So this is my 14th contest, and I want something different. I'm gonna give you a quote, and you're gonna write a poem. I don't want a lovey dovey poem. I want a heart breaking tear making poem. I don't care if it's dark...just write from your heart. I don't want fake poems, and I have the write to delete. I want emotion, I don't mind imagery and a good rhyme scheme is cool, but if it doesn't have raw emotion, I will delete or I won't delete, it depends. I want good poems. Prewrites are allowed, but fresh are better. You can enter more than once, but don't waste my time on a stupid poem. Here's the quote
I loved you like nothing could ever be lost. I gave you my heart without a price or a cost. The mistake i made when i thought it was true..was sayin three words "I Love you."
I loved you like nothing could ever be lost. I gave you my heart without a price or a cost. The mistake i made when i thought it was true..was sayin three words "I Love you."
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 11, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 250, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 14 people
- Final notes: Okay, so I had an overwhelming number of entries and most of them were really good. I added points to gold silver and bronze so Congrats to the winners, and everyone who made it to the preliminary finals got an honorable mention. This was because if I really liked the poem, then i would add it. The top 3 were my favs cuz they had a great rhyme scheme, a natural flow, and I could feel the emotion in them. Thankyou for entering my contest
Contest Winners
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I find it kind of funny.
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How can you say you love me / While you're making me feel this way / You talk to me like I'm worthless / It only gets worse every day / Lovby DenyMyLove 18 lines, 18 comments, on Jul 19 12:05 AM 2007. In Sad, Pain, Contest, My own style, My life, Longing, Sadness, Love
Bronze trophy winner
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Love lost, soars upon dark wings.
Into despair, with foul things.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4305807, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Its pathetic really; all these thoughts in my mind.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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That glimmer in my eye Is because of you• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I used to love you...
with everything I held inside.by babygirl2582 28 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 30 5:56 PM 2008. In Lost love, Personal, Escape
Honorable mention
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I loved you like nothing could ever be lost. I gave you my heart without a price or a cost. The mistake I made when I thought it was true..by Viyanna Rosemarie 42 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 30 12:33 AM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Dark, Love, Life, Contest Honorable mention
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He's a player
I'm a fool• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Entries [79]
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Not a day goes by that i dont think of you...wish for you I dont think you know how deeply i lust for you...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I'd like to believe you've found something
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You're my best friend ever
We share a bond of blood, boys, and so much more...by LullabyxxDreamer 31 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 6 10:55 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Can't you see me sitting
right across from youby Word Artisan 72 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 10 1:32 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
From the moment my eyes found your sweet face, I was smitten, enveloped, left in a daze.by x--nocturnia--x 37 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 28 8:41 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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I was so in love that I was blind
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I loved him,
I really did.by XxAngelOfPoisonxX 21 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 6 4:55 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
How can I have you
When you are with her?by xox-emma-xox 18 lines, 15 comments, on Mar 8 6:59 PM 2008. In Hope, Life, Love, Personal, Sad, Lost in thought, My life, Longing, Dedication• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Be still the hatred in my heart The last embraceby dabpunx 26 lines, 7 comments, on May 20 2:04 PM 2008. In Love, loss, acceptance, emotions, relationship, breakups, hate• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by EmilyNicole 49 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 16 4:30 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I let you in again, but only to get hurt again.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My heart aches for you
entwined in our yesterdays• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
This is why I can't believe I cared,
simply because you are unbelievable.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There's gonna be hell to pay as I walk through the doorby Amorous Arms 15 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 28 7:23 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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i sit here every day
in my chair thinkingby Word Artisan 32 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 28 2:53 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Remember how we used to talk for hours on the phone? No?by AloneForever- 33 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 28 12:46 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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You look but you do not see You listen but you do not hearby brokenlove-heart 14 lines, 5 comments, on May 2 9:22 PM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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the final chapter in the saga of Will Porter.. we hope• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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When two people love each other they walk in step.
They don't even notice as their breath matchesby dabpunx 11 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 11 2:03 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
How do I explain all the feelings running through my head
all the emotions dancing inside my heart• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I wish I could tell you how I felt when you said those things to me.by crimson-river 33 lines, 5 comments, on May 15 6:58 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The birches are balding on Amity Hill.
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I'd sugar kiss your lips
and from time to time
I'd rid your heart from the bruisesby Rele anmwe 36 lines, 98 comments, on Jun 17 12:42 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Sterile white linen sheets Respirator beeps• Commented on by judge.
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This Love you give to me
Is my lifes esctacy• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Give me one reason to come back to you tell me why I should trust you today
After all that you have put me through I doubt there will ever• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by SincerelyMegan 126 lines, 17 comments, on Feb 20 7:32 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Had to get a knife and cut off my wrist
With so much bitterness,by Rele anmwe 21 lines, 15 comments, on Oct 30 3:38 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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swift and to the point
i press the blade into my armby HereComesTheSun 72 lines, 5 comments, on May 12 4:59 PM 2008. In Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Society, Other, Dedication, Escape, Suicide, Teen issues• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I thought we went together like the moon and the sun,
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He whispers again right into my ear..
Saying the same words but his voice is no longer hisby AnanCat 11 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 1 6:30 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i saw you today and i know you saw me toby tiredxofxsunsets 12 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 18 5:43 PM 2008. In Lost love, Depression, Loss, Sadness, Teenage thinking• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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We met at a friend's disco, a few years,by goatbreath 77 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 29 4:11 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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Inspirational quote.
Nice One!
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