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pen beautifuly

dont you think you should give your dark brains a bit of break ,use poetry to it best and pen something beautiful ,something wish soothes your nevers , something you would want to read again and again and again ...something that would make you take a deep relaxing breathe
something that would make you want to live your life from the very start.
i guess you dont have any doubts left in your mind now

rules-
1).Make it beautiful , use imagery , metaphor and similies.
2).Rest the regular rules follow- no chat speak blah blah blah
3).Mention what made you write this piece in the A.N, your inspiration etc

best of luck
enjoy yourself and yes appriciate others work, they may like reading yoours

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 12
  • Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    i enjoyed reading each and every piece i ish i had some omre trophies to give but the gold and silver and bronze deserve their share.
    thanks for sharing
    everones a winner!!!

Contest Winners

  1. Aesthetics
    Their grace I may admire but not begrudge:
    The trees were never made for me to judge.
    by Peripatetic 61 lines, 17 comments, on Jul 8 7:52 PM. In Nature, My life, Inspirational
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Can You Be Just for Me
    I want to be a leaf folded inside bark,
    by Cannonsfire 23 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 27 7:06 PM. In Love, Hope
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Let the Violins Hum
    im deaf to you and your words
    deaf to the violins hum.
    by BlueOasis 29 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 29 7:05 PM. In Thoughts, Love, Hope, Personal
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Let me give you my perspective
    Six billion people wake up, most days one sun rises, five fingers brush my face
    by fullfathomfive 59 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 11 2:15 PM
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Grandmas Sunshine
    If children as they grew older would sit with their grandmas for a while .They could tell them stories of their childhood that would sure
    by storiesuntold 30 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 30 9:33 PM. In Love
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. Nightly Delight
    by NooNiThEWitcH 36 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 27 5:20 PM. In Nature, Fantasy, Other. Reward
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. Into the night.
    Meditate upon this place As sun shine sets in showers,
    by jossiemarie 21 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 11 4:20 AM
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. Summer Calm
    The sun shines,
    And cool blue reflections skate across the surface.
    by chilled 15 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 27 3:29 PM. In Nature, Relaxation, Thoughts, Happiness, Self
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. inner beauty
    by ichigosama 13 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 27 3:14 PM. In Adult, Life, Society, Personal, Thoughts, Hope, Inspirational, Freewrite, My life
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  10. Breathe With Me
    Breath with me I take in the freshness
    by Swan song 34 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 28 6:49 AM
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  11. A Wonderful Journey
    I see my life as a wonderful journey Whisking by as a leaf the wind takes on a journey
    by NurseyPoo 9 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 11 11:47 AM. In Contest, Life, Nature, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • Lions Melody
    July 11
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    Sunshine

    the numbness has melted, I can finally feel
    My heart once cold, beats steadily in my chest
    My soul is warm, as if the sun is shining down on me
    and i know my spirit is finally free
    Dreading the darkness no more, I step into the light; never daring to look back
    Familiar faces, familiar places are waiting there for me
    I embrace this new found state of being,
    savoring its sweetness; although I know it will never fade