Okay, so the title kind of explains itself. But for those that want to know more... I just really want some raw and pained emotions to drip off the screen as I read your poem. Pre-writes are allowed because I know some people have to have some amazing poems about heart break in storage. Just make them as real as you can, and run with it, this doesn't have to be "oh he/she dumped me" it could be anything that broke your heart.
Rules:
1. No StIcKy CaPs
2. No Erotica (not like it should be here anyway)
3. Limited Profanity (I know it adds emotion at times)
4. Proper Grammer (Please!)
And.. I think thats it!
Rules:
1. No StIcKy CaPs
2. No Erotica (not like it should be here anyway)
3. Limited Profanity (I know it adds emotion at times)
4. Proper Grammer (Please!)
And.. I think thats it!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 11, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 10 people
- Final notes: Thank you for entering my second contest, I was AMAZED by how many people entered and judging took a lot more time than I thought it would. I am so so so sorry for running late on this, real life got insane so yeah. Each of you amazed me in your own way.
Toodles,
Kiddo
Contest Winners
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tell me that you love me, and taint me with more lies,by Lost Vampyre Angel 21 lines, 18 comments, on Jun 23 12:31 PM 2008. In Contemporary, Dark, Other, Pain, Personal, Abuse
Gold trophy winner
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Dear, honest angel, that cared so deeply
terribly sorry for the ignoranceby Seshat Kitty 33 lines, 20 comments, on May 23 7:37 AM 2008. In Dark, Death, Sadness
Silver trophy winner
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How many years has it been?
Since I was able to tell you I loved you• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I never thought it would be this way.
Step back love.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
You reel me in just to heedlessly push. me. away;
Shoving my diminutive flaws back in my wounded face• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4379742, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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You're my best friend ever
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She stands on mountains with midnight wings
Entire empires crumble from the requiem she singsby Lady Nightshade 44 lines, 14 comments, on May 23 6:44 PM 2008. In Lyrics, Love, Dark, Contemporary, Spiritual, Thoughts
Honorable mention
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The never ending wait, / For someone who I like, / Is There a dawn, / To this dark lonely night? / The dream of the silken grace, / that coy smile on her lips, / The amused expression, / That sby Rele anmwe 64 lines, 13 comments, on Jun 18 8:54 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [47]
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by tigress3737 18 lines, 3 comments, on May 28 12:06 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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and Im sick of twisting your words,
as you twist my soul.by enchantingbeauty 19 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 29 7:03 PM 2008. In Pain• Commented on by judge. -
swift and to the point
i press the blade into my armby HereComesTheSun 72 lines, 5 comments, on May 12 4:59 PM 2008. In Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Society, Other, Dedication, Escape, Suicide, Teen issues• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Gravel crunches 'Neath weary feetby TheKillCode 42 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 20 10:57 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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For most it lasts for a short time
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Sterile white linen sheets Respirator beeps• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She told me it was over. Although she would not tell me why.• Commented on by judge.
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you know you taught me well
you know I can break your spell• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My head spins as the floor becomes closer than it should be
Suffocating me, this emptiness is more than I can takeby AshleyAesthetic 23 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 30 7:07 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Why are you always LEAVING MEby coolkid69 48 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 27 7:33 PM 2008. In The Past I'll Never Have To Deal With Anymore• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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reflections from the window pane
i see your faceby Anthony Budka 20 lines, 10 comments, on May 10 6:09 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
his hands will explore
my every curve• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I listen to the rattle of his lungs and wonder if today will be the day he leaves me here and travels far above.by skye01 16 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 1 1:41 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Two eyes in a deadened soul
Eyes that cryby Midnight Rose 11 14 lines, 4 comments, on May 30 6:06 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You're still the song that sounds in my soul,
You're still a dream, so far, no longer real,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
today as i was cleaning
your letters i did find• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by marciakay81 29 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 30 7:26 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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"Broken hearts make the best dessert with strawberries and cream"by blood-for-ink 16 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 2 4:48 PM 2008. In Life, Pain, Contest, My own style, Depression, Lost love, Depressed, Teenage thinking• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My heart became weak,
Because of Kody Meeks.by shaynabell726 22 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 9 9:03 PM 2008. In Pain, Anger, Hate, Personal., Lost in thought, My own style• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Alone in pain its Christmas I miss you once again
The lights and happy songs wont take away the pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Some moment filled my mind
when you told me you were leaving• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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