Prompt: Bedroom Eyes
Not looking for hard core erotic but sensual is fine...
Imagery and Metaphor work well for me.
▲→ Standard Rules Apply...
▼→ Free verse prefered
▲→ No rhyming unless it's internal
▼→ I have a short attention span so keep it brief 
▲→ Prose is ok but I will mention again I have a short attention span
☺→ Points will increase depending on quality
☺→ I reserve the right to remove and piece
☺→ Think outside of the box please and not inside the obvious
☺→ I comment constructively and try to never be rude
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☺☺☺ Have fun and give me something yummy ☺☺☺
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 15, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: Sorry I did not comment all...time is short right now. Just know that I read them all and rearranged them so many times as far as order that my head was spinning
They are pretty much in order from gold to honorable as far as how much I like/loved them. Excellent excellent entries!
gold - the musician's lure...wonderful read!
silver - racoon...great out of the box thinking on this one
bronze - clouded mirror...beautiful words to inspire.
all HM's are in order of the favorite but they are all great!
Thanks you guys rock!!
Becky
Contest Winners
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Long ago
we lost ourselvesby PsydewaysTears 25 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 26 10:27 PM 2008. In Nature, Life, Hope
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Exploration of an aroma's attraction, eye's yearning for a captured prey.• Viewed by judge. [remove]
Entries [15]
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Bedroom eyes spy me and break my will.by Shancy Fayre 12 lines, on Jun 26 9:29 AM 2008. In Contest• Viewed by judge.
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by Athena of Starlite 27 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 26 5:25 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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i lay in compleat content my love has made love to me• Viewed by judge.
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I sit in my bedroom. Its quiet and dark.by darkeningangel 8 lines, on Jul 15 1:22 AM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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Comments
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Oh! if only I didn't write in rhyme!!!!
best of luck with the contest!!
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Thanks for the gold!
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Thank you for the honor and for hosting a contest that welcomed a deeper meaning to sensual!
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Congratulations to all the winners and thanks for a wonderful contest.
Love and Light
Frozentearz





