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You are just a dot in the Cosmos...you are here...Unknown

Please write a poem inspired by this quote.

Around 20 lines.

No rules.

Thank you so much.

Contest is Over

Contest was judged on July 12, 2008
Rewards: Gold: 300
Final notes:
Thank you so much for the wonderful entries in my contest...You all were amazing..My congrats to the winners....

Contest Winners

Original Sin

Trapped in the chains
of this Earth bound life

by BluesMan 14 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 11 2:03 PM 2008. In Contest, Spiritual, Angst
Gold trophy winner

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Prayering Violin

Made to inspire poetry
rather than to create it,

by Jalalbad 19 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 28 4:01 PM 2008. In Personal, Spiritual, Thoughts, Contest
Silver trophy winner

• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Guide

Oh God,
I can see myself in your world,

by paulcreates 38 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 28 10:07 AM 2008. In Contest, Spiritual, Inspirational, Humanity
Bronze trophy winner

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Entries [12]

1 - 12 of 12

Where love resides

by The Pole Star 21 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 28 10:14 AM 2008

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Purgatory

by shannon.green 10 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 28 1:12 PM 2008. In Other, Weird

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Predestined

" One speck of sand on the seashore, yet You have a DNA entirely my own.....What a wondrous God you are!"

by Rose Angel 22 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 28 1:59 PM 2008. In Contest, Life, Love, Nature, Spiritual, Thoughts

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[ you are here in this cosmos ]

you are here in this cosmos
unknown within the blink of an

by jayson48 14 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 28 4:39 PM 2008. In Thought

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hearing my heart--------------------

Are you there in existence at all this was the question a day before

by Purush 13 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 28 7:15 PM 2008

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More Than Here

Would we have ever traveled
if we believed our wings would fall,

by Dalaney 16 lines, 21 comments, on Jun 30 8:08 PM 2008. In Spiritual, Hope, Life, Contemporary, Humanity

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The only dot that counts

One million billion stars out there
Enclosed in empty space

by cricketjeff 29 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 1 2:26 PM 2008

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~You are here ~

Listen to the sounds within your heart
I may then lift my veils

by Amarige 45 lines, 17 comments, on Jul 3 8:39 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Spiritual, Love, Nature, Other, Life, Contest

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Tapping Into the Divine

If by chance
I tap into the Divine

by kareneisenlord 11 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 4 6:56 PM 2008. In Contest, Hope, Life, Spiritual, Cosmos, Thoughts, Personal

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rhondasail
June 28, 2008
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Thanks for letting me have the visual...sometimes I forget where I am! ...LOL...I love the concept for this prompt. It made me smile because it is like those directories in the mall when you are trying to find the ladies room, or a way out, or where you parked your car...Thanks for the smiles Rhonda