So lately, I've been feeling like the world is a bit... blah. People only go from one emotion to another. Sad to happy to angry and that's about it. What about everything else out there?
Make me feel something. Any emotion you can think of, and magnify it in a lovely poem.
Pretty much anything that evokes emotion is what I'm looking for. HMs will be added later on, depending.
RULES:
no retarded typing
one entry each
be creative! There are a billion emotions humans can feel, ranging from pity to guilt, shame to love, fear to stress, apathy to anxiety. Pick your fave or least fave and show me what'cha got.
Make me feel something. Any emotion you can think of, and magnify it in a lovely poem.
Pretty much anything that evokes emotion is what I'm looking for. HMs will be added later on, depending.
RULES:
no retarded typing
one entry each
be creative! There are a billion emotions humans can feel, ranging from pity to guilt, shame to love, fear to stress, apathy to anxiety. Pick your fave or least fave and show me what'cha got.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 14, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 150, Honorable mention: 10 people
- Final notes: Oh man, thanks to each and every one of your for entering, and my apologies for it taking a while. Anyhow, every single entry was freaking amazing! You have NO idea how hard it was choose! I wish I could give everybody an HM, but I just don't have enough points... But anyways, I'm off to Europe for the summer, and thanks again for entering! Everyone, have a kickass summer!
Contest Winners
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The cracks in the world's epicentre,
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Refusal to accept what
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Dehydrating from the lack of breath;
my worth is an open book of regrets.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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It drips from your mouth
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There is a peace in nature,
Often we don't see.by Pisces rainbow 16 lines, 15 comments, on Jun 6 11:06 AM 2008. In Spiritual, Contest, Nature
Honorable mention
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [65]
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When will you stop your relentless deeds?
Can't you see it's all unfair?by Powered by Tofu 28 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 11 10:34 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There was once a moment sometime ago,
you were sleepingby AudreyEvans 26 lines, 23 comments, on Jun 18 3:57 PM 2008. In Senual Sensum, Love, Personal, Relationships, Memories, Sexual, Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Time, it flies Faster than you or me• Commented on by judge.
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tomorrow as i wake on your pillow there won't beby earthangel33 31 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 16 12:59 AM 2008. In Life, Love, Sad, Romance, Lost in thought, Longing• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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the guilt will be the thing to choke me.
regret for somehow tricking them into believing i was woth concern.by Candy Morphine 75 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 29 3:02 AM 2008. In Angst, Dark, Sad, Personal, Emo, Depression, Sadness, Loss• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I have sat beside the riverby Maldronah 26 lines, 51 comments, on Sep 6 9:58 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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They were all there
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Anger frustration,
it's all the same,by Philleebee8 11 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 11 4:07 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Blindness of the heart, Blindness of the mind,by XxAngelOfPoisonxX 9 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 20 1:26 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I can romance your sences with tales of love
I can bring you songs from the gods above,
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only me could dance with the beat, in the beat and still keep my broken sanity...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Cold beneath the casket
Framed existence a mockeryby Rogue-Poet 31 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 20 9:10 AM 2008. In Thoughts, Other, Contest, Abstract, My own style• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I feel like the world is falling apart
I realize it's only myselfby im dead - go away 19 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 26 6:11 PM 2007. In Life, Personal, Thoughts, Depressed• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by after-silence 13 lines, 13 comments, on Jul 2 10:40 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My cup is full of jealousy. I try to skim itby Judith Chandler 16 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 10 11:43 AM 2008. In Contest• Commented on by judge.
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Run faster and faster, loving the pain For my legs and stomach are aching againby BloodFader 7 lines, 3 comments, on May 27 12:35 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Fallings not the problem.
It's getting back up,by live-laugh-love 23 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 18 7:29 PM 2008. In Weird, Sad, Lost in thought, Teenage thinking, Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Shattered
Tattered• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It's plain to see the wind benieth the trees. Your addicted to the drug of lustby Emerald Rain 10 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 24 3:17 PM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My hand is yours Just for you to holdby FakeRaygun 15 lines, 11 comments, on Jun 17 12:59 AM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Not so many miles to separate our smiles its that feeling that digs deeper into sorrowby sunny22saturday 14 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 10 3:53 PM 2008. In Life• Commented on by judge.
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red lipstick on, ready to kiss
make up on, she doesn't shoot to miss• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You've gone somewhere I can not find you,
you've gone beyond the stars.by The Tmnts Sister 17 lines, 14 comments, on Jun 15 5:41 PM 2008. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Maybe he was right. Maybe I shouldn't jump.by Moonchaser 50 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 30 7:52 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Release me from this prison.
release me from this hell.by the evil angel 18 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 8 1:35 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I adore the way your fingers mingle with particular strands of my hair. I love it when they delve into the further reaches of my scalp and return smelling a bit like perfume-• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The thoughts that go through this once lonely skull of mine
They never used to help meby coolkid69 34 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 30 5:28 PM 2008. In Everlasting Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by ImmatureRebel 29 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 3 4:02 PM 2008. In Humor• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You stole my heart Somehow managed to release it from its dark clutchesby Raptur3 24 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 9 10:42 PM 2008. In Personal i guess• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I was told you were going to come, / into my life, my heart was fool of joy, / it did not matter to me what sex you were, / as long as you• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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asdfsdfasdfasdfhdfgawer• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Occasionally this falling feels like floating A dream of cascade starlight• Commented on by judge.
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I lost my place in this world It’s getting so messed upby WakingRose 29 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 7 11:12 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I look at him
And my heart fluttersby Midnight Rose 11 41 lines, 16 comments, on Jun 30 7:26 PM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Dark Warrior
Blackness covers all that I see
and all that I touch.
No feelings of pain just sorrow.
My hand loses grip of the sword I held.
And I turn to become a true shadow.
Many lives my blade has taken.
As many as it has has protected.
My blood covered lips speak no words.
As I stare into my blades reflection.
Like all days the sun has set.
With darkness all around me.
Just one difference I see tonight.
The sun will not rise in the morning.
Bright and cold the flash of steel.
Alone I roam over desolate fields.
My sword I need no longer.
The evening wind will carry me home.
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How's the judging of this contest coming along?
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it's alright, if you're in the contest, i'm sorry it's coming along kind of slowly! I'm leaving for europe soon, and I'm trying to cram this into my time as much as possible.
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Thanks for the Gold, appreciated.
Well done to the others as well.
~ S ~
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