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Death Valley, CA/ 20/30 lines

This is an image found on google of Death Valley, CA. It is acres of sand and striated rock. The silence there is deafening.

Write me a verse in 30 lines more or less using imagery and metaphors. Use the photo as a prompt.

When one walks the dunes, after a gust of wind, all footprints are gone. Millions visit this amazing area every year.

Creativity will definitely be rewarded.
Please use spell check and proper punctuation.
I prefer free verse, or forms, but if you can rhyme well, please do so!

It is courteous to comment on others poems.

I will judge as soon as all spots are filled, if it is before the end of the contest date.

Linda

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 5, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 400, Bronze: 300, Honorable mention: 8 people
  • Final notes:
    God Bless you ALL for writing some of the finest poems I have read in a contest hosted by me, so far. There was NOT ONE POEM, not worthy of a trophy. All were FANTASTIC. I will be leaving the site for a month of two,and I will post a column tomorrow, explaining why, and how you can all reach me if you want to! I sure hope so! Thank each one of you for writing yours hearts out on this, my favorite desert!

    Linda

Contest Winners

  1. The sand writes my soul
    by penman 35 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 25 3:58 PM 2008. In Other
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Dry our arid earth,
    Sun-drenched fear to quench,
    by Reptile Lady 31 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 22 5:25 PM 2008. In Nature, Thoughts
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. by AliceinPoetryLand 27 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 1 8:40 AM 2008. In Contest, Pictuer Inspired
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Days mold into night
    where are we to go
    by Abe 1 18 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 24 5:54 AM 2008. In Life, Pain
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. The desert seems deserted,
    and silence rules the land.
    by Beret55 31 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 26 4:26 PM 2008. In Humor
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. Silent blows the drifting sand In this place of lost souls
    by SoulWhispher 16 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 27 9:58 PM 2008. In Thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. The last time I looked you were still with me, for a moment at least;
    Despite all the talk I still do not believe that it happened that wa
    by tarcus 16 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 5 6:59 PM 2008. In Contest, Spiritual, Nature, Thoughts, Life
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. As I walk along in the sand
    I am keenly aware of the contrasts
    by DolphinLass 34 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 5 7:38 AM 2008. In Thoughts, Life, Nature
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. Are you here, have you ever been? The sun beats down and the wind blows
    by capricorn2645 30 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 5 11:50 AM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  10. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4397599, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  11. Sands of time fly on the dust devil' back
    to create patterns of play
    by Dark Otter 56 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 5 4:20 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • penman gold member
    July 5, 2008
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    Thank you for the honor of the gold. Congratulations to all the winners.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    July 6, 2008
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    Thank you ever so much for the bronze. I am thrilled
    Congratulatins to the other winners and thank you for hosting.
    Gaylene


  • DolphinLass silver member
    July 6, 2008
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    congrats all and thanks for HM