 16 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 3 10:20 AM 2004. In Personal, Love, Angst

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• Broken Hearted Angel

  I fell down from the sky that day
  Off my cotton cloud

  by dark cajun shadow 33 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 27 1:34 AM 2008. In love, life, pain, personal, Sad

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• Fuck You

  by goat1826 27 lines, 22 comments, on Aug 4 10:48 PM 2007. In Abuse, Adult, Contest, Pain

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• Tears That Flood My Ground

  tears that flood my ground,
  are tears that hopefully will not comeback.

  by kyrkx 46 lines, 11 comments, on May 5 1:01 AM 2008. In Personal, Sad, Love, Pain

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• Good-Bye Tina

  I loved you the day we met
  I'll love you till I die

  by bluecollarlove 23 lines, 23 comments, on Feb 20 9:16 AM 2007

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• you

  do you know that i cant sleep anymore i dread those lonely nights

  by tiredxofxsunsets 32 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 5 10:36 PM 2008. In Lost love, Sad, Love, Depressed, Loss

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• Rawr

  Anger frustration,
  it's all the same,

  by Philleebee8 11 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 11 4:07 PM 2008

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• Tortured Soul

  It was innocent enough Attracted to each other

  by kamulneix 12 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 7 9:26 PM 2008. In Dark, Sad, Love, Pain

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• I Never...

  I never...
  Should have given him my heart...

  by XxSuicidal-LovexX 34 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 12 7:08 PM 2008. In Love, hurt, Heartbreak, Wasted

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• Is it okay?

  Is it okay to hate yourself As long as you love everyone else

  by DeathByFault 53 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 1 10:41 PM 2008. In Love, Personal, Thoughts, Life, Dark, Pain, Depression, Lost love, Freewrite

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• My Beautiful Curse

  No one can say what will happen the heart breaks and it heals. This is the endless cycle as life and death are one.

  by Twilight Keeper 15 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 27 6:50 PM 2008. In Dark, Love, Sad, Other, Humanity, Depressed, Loss, Depression, Sadness

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